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Jan 14, 2011 21:07:50 GMT -5
Post by celticbear on Jan 14, 2011 21:07:50 GMT -5
Come on Meg! you have to be kidding me! Haley is the perfect Damian Damsel in distress! Who better to pair her off with then Damo! Glad you liked my Suggestion about the guy showing up! And you know darn well the Lads are going to defend Haley like crazy! UPDATE SOON! PLEASE!
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Jan 15, 2011 9:25:46 GMT -5
Post by meg_cahill21 on Jan 15, 2011 9:25:46 GMT -5
any ideas on what could happen next??? cuz i am clueless and i aint got nutin'. and remember: Damo and Haley can barely stand each other... they arent friends yet... sooo lemme know what u think should happen next!!! Thanks meg
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Jan 15, 2011 13:13:10 GMT -5
Post by mala1152 on Jan 15, 2011 13:13:10 GMT -5
HOLY CRAP thats intense...very strong beginning, right into the action! lets see....they could just go on a little bit without telling the rest of the guys and try to keep everything a secret for a while, and in the meantime, they become friends somehow? just an idea, see where it gets you...but i love the story so far! keep it up!
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Jan 15, 2011 20:55:42 GMT -5
Post by celticbear on Jan 15, 2011 20:55:42 GMT -5
Exactly! Mala! After-all some of the best Romances started out with the Couple not liking each other and then before you know it, Friends,Lovebirds and Marriage!
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Jan 16, 2011 18:28:26 GMT -5
Post by AmbeeBee on Jan 16, 2011 18:28:26 GMT -5
Meg! Update please?! I love this story!
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Jan 17, 2011 12:09:43 GMT -5
Post by angelenia100 on Jan 17, 2011 12:09:43 GMT -5
Very good story indeed. If you need a little help I would be willing to help you.
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Jan 17, 2011 17:25:55 GMT -5
Post by meg_cahill21 on Jan 17, 2011 17:25:55 GMT -5
Chapter 3
A few days have pasted and Damian has faithfully kept my secret… surprisingly. I mean, we still can’t stand each other at all. “Alright Damian, Haley, time to practice ‘Standing on the Corner’” Sharon Browne called. I sigh and get up. Today, was just not going to well for me. I mean, this morning I almost threw up and I could barely move and I had the BIGGEST headache in the world. Oh well… I still have to work. Damian and I take our places and the song began. It wasn’t until halfway through the song when another wave of sickness came over me and I started to feel faint. And, just as Damian and I began to waltz across the stage, I felt myself falling and everything went black.
(Damian’s POV)
We were just dancing across the stage when I felt something heavy in my arms. I stopped moving and looked to see what had happened. Haley had fainted. “OH MY GOD!!!!! SHARON!!!!” I shouted, afraid of what was gonna happen to Haley. “Damian shush and go make yourself useful and call for an ambulance.” Sharon ordered. I did as I was told and ran offstage to get my cell. I quickly dialed 911 and talked to the people and then hung up when they said that they would be on their way. “Hey Damo, what’s going on? What happened to Haley?” Keith asked, walking up to me, the rest of the lads right behind him. “I don’t really know. I mean we were dancing and then she just fainted.” I told them. They nodded and George said, “I wonder what is wrong with her. I mean she has been acting odd all week.” Well, I knew the answer to that, but I couldn’t tell the. Haley would shoot me. “No clue. Anyway, I gotta go tell Sharon that an ambulance is on the way.” And then with that, I walk off to tell Sharon.
27 minutes later…
We were all sitting in the hospital waiting to hear news about Haley. “I’m bored.” Keith said for what seemed like the nine hundredth time. Just as he said that though, a doctor came into the room saying, “May I please speak to the parent or guardian of Ms. Haley-Jo O’Callahan?” Sharon immediately got up while saying, “I am her guardian. What is wrong? Is Haley okay?” The doctor signaled for Sharon to come out into the hall with her. Sharon follows. I watch them and when I see Sharon put a hand to her face in shock, I know the she knows about Haley.
*sorry if this was short, I am having a bit of a writer’s block. And just to let y’all know, CelticPrincess24 will now be co-writing this with me. Now please, please, please review!!! Thanks!!!!*
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Jan 17, 2011 19:54:01 GMT -5
Post by orinocoflow on Jan 17, 2011 19:54:01 GMT -5
update soon!!!
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Jan 17, 2011 23:24:01 GMT -5
Post by celticbear on Jan 17, 2011 23:24:01 GMT -5
Boy sure has been a lot of pairing up of Thunderheads helping each other out with stories lately! I love it! Meg great Update! Looking forward to reading what CP comes up with!
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Jan 18, 2011 2:26:08 GMT -5
Post by orinocoflow on Jan 18, 2011 2:26:08 GMT -5
it does seem like a lot of people are cowriting stories lately.
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Jan 18, 2011 14:48:58 GMT -5
Post by meg_cahill21 on Jan 18, 2011 14:48:58 GMT -5
*ok here is Cp's post* (Damian’s POV) Yep she definitely knows now. “I wonder if she’ll tell the rest of the guys about it.” I thought to myself. “I wonder what happened?” Ryan said, breaking into my thoughts. “I wonder if I should tell them.” I thought to myself. “No Sharon will tell them, besides I made a promise to Haley.” I mush had a guilty expression on my face because Keith noticed. “Damian? You know something, don’t you?” He asked me. “H-how would I know anything.” I said as casually as I could. But it didn’t work, they saw right through me. “Damian, if you know what’s wrong with Haley then you have to tell us.” Paul said, looking straight into my eyes. “I promised her I wouldn’t say anything. Besides if Sharon wants you all to know then she’ll tell you. I can’t break my promise to Haley.” I said, but I knew they still wanted an answer. “Damian, we won’t tell we know. Come we’re all really worried about her.” George said with a worried expression. “Ok, I’ll tell you.” I said. “Well I just found out a few days ago, she’s pregnant.” I waited for the guy’s reactions. They didn’t look very happy. They all stared at me. “I didn’t do it, it was someone else.” I said. Now they all looked angry. “I knew I shouldn’t have told them.” I thought. “I can’t believe this!” Exclaimed Ryan, hitting his fist on the table. “When did this happen? How could this happen?” Keith said, starting to pace the floor. Just as Sharon walked out. “Ok, guys, it seems as if Damian already told you what happened.” She started saying. “I talked to Haley and she said will continue with the tour as long as she can. She doesn’t want this made public, so please, don’t say anything.” She finished. “Can I see her?” I asked. She told me to go in. And as I went in Haley was asleep. I decided to sit with her until she woke up. I wanted to be there for her, especially now when she needs me the most. “If I ever get my hands on the guy that did this.” I thought to myself angrily. *my note: thank u Mala for noticing the reason on why Haley's last name is O'Callahan. that made me feel real special now please review!!!! Thanks!!!*
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Jan 18, 2011 16:33:42 GMT -5
Post by mala1152 on Jan 18, 2011 16:33:42 GMT -5
hehehe meg no problem. im actually watching miