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Jan 18, 2011 20:54:45 GMT -5
Post by celticbear on Jan 18, 2011 20:54:45 GMT -5
Well the Lads reacted the way I knew they would when they found out about Haley! Okay you unamed Jerk,Watch out because now you have 5 VERY ANGRY IRISHMEN GUNNING FOR YOUR HEAD AND ONE VERY UPSET MAMA BEAR SHARON TO DEAL WITH! Looking forward to the next Update!
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Jan 18, 2011 21:28:19 GMT -5
Post by meg_cahill21 on Jan 18, 2011 21:28:19 GMT -5
sad news: CP is no longer able to write this with e anymore and yeah. so if there is anyone who is willing to co-write this with me that would be awesome!!!! and if not, well, then oh well, i shall manage. anyway, that is all i have to say. love ya, laterz, peace meg
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Jan 19, 2011 11:22:48 GMT -5
Post by angelenia100 on Jan 19, 2011 11:22:48 GMT -5
I can give it a shot Miss Megs. I have a little of real life experiance with things like this. Not with myself but other loved onse.
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Jan 19, 2011 17:27:41 GMT -5
Post by meg_cahill21 on Jan 19, 2011 17:27:41 GMT -5
Chapter 5
(Damian’s POV)
“Hey Damo, has she waken up yet?” Keith asked me as I walked back into the waiting room. I just shake my head glumly. I actually was starting to get nervous, I mean she has been passed out for about three to four hours now and the doctor had told us when we brought her in the she should be waking up within an hour. Well, they were liars. “Don’t worry man, she should be fine. I mean this is Haley we are talking about, strong, stubborn, and as tough as nails. You’ll see, she’ll be awake in no time and all will go back to normal. Or as normal as it can get with her being pregnant and all.” Paul says, trying to comfort me. I sit down next to him and he pats me on the back and puts his arm around me. There is a small silence for a moment or two before Keith says, “Man am I hungry!!! Anyone wanna go down to the cafeteria with me?” we all groan. “Is it just me or do y’all agree that all Keith thinks about is his stomach?” Ryan asked. I give a small laugh as George says, “No, I agree with you as well Ry, but it’s not just Keith. Damo also only thinks about his stomach.” “HEY!!! Shut up!!! I am a growing boy and so is Damian and well, growing boys need food. So, are you guys coming with me or not?” Keith shouts. “I’ll go.” I says while getting up. It wasn’t until Keith said something that I realized how hungry I was. “Figures you’ll go Damian. And I think I shall go too. I haven’t eaten breakfast and I am famished!” Neil says getting up as well. I playfully punch him and the arm and together, Keith, Neil, and me head down to the food court to get something to eat.
37 minutes later… We were just getting ready to head back upstairs when George came running down, his face as white as a ghost. “George man, what is wrong?” I ask him when he stops in front of us. “Haley,” he pants. “She is in a coma.” My heart stops… literally.
*Yeah, don’t know where that one came from and I am not so sure if u can get in a coma while u r pregnant and still have the baby be okay so bear with me cuz that may just happen. Sorry if this sucked, for I am all drained out of ideas. Please review!!!!!!*
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Jan 19, 2011 18:46:57 GMT -5
Post by AmbeeBee on Jan 19, 2011 18:46:57 GMT -5
It was great Meg! And as I said in the pm, I'm more than glad to help ya out, girl! I love co writing! Just let me know!
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Jan 19, 2011 21:04:42 GMT -5
Post by celticbear on Jan 19, 2011 21:04:42 GMT -5
Meg! I agree with Amber, This Update was Awesome! I hope Haley and the baby pull through! UPDATE SOON! PLEASE!
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Jan 19, 2011 23:15:57 GMT -5
Post by orinocoflow on Jan 19, 2011 23:15:57 GMT -5
Great update! but...if she's in a coma...and pregnant...UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!
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Jan 20, 2011 12:19:17 GMT -5
Post by angelenia100 on Jan 20, 2011 12:19:17 GMT -5
Okay here it goes. Megs and I are tag teaming on this one.
"What? Are you serious?"
"Yes Damian I am. I wish it was just a joke too but its not. I'm sorry lad."
"But her baby! Wont that kill the baby?"
"I don't know. They are keeping a close eye on her and monitoring her carefully."
"Can I go up and see her?"
"I think that would be a good idea. Even if she's not awake she knows you there with her. She will still hear what you say to her."
"Thanks George."
I ran up to Hayley's room to see her. It tore me apart to see her hooked up to all the life supports they had to have her on. I sat down on the right side of her bed taking her hand in mine. In a soft voice I started talking to her even if she could not respond to what I said.
"Come on Hayley, you and that baby will pull threw. I just know it, you have to. I'll do what it takes to get you through this alive. You and your baby have your whole lives before you still you can't leave this world yet. Your still needed."
