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Post by CelticLass91 on Aug 18, 2010 19:44:47 GMT -5
Loved the updates!!!! I can totally see Neil as the computer 'geek' per-say. In his twitter updates he is always talking about some new gadget thing for his music. Can't wait for the next one Shay!
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Post by shaybo on Aug 18, 2010 20:27:42 GMT -5
Thanks, but I forgot one other Lad George. But I don't want to make him a bad guy.
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Post by CelticLass91 on Aug 18, 2010 21:11:24 GMT -5
hhhhmmmmm?
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Post by celticbear on Aug 18, 2010 22:25:50 GMT -5
Wait a minute I thought George was Keith's FBI Partner!
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Post by shaybo on Aug 19, 2010 16:03:36 GMT -5
Thanks CB you're right.
Two cups of coffee and a half hour later he gets into Zara's omputer, "Hmmmmm." He thinks to himself, "What were you hiding that got yourself killed?" Then he finds it. He grabs the phone and dials Paul's extension, "Yeah Paul you need to get down here ASAP." Paul and Ryan run down the stairs to find Neil blabbering like an idiot, "Neil calm down what's the matter?" Neil takes a deep breath, "Ok sorry guys. " Your murder victim was not only working on one project, but two. She found out that there's a mole working in her agency and that the mole was selling secrets to Al Queda. She was also working on a top secret weapon, but I couldn't get in to see what it was." She has a fire wall that is totally unhackable. I've tried everything that I could think of to get through, but nothing worked." Paul and Ryan look at each other, "Try her brother's name. It's Damien." Neil types in her brother's name, and up comes some thing that the boys have never seen.
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Post by CelticLass91 on Aug 19, 2010 17:14:07 GMT -5
OOOHHHH What is it!?!
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Post by orinocoflow on Aug 19, 2010 17:15:36 GMT -5
love the cliffhanger! but...Al Queda? Seriously? Dont we have NCIS for that type of story? sorry, its just bugging me.
update soon!
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Post by shaybo on Aug 19, 2010 19:32:27 GMT -5
Well what do you suggest orinoco? I mean we're friends with just about everyone.
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Post by orinocoflow on Aug 19, 2010 23:54:47 GMT -5
dont know...i'll think about it, get back to you ASAP. keep on posting, though, its probably just me. story is interesting.
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Post by celticbear on Aug 20, 2010 0:09:16 GMT -5
Shay I like who you chose as the enemy, It is so with the times we live in. So keep posting those updates, and try to make them longer if you could.
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Post by shaybo on Aug 20, 2010 18:05:20 GMT -5
They find a schematic of a weapon that looks like it belongs in a sci-fi movie. They also schematics for a uniform that is not only bullet proof, but fire and bomb proof as well, "So this and the mole was afraid that the vic knew who he or she is and that's what got her killed." Paul and Ryan ran up the stairs to Phil's office, "Phil we found out what was on the vic's computer. We also know why she was killed." So they explained what they found on the computer. When they finished Phil looked at them, "Ok good work you guys. Now we just have to figure out who the mole/murderer is." Paul gets a look on his face, "We've got to get Damien out of there. He's danger." Phil looks at him, "But how are we going to do that with out alerting the murderer?" Ryan comes up with an idea, "What if we get another computer that looks like hers and we put everything on there except the schematics and the mole. Then we return it and bring Damien in saying that she murdered his sister, and if they ask we tell them that there was nothing very important on the computer." Phil smiles, "I like it good idea Ryan. Ok go ahead and do it." They grab another computer and Neil made a copy of almost everything that was on the vic's computer and placed it in the decoy. Next they went to the FBI and walked in, "Damien McGinty you're under arrest for the murder of your sister."
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Post by orinocoflow on Aug 20, 2010 18:10:10 GMT -5
wow, awesome twist!
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Post by celticbear on Aug 20, 2010 22:44:50 GMT -5
Shay great update! and what a way to get Damo out of danger without tipping off the Mole!
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Post by shaybo on Aug 21, 2010 10:27:54 GMT -5
Thanks guys. At first I didn't like where the story was going, but now it's taken on a life of it's own.
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Post by CelticLass91 on Aug 21, 2010 19:15:37 GMT -5
OH I Love it!
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