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Post by shaybo on Aug 6, 2010 18:26:56 GMT -5
He was sitting at his desk filing the last of his paper work. When he heard the trill of his phone, "Detective Paul Byrom here. Yes I see we'll be right there." Hangs up, "What's up Paul?" Paul looks over at his partner, "Dead body was found Ryan."
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Post by Deleted on Aug 6, 2010 18:33:26 GMT -5
Ooh! I like this! Please continue!
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Post by celticbear on Aug 6, 2010 19:00:39 GMT -5
Shay I like the start. Please continue the story ASAP.
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Post by shaybo on Aug 6, 2010 19:45:07 GMT -5
They arrive at the scene, and walk into the victims apartment where they find her on the floor. A pool of blood surrounds her Auburn hair, her eyes closed as if she were sleeping, "Ok what's up?" The M.E. looks at Paul, "Cause of death was a blow to the head. No signs of assault." Paul looks over at Ryan, "Ok let's see here. You're good at this Ryan what do you think happened?" "Ok here goes Vic comes home gets comfortable hears knock on door. Answers it then turns around and wham a knock on the head."
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Post by celticbear on Aug 6, 2010 19:52:22 GMT -5
Shay I am loving it! Paul and Ryan as detectives Classic! I hope you bring the rest of the Lads along for the ride.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 6, 2010 20:04:10 GMT -5
hmm i like it so far
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Post by orinocoflow on Aug 7, 2010 19:50:24 GMT -5
interesting, like it so far...but more detail!
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Post by shaybo on Aug 9, 2010 21:06:07 GMT -5
Paul and Ryan look around the apartment to see if anything's missing. Paul takes the vic's bed room. While Ryan takes the den/second bedroom. Paul looks around the sparten and yet tastefully decorated bed room. He looks in a music box to find jewelery, most of it of the costume veriety. Next he went through her closet to see if she had a hidden cubby hole, but didn't find one and then her night stand where he found some romance novels, and not much else. After that he went to her bureau drawers, but before he could go through it he heard Paul say something, "What was that Ryan?" "I said I found some thing." Paul went in to the other room, "What did you find Ryan?"
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Post by celticbear on Aug 9, 2010 22:16:43 GMT -5
OOH! The Plot thickens! Shay continue when you can.
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Post by CelticLass91 on Aug 9, 2010 22:24:05 GMT -5
Oh, I love it! Paul and Ryan detectives? I LOVE IT! Can't wait for the next update!
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shaybo
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Post by shaybo on Aug 10, 2010 14:12:34 GMT -5
Thanks glad you like it.
Paul enters the Den where Ryan is, "See over at the desk where there's dust? And then theres a rectangular spot where's there no dust?" Paul nods, "Well it looks like there might've been a laptop there." "MMMM very interesting." Just as they were about to leave they here a loud thump comming from the closet. Paul looks at Ryan, "Didn't you check the closet?" Ryan blushed slightly at the rookie mistake he made. They both draw their weapons as Paul barks out, "Al right whoever's in there drop your weapon and come out slowly." They see the closet door open as a base ball bat is thrown out, and next comes a curly brown haired young man with blue eyes and a scared expression on his face in his arms he's holding a laptop.
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Post by CelticLass91 on Aug 10, 2010 15:35:31 GMT -5
OOOO!!!!! O.o I wonder who the young man is! Thanks for the update Shay!
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Post by celticbear on Aug 10, 2010 20:14:52 GMT -5
I agree with CC91! Shay update soon,I want to mind out who the mystery man is!
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Post by orinocoflow on Aug 11, 2010 0:16:29 GMT -5
update soon!
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shaybo
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Post by shaybo on Aug 11, 2010 17:15:39 GMT -5
"It's ok we're Police. I'm Paul and this is my partner Ryan. What's your name?" He looks at them and their ID's, "I'm Damien and she was my sister." They look at him and tell him to sit down, "Can you tell us what happened?"
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