shaybo
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Post by shaybo on Aug 23, 2010 21:32:43 GMT -5
It's going to be a while for me to post. I just need to think of ideas.
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shaybo
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Post by shaybo on Aug 30, 2010 19:52:04 GMT -5
Arrrrgh Iam so stuck on this story.
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shaybo
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Post by shaybo on Sept 30, 2010 23:17:21 GMT -5
Damian looks at Keith and Paul, "But I didn't do anything. Why would I want to kill my own sister?" Paul speaks up, "Maybe sibling rivalry. You can tell us down at the station." Keith reads Damian his rights., "Damian McGinty you have the right to remain silent. If you give up the right to remain silent anything you say can and will be used in a court of law. You have a right to a lawyer. If you can't afford one, one will be given to you free of charge. Do you understand these rights?" Damian nods as his face pales and is taken away in hand cuffs. Next Paul hands over the computer, "Here you can have The Vic's computer."
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Post by celticbear on Sept 30, 2010 23:24:56 GMT -5
Good Shay you finaly figured out how to put Plan protect Damo into action. I hope your writers block is gone. Update Soon.
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Post by orinocoflow on Sept 30, 2010 23:30:04 GMT -5
havent read this in a long time! update soon!
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Post by CelticLass91 on Sept 30, 2010 23:46:39 GMT -5
YAY! UPDATES!!!
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shaybo
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Post by shaybo on Oct 1, 2010 17:27:33 GMT -5
Thanks guys. Paul and Keith takes Damian to the police station. As soon as they get him inside and take him to an interrigation room. Next Paul takes off the cuffs and have Damian sit down, "We're sorry we had to do that Damian, but we couldn't take the chance of having the real murderer get a hold of you." Damian looks a little confused and relieved, "Well if you didn't think I did it why did you arrest me?" "Because little bro they know that there's a mole." Everyone turns to find Zara standing in the door way.
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mandy4525
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Long may the Thunder roll. Just like the Energizer Bunny! =D
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Post by mandy4525 on Oct 1, 2010 17:55:21 GMT -5
AHHH!!! Now that's a heck of a twist and cliffy!! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!
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Post by celticbear on Oct 1, 2010 21:08:25 GMT -5
What a Minute Shay I thought Damo had only one Sister! Zara! Who was the victim at the start of the story. So I hope in the next Update you explain how Dominique fit's into the picture! UPDATE SOON!
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shaybo
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Post by shaybo on Oct 1, 2010 22:37:12 GMT -5
Thanks CB. Damian gets up, Runs to Zara, and gives her a hug. Then pushes her away, "If you're not dead then who was that lying on the floor?" Damian that was our sister. My identical twin sister Sara. She wanted to help me trap the mole by pretending to be me, but it backed fired and she is dead." Paul looked at Zara, "Maybe not. We gave them a computer that looks exactly like yours, but it doesn't have your schematics for your weapons, or the uniform. What if some how we "leak" the information that that computer is a fake and that we have the real computer here." So Paul tells them his idea.
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Post by celticbear on Oct 1, 2010 23:25:34 GMT -5
Okay Shay now I understand! Update when you can!
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Post by orinocoflow on Oct 2, 2010 19:04:02 GMT -5
Dominique does not need to be in the story, I don't think.
not only are they twins, but they are also similar in name--Sara and Zara. lol
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shaybo
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Post by shaybo on Nov 6, 2010 15:31:26 GMT -5
Trying to figure out who the bad guy is going to be. I don't want it to be any of the Celtic Thunder crew. Ugh any ideas?
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Post by orinocoflow on Nov 7, 2010 16:48:26 GMT -5
is Declan in the story yet? or maybe just a random character...
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shaybo
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Post by shaybo on Nov 7, 2010 17:43:56 GMT -5
No He's not Orinoco. Not a bad idea.
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