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Mistake
Jan 9, 2011 13:42:36 GMT -5
Post by meg_cahill21 on Jan 9, 2011 13:42:36 GMT -5
Prologue
My story is not one most moms should be telling their little girls. It’s not one of those love stories that begin with “once upon a time…” and “they lived happily ever after”. It is one of those stories about a girl who had it all going for her, but blew it because of one tiny, simple mistake. A mistake that could change a life or two… forever.
*well??? Does this sound good??? Review and let me know if I should finish!!!*
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Jan 9, 2011 16:41:49 GMT -5
Post by CelticPrincess24 on Jan 9, 2011 16:41:49 GMT -5
I definataly think you should continue!!!
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Jan 9, 2011 21:04:56 GMT -5
Post by celticbear on Jan 9, 2011 21:04:56 GMT -5
Meg! I'm hooked! You Better continue this one!
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Jan 10, 2011 18:32:39 GMT -5
Post by angelenia100 on Jan 10, 2011 18:32:39 GMT -5
go for it!!!!!!!!!!
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Jan 10, 2011 21:00:05 GMT -5
Post by laurenne on Jan 10, 2011 21:00:05 GMT -5
It does sound very good. Definitely continue. Update soon, please.
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Jan 12, 2011 11:24:05 GMT -5
Post by meg_cahill21 on Jan 12, 2011 11:24:05 GMT -5
Month 1
I.
“Standing on the corner watching all the girls go by. Standing on the corner giving all the girls the SHARON!!!!” Damian yelled. “What is it now Damian?” Sharon asked, her voice sounding exhausted. We had been rehearsing this song ALL day and every time Damian finds something to complain about. And it ALWAYS has something to do with me. “Can you please tell HER to stop messin’ up!!!” he yelled. Alright, that is it. “ME? Messing up?!?! HA!!! I am the professional dancer here buddy. NOT YOU!!! So, will you quit saying that it is MY fault!!! Cuz, it is probably yours!!!” And with that, I storm off the stage and I head straight towards the bus that I was staying on while we were touring. “That kid can be the MOST annoying kid in the whole entire world!!! I mean, doesn’t he know NOT to mess with a girl who may possibly be pregnant?” I mumble to myself as I open the bus door. That’s right. I said it. There is a ninety-nine point ninety-nine percent chance that I may be pregnant and actually, I am gonna find out right now. I walk into the bathroom and look at the object in the sink.
A pink plus sign.
I think that I may faint. I mean, how can I be pregnant? I got a whole career ahead of me and I just can’t deal with a kid. Not now. Not while I am only seventeen. I hear a small knock coming from outside the bus. Someone wants to come in. I quickly throw my results away in the trash (or so I think I did) and I headed towards the door. When I open it, the person who is standing outside is the person I would have least expected to be standing there. Damian. “What are you doing here?” I ask coolly. “Uhh… can I please come in?” He mumbles. I nod curtly and move out of the way so he could come onto the bus. “Look,” he says, “I am just here to apologize to you for how I treated you today and I promise that it won’t happen again.” “Who made you come over here and say that?” I question, not believing what he said one bit. “No one!!!” He shouts. I raise my eyebrow at him. “I’m serious!!!” he yells again. I look into his eyes to see if he is telling the truth. He is. “Alright, I believe you. Now you can go.” I say. But he says nothing. Instead, he starts to stare at this thing lying on the floor. I turn around to see what he is looking at and when I realize what it is, my heart stops.
*Well, was this good or did it suck, cuz I am not too sure if I like it or not. Anyway, please review and lemme know!!! Thanks!!!*
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Jan 12, 2011 11:25:44 GMT -5
Post by DamianMcGinty'sGirl on Jan 12, 2011 11:25:44 GMT -5
I LOVE it!Great job!
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Jan 12, 2011 18:16:39 GMT -5
Post by CelticPrincess24 on Jan 12, 2011 18:16:39 GMT -5
Update soon!
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Jan 12, 2011 21:38:10 GMT -5
Post by celticbear on Jan 12, 2011 21:38:10 GMT -5
Miss Meg! This was a great start! Can't wait to find out what happens next! UPDATE SOON! PLEASE!
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Jan 12, 2011 21:53:04 GMT -5
Post by orinocoflow on Jan 12, 2011 21:53:04 GMT -5
Update soon!
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Jan 13, 2011 11:56:51 GMT -5
Post by meg_cahill21 on Jan 13, 2011 11:56:51 GMT -5
Chapter 2
“Uhhh… Haley. What’s that?” Damian asks, pointing to the pregnancy test that was on the floor. “Noooothiiing.” I say in a sing-song voice. Damian said nothing. Instead, he walked over to the pregnancy test and picked it up. “So, you’re pregnant?” He asks bluntly. I just stare at him, not sure what to say. “Hello? Are you gonna answer me or not?” Damian asked, his voice a little harsh. That did it. I started crying. Damian immediately saw my tears and he ran over to me and he wrapped me up in a big hug. I just leaned against him and cried my eyes out for the next ten or fifteen minutes. “Heeey… ssshhh… it’ll be alright…” He mumbled into my ear. I could tell he was trying to comfort me and it was working… a little. When I finally stopped crying, I said to him, “Well, you found me out. I’m pregnant.” He just nods, probably not sure on what to say next. “Can you please say something? You are really making me feel awkward.” I plead to him. “Okay, um, well, for starters, I thought you said you didn’t have a boyfriend?” He asked. Of course, he just HAD to say THAT. “I don’t. I’ve actually never had a boyfriend in my life.” I say to him slowly, hoping he’ll catch on the truth sooner than later. The moment I said that, the truth of how I got pregnant dawned on him. How do I know this? Shock and anger was written all over his face. “So you mean to tell me that some, some, some jerk forced you to…” he just couldn’t get the rest of his sentence out. I nodded. “Please don’t tell anyone though!!! Please!!!” I exclaimed. He looked at me weirdly. “What about Sharon? She has to know!!!” Damian said, trying to stay calm. “Well, at the start of the tour I had told her that I may be pregnant. And today, I just found out for sure that I was.” I told him, taking a seat on the couch. He sat down next to me. “So, what are you gonna do?” Damian asked, putting his arm around my shoulder. “I don’t know. I just don’t know.” I said, the truth of my answer starting to finally dawn on me as I said it.
*So, how was this??? Do you guys still think that it is good or are you starting to loose interest? Review and lemme know!!!*
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Jan 13, 2011 15:31:30 GMT -5
Post by CelticPrincess24 on Jan 13, 2011 15:31:30 GMT -5
Update when you can! Or I'll have to get out my rubber chicken!
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Jan 13, 2011 18:10:21 GMT -5
Post by orinocoflow on Jan 13, 2011 18:10:21 GMT -5
UPDATE SOON!!!
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Jan 13, 2011 21:50:32 GMT -5
Post by celticbear on Jan 13, 2011 21:50:32 GMT -5
Are you kidding! loose interest! NO WAY! Things are just starting to heat up Oh boy if the guy who did this to Haley evershows up he will have one mean Mama Bear Sharon and 5 very Angry Irishmen to deal with! With Damo being the angriest one of all! UPDATE SOON! PLEASE!
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Jan 14, 2011 16:50:56 GMT -5
Post by meg_cahill21 on Jan 14, 2011 16:50:56 GMT -5
well CB, i have never thought of having the guy who did that to Haley show up, but now that u have mentioned it, i think im gonna. that is actually a really good idea. and who said something is gonna happen between Haley and Damo???
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