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Post by CelticLass91 on Aug 11, 2010 17:47:43 GMT -5
OH poor Damian!!!!! Hope they find that evil person!
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Post by celticbear on Aug 11, 2010 22:44:08 GMT -5
Shay would you please cut out with the short updates. we would like a much longer one. But we will take any Update you are willing to give us. Okay the only two missing from this story is Keith and George. I wonder when they come into the picture. Update soon Shay.
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Post by orinocoflow on Aug 12, 2010 14:16:33 GMT -5
update soon!
wats on the laptop thats so important?
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Post by shaybo on Aug 12, 2010 16:29:20 GMT -5
Damien takes Paul and Ryan into the living room. They sit on the couch and Damien tells them what happened, "Her name was Zara and she was my sister. She worked for the Government on a project. Well anyway lately she was acting very strange. Everytime the door bell or her cell phone would ring she would jump, and when ever we went any where she would be looking around like someone was following us. Well today the door bell rang, she grabbed her laptop, handed it to me, and shoved me in the closet where she piled stuff on top of me. Then she told me to be very quiet. I sat there very quietly, and all I heard was two people and my sister arguing and then I heard two loud thumps and that was it." Paul looked at Damien, "Why didn't you come out when they left?" "I was too scared. I mean I thought that you guys were the ones that killed my sister." Paul and Ryan looked at each other, "Damien what did they sound like? Did they have accents?" "I can't be sure because of the stuff on top of me, but they sounded mediteranian, or maybe muslim. Oh I don't know." Paul touches Damien's shoulder, "You're doing fine Damien. Why don't we......" Just as Paul was going to suggest that they go to the station two gentlemen come walking in one was blonde hair blue eyes and the other one was bald. The one with the blonde hair stepped up, "You're not going any where with this wittness."
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Post by CelticLass91 on Aug 12, 2010 17:04:40 GMT -5
Yeah!!!!!! *sigh* KEITH! lol I liked this update!!! How you had Damian and Zara be sibs. thats pretty cool!
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Post by shaybo on Aug 12, 2010 17:13:31 GMT -5
Paul and Ryan stand up, "And just who are you any way?" "I'm Keith and this is my partner George. We're from the FBI." George and Keith show them their ID's, "How do we know these aren't fakes and that you're the ones that didn't kill the victim?" Keith rolled his eyes, "Look if you don't believe us then you can call our superior Sharon if you want." Now it was Ryan's turn to roll his eyes, "Yeah right it's probably some one pretending to be your "superior." Then Paul's cell phone rings, "Yeah yeah ok." Paul let's out a sigh, "It's ok Ryan they're ligit, and we have to work with them. Since this is in their jurisdiction." Ryan looks at Paul, "What wait a minute that's not fair!" Damien looks at the four men, "So who am I going to go with?" "Looks like you're going with Keith and George." Paul didn't feel right about leaving Damien in the hands of the Feds, but they had no choice in the matter. Plus they had to hand over the laptop and the dead body. He learned from a friend of his that The FBI didn't play well with others, so he decides to play dirty. He notices that the laptop that damien had and the one he has look exactly alike, so he grabs his and gives it to Damien and tells Damien to go with Keith and George. When they leave Ryan looks at Paul, "Are you nuts they have Damien and the Vic's laptop?" Paul smiles slyly, "They have Damien, but not the laptop." Ryan looks at Paul like he's crazy. Until it hits Ryan, "Oh you switched laptops." They both laugh as they head back to the station to find out what's on the laptop.
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Post by orinocoflow on Aug 12, 2010 17:52:02 GMT -5
huh, nice move paul, but youre gonna be in major trouble. unless, of course, you just say you "got mixed up" update soon!
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Post by shaybo on Aug 13, 2010 15:35:53 GMT -5
I promise more later, but trying to think of who should be Paul and Ryan's boss.
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Post by CelticLass91 on Aug 13, 2010 16:10:53 GMT -5
haha i like it. good job paul! *pictures Keith in black fed suit...* *dies! lol*
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Post by orinocoflow on Aug 13, 2010 19:14:28 GMT -5
phil cud be the boss...
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Post by CelticLass91 on Aug 13, 2010 21:23:08 GMT -5
thats what i was thinking Orinocoflow. it could work.
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Post by shaybo on Aug 17, 2010 18:46:31 GMT -5
Paul and Ryan walk into the Station to find Phil waiting for them, and he doesn't look happy, "Paul what in the world were you thinking? The FBI just called and they want the vic's computer and they WANT it NOW.!" Paul looks at Phil, but before he can say anything Ryan speaks up, "Phil, Paul thought that he was grabbing the vics computer." "Ryan what kind of fool do you think Iam? Paul don't even say it." "Phil look we need to find out what's on her computer. There maybe a clue as to why she was killed." Phil finally relents, "Ok I'll stall them, but if you don't find proof you WILL bring that computer back understand?" They both nod their heads, and find Neil.
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Post by celticbear on Aug 17, 2010 22:22:34 GMT -5
Okay Shay I love it, the whole CT gang is here, I guess Neil is the Computer Geek who can crack anything. I'm glad you are posting longer updates. Keep them coming.
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Post by orinocoflow on Aug 18, 2010 13:14:04 GMT -5
love it!
Neil as a comp geek...cannot see that, sorry. although if he is like Logan from "Moonlight", i can see that.
update soon!
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Post by shaybo on Aug 18, 2010 16:02:34 GMT -5
Iam so glad you guys like it. Ok here I go.
They go down to Neil's lair where they find Neil working on another case, "Hey Neil we need you to do us a favor?" Neil turns around and gives them a dirty look, "The last time I did you guys "a favor" I got in trouble with Phil, but when I went to you guys for back up you two acted all innocent. So I got suspended and you guys got away with it. In other words NO WAY. You two can find some other patsy." They remembered it well. They played a practical joke on Phil using Neil. Paul looked at Neil, "Look Neil we're sorry about what we did and after you got suspended we told Phill what happened. We really need you to do this." Neil looks at Ryan and Paul and sees the sincerity on their faces, "Ok what is it?" So Paul and Neil explained what happened and how they got the laptop, "Ok so you want me to hack into her laptop and see what's on it?" They both nod, and Neil cracks his nuckles. He sees Paul and Ryan cringe when he does it, "Ok leave while I do my work." Neil smiles when they leave and chuckles, for he knows that they don't like him cracking his nuckles. He opens up her laptop and sets to work.
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