I brushed a strand of hair from her face when I heard some one clear his throat. I jumped the turned to see Hayley's Doctor.
"Its alright if your in here with her. I heard what you said to her and all I have to say is that she is a very lucky to have a good friend like you to stay by her side."
"We normally can't stand each other. Till I found out that she was pregnant by the force of another man. then I began to see why she was always so hard to be around. She was dealing with a lot of hurt and rejection. then I knew that she needed some one. I was the first person to know that she was pregnant and she made me promise not to tell anyone about it so I never told anyone. Now here she is in a coma and here I sit worried to death about her."
"She'll be alright. She's young and fairly healthy she should pull threw okay."
"What about her baby?"
"Hard to say. We are taking ever precaution we can to help that baby survive this. But its hard to say. The baby seems to be a healthy baby which is a good thing. So fare fate is on our side but only time will tell just how she and the baby will fair."
"Thanks."
"No problem. Try not to worry to much about her we are doing every thing we can and flying in a doctor who is much more skilled in these cases them the rest of us here on staff."
She gave my shoulder a squeeze then walked out of the room. George came in to see how I was holding up.
"You okay there lad?"
I sighed heavily.
"I think so. Just worries about Hayley and the baby."
"We all are lad, we all are."
He sat in the lazy boy chair next to Hayley's bed as we let the room fall silent. I was gently cradling Hayley's right hand in both of mine rubbing the back of it with my thumb. After a while a small girl about 5'3 came running in the room she had deep red hair almost black and the brightest blue eyes.
"Hayley! No not my Hayley!"
The girl broke down in tears as George walked up to her and put his arms around her.
"Who are you lass?"
"I-I'm her cousin practically sister. We are always doing something together. Sharon called me a told me about Hayley and had to come. I was in town for the show. My names Cassiopeia or Cassie for short. Is Hayley and the baby going to be okay?"
George was stroking Cassie's face in a fatherly way trying to calm her down.
"The doc said that both her and the baby are fairly strong, but only time will tell if both will pull through or not. Try not calm yourself down your crying hard enough that your going to make yourself sick."
"S-sorry. Its just that Hails and I are so close that I worry. Her and her folks are really the only family I have left. I live right next door to them in a small apartment so Hayley and I do every thing together all the time. You hardly ever see the two of us apart because we are so close to each other."
Now it was my turn to speak.
"You don't have a mother or father?"
"No they were killed in a fire. I was only ten so I stayed in the house/apartment alone with My Aunt Belinda and Uncle James coming over to see how I was doing every morning and every night. One of them would often spend the night with me, and when I was sick they would move me over to their place and take care of me. Hails and I grew up as sisters from that day on. I call her parents mom and dad now. I know Mom is your choreographer."
"I see. I had no idea Belinda and Hayley were related. Neither one ever told us about it."
"I see. Well now you know who she belongs to. Mom and dad have been called so they will be here eventually."
Just then Belinda and James came in the room. Cassie ran into Belinda's arms like any child would run to her mothers arms. *********** Hayley's POV ***********
I could hear Damian's voice along with George, Cassie my cousin/sister, mom, and dad in the room. I could tell that Damian had my hand gently cradled in both of his. Oh how I wanted to tell them I was alright. How I wanted to talk to them and tell Cassie that every thing was going to turn out some how. Ever since Cassie lost her parents my Aunt Sally and Uncle Tom in a house fire when we were ten she was always one to worry till she was sick if one of us was sick or something. Then I hear Damian talking to me.
"I'll be back latter Hayley. I'm going to let your cousin have some time with you and your folks. I'm not letting you fight this alone.''
Then he kissed them back of my hand. I felt Cassie climb up on the bed on my right side and take my hand. Her were trembling and cold. I could hear her crying as she sat there next to me. I took all the energy I could muster to squeeze her hand.
"Hayley? Are you waking up?"
"Why would you ask her that Cassie?"
"Mr. McGinty she just squeezed my hand."
"What? Hayley? You alright?"
I could feel Damian stroking my face know. I took as deep a breath as I could. I gave Cassie's hand another squeeze.
"She did it again. She must be somewhat awake to be able to do that.''
Now it was mom's turn to speak.
"Cassie honey even though Hayley is not awake she can still hear every word that is said in this room. There are different levels of a coma. She must be in a lighter stage because she is able to respond to us in her small ways."
Then I heard someone else come in the room. Then Cassie spoke.
"Megs! Your here!"
"Cass! Is Hails okay?"
"I think so. she squeezed my hand twice so I know she's alive anyway."
"She can hear us?"
Now it was mom's turn.
"Yes she can Megs. She hears every word that is said in this room."
I hear Megs Cassie and mine best friend.
