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Post by orinocoflow on Nov 7, 2010 21:42:20 GMT -5
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Post by shaybo on Nov 8, 2010 16:46:29 GMT -5
Paul let's it leak that the Police have the computer in the evidence locker, and that the FBI can't have it back until after the trial. Then they wait until some one takes the bait. The next day some one comes in claiming to be from the District Atterneys office, and asks to go down to the Evidence Locker. The police officer looks at him, "You don't look familiar." The guy looks at the officer, "That's because I'm new." As the officer unlocks it the man grabs his gun and with the butt strikes him in the head. The officer goes down with a thud. The man looks down at him, "I lied I don't work for the D.A.'s office." He walks into the Locker and just as he's about to search he hears a voice, "Ok DeClan. Why'd you kill Zara, and how much are you going to sell those secrets? Then another voice chimes in, "Or should he say tried to kill me, but killed my sister instead."
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Post by orinocoflow on Nov 8, 2010 20:45:55 GMT -5
i had read half hte paragraph before i realized that paul's plan ended at the first sentence, lol.
DeClan, haha. gangster, anyone?
updates soon!
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Post by celticbear on Nov 8, 2010 23:54:51 GMT -5
Shay how could you make CT's sweet adorable Drummer Declan the bad Guy! Oh well nice Update anyways. Can't wait to see what Declan has to say for himself! UPDATE when you can!
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Post by shaybo on Nov 9, 2010 17:31:25 GMT -5
Sorry about that. DeClan grabs Zara and holds her hostage, "You guys are going to give me that computer, and it better be the real one, or she dies. No tricks either or a bullet goes through her pretty little head." Paul hands him the computer, but before he could go any where Ryan comes up behind him and puts a gun to his head, "Ok DeClan put that gun down and let the lady go." Declan gets destracted and that gives Zara a chance to elbow him in the gut. He lets go slightly and Zara stomps on his foot, and then she runs. Once she's safely out of the way Ryan pounces on top of him and arrests him. While he's placing the cuffs on him Paul reads him his rights.
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Post by celticbear on Nov 9, 2010 21:04:55 GMT -5
Way to go Shay! I'm so Glad Zara got a chance to prove she can rescue herself! Okay who gets the girl? UPDATE SOON!
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Post by orinocoflow on Nov 9, 2010 22:25:24 GMT -5
whoa, wait, what? i think i need to go back and read again from the beginning.
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Post by shaybo on Dec 28, 2010 20:44:35 GMT -5
Ryan and Paul take DeClan up to the interagation room. They sit him down and Paul sits a cross from him, "Ok DeClan why'd you do it?" DeClan just sits and glares like a spoiled child that got caught with his hands in the cookie jar, "Won't talk? Ok I'll call your buddies down at the FBI. I'm sure that they'd love to hear that their co-worker is a traitor."Paul looks at Zara, "Zara what do they do to traitors?" "Well it's not very pretty. That's for sure." Then she goes up to DeClan aqnd sits next to him, "De what made you do this? Were you being blackmailed? Did they have a member of your family? What Why? Why won't you tell us?" Zara slams her fist on the counter and when she does DeClan shakes his head, "What happened? Where am I?"
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Post by orinocoflow on Dec 28, 2010 21:06:08 GMT -5
havent seen an update in ages!
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Post by shaybo on Dec 28, 2010 21:49:34 GMT -5
Sorry about that. DeClan looks at Zara, "Zara we thought you were dead." Everyone just stares at him, "What just happened?" Paul looks at Ryan, "Ry go get Dom." Then he adds, "Dom is our criminal psychologist. She helps us get into the minds of serial killers." Ryan brings Dom in, "Hey Paul what's up?" So Paul fills her in on what's going on, "Hmm I can't be sure, but he might've been hypnotized. Guys do you mind if I spend some time with him alone?" They all leave and go into another room where they watch Dom do her thing, "Ok DeClan what's the last thing you remember?" DeClan scrinches his eyes, "All I remember is being in my office. Then I get a phone call and the next thing I know is I'm here." Dom looks at DeClan, "Do you mind if I put you under? I want to help you remember the missing hours." DeClan let's her put him under. While she's doing that he starts to have memories come to the surface.
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Post by celticbear on Dec 28, 2010 21:49:40 GMT -5
Shay! love the update! Let me guess, Declan has been hypnotizied and has no Idea what he has done! Zara slaming her fist on the table broke the trance! I wonder who the Mystery Puppet-Master is? UPDATE WHEN YOU CAN!
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Post by AmbeeBee on Dec 28, 2010 22:45:44 GMT -5
I LOVE this story! Update soon please?
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Post by shaybo on Dec 29, 2010 17:16:10 GMT -5
DeClan tells Dom while under hypnosis that he was kidnapped, tortured, and then hypnotized. The trigger to activate the idea was a whistle and the trigger to bring him out of it was a slam of a fist on a hard surface. He was to bring the computer to his handler and then he was to leave a note saying that he was the mole and that he killed Zara, but he felt so guilty that he couldn't live with him self any more. Dom tries to get him to tell him who did it, but is blocked by a mental wall. She tries every trick possible, but it's no use. She brings him out of it and tells him that he'll remember everything, and that it's ok to remember. Ryan, Paul and Zara come back into the room. When he sees Zara he starts to cry. "Oh God Zara Iam soooo sorry."
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Post by celticbear on Dec 29, 2010 22:24:18 GMT -5
Shay! This was good! I feel so sorry for Declan! I knew my Favorite CT Drummer could not be a bad Guy! Now you just need to figure out how to get Declan to reveal who the MasterMind is! I hope Zara forgives him! UPDATE WHEN YOU CAN!
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Post by shaybo on Jan 1, 2011 17:39:25 GMT -5
DeClan tells Paul, Ryan, and Zara about what happened, "It was my day off and I was running some errands. Well on my way home I was stopped at an accident, or so I thought. I got out to see if they needed any help. The next thing I know Iam knocked out. When I come to Iam in a ware house and tied to a chair, and it was there that Iam questioned and tortured. They made sure I couldn't see them by shinning bright lights in my face, and they disguised their voices. They made sure I didn't get anything to eat, nor did I get any sleep, and I lost all sense of time. Finally one day or night someone came to me and pricked my arm. Then I felt a sense of free falling and then I woke up to find myself in my apartment with no memory of what happened." Zara sat there and then a light bulb went off, "Someone called the office claiming to be your doctor saying that you had a bad case of the flu." Zara hugs DeClan, "Oh De if we'd known we could've saved you."
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