"Hey Hails. I heard about what happened and thought I'd come down to see how you were. I guess you doing okay from what they all say. I'll do what I can to keep Cass from getting sick with worry for you so you don't have to worry about her."
I was glad that Megs was going to help Cass. That would give dad more time to help mom meaning I had a lot less to worry about. I heard someone come in the room. When she spoke I knew it was my Doctor.
"Okay all of you Hayley needs her rest I need you all to leave."
Cass was about to get up when I held tightly to her hand. I did not want my sister to leave I wanted her to stay with me. then my doctor spoke to Cass...again.
"Miss I need you to leave the room please."
"I can't. Hails has a tight hold on my hand and wont let go. She wants me to stay."
"Oh well in that case I guess it wont hurt for you to stay. You a friend of her?"
"Now she's my cousin practically sister. I have lived with her since I was ten when mother and father were killed in a fire. Hails and I do every thing together."
"I see. Well just keep in quiet in here and you can stay."
"Yes ma'am."
"Your a very well mannered young lady."
"Thank you ma'am. Our parents raised us that way."
I felt my doc giving me a once over making sure every thing was okay then I heard her leave the room. Cass lay down on my right curled in a ball next to me before she started whispering.
"Come one Hayley you'll make it past this. I just know you will, you have too."
Time went on and Cassie stayed next to me till late in the night when she had to go back to the hotel to get some sleep. Although I know there were times she fell asleep next to me. I had to wake up soon. All i wanted was for my baby to live and Cassie not to worry.
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Jan 20, 2011 16:22:27 GMT -5
Post by mala1152 on Jan 20, 2011 16:22:27 GMT -5
oh that was such a great update! i loved it!!! post more soon!
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Jan 20, 2011 22:56:13 GMT -5
Post by celticbear on Jan 20, 2011 22:56:13 GMT -5
Way to go Angel! you and Meg are going to make a great team on this one! I hope you take me up on my offer to help me with Lauren Harkin. Because it looks like HC has turned the story over to me. And I can't write it alone. UPDATE SOON! PLEASE!
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Jan 21, 2011 11:14:32 GMT -5
Post by angelenia100 on Jan 21, 2011 11:14:32 GMT -5
I can give L.H a try with ye. Glad you liked this one. I thought it would put a neat twist to do it from the point of the one in a coma.
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Jan 21, 2011 12:11:49 GMT -5
Post by meg_cahill21 on Jan 21, 2011 12:11:49 GMT -5
Chapter 6
(Damian’s POV… three days later…)
Three weeks have gone and Haley still hasn’t woken up. I was starting to get nervous… well, more nervous than I was the other day when I found out that she was in a coma. We were all nervous. I was walking over to Haley’s room and just when I was outside the door that was the door to her room, I heard a voice coming from inside. I think that it was Cassie. Wait, correction, it was Cassie, and she was crying. I stood in the doorway quietly, not wanting her to know I was there, and I listened to her talk to Haley’s lifeless form. “Haley, you gotta wake up, you just have too. I need you, your baby will need you, and I know you may be shocked to hear this, but I think that guy who is always with you, Damian, needs you as well. I think he really likes you Hails. A lot. Hails, you have to wake up, you just have to. I don’t think I will be able to live without you and I can’t loose any more people in my life that I am close too, I just can’t.” And with that, she broke down into a new set of tears. Feeling bad for the girl, I walked up to her and hugged her. “Sssh, Cass, it’ll be alright. She’s gonna wake up and everything will be alright. I promise.” I say, trying to comfort her. She buries her head into my chest and says, “How do you know that?” “Cuz, I know everything, duh.” I tell her. She gives a weak laugh, and I tighten my grip on her. “Don’t worry Cassie, I promise you that her time won’t be up just yet. Give it a few more years, she still has a life to live and a baby to take care of. Don’t worry, she wont be leaving us anytime soon.” I say to her, kissing the top of her head. She doesn’t reply to me, instead she shouts, “Oh my God!!! Haley!!!”
*Well, I hope y’all liked this, and I am sorry that it was so short. Anyway, what do you think happened to Haley??? Review and lemme know!!!! Thanks!!!*
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Jan 21, 2011 19:40:51 GMT -5
Post by orinocoflow on Jan 21, 2011 19:40:51 GMT -5
What happened??? UPDATE SOON!!!
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Jan 21, 2011 22:11:19 GMT -5
Post by celticbear on Jan 21, 2011 22:11:19 GMT -5
I thing she woke up and saw Cassie and Damo together and has the wrong Idea of what is going on! Okay Angel I believe it's your turn to Update!
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Jan 21, 2011 22:40:22 GMT -5
Post by AmbeeBee on Jan 21, 2011 22:40:22 GMT -5
Meg! I loved it! Update soon!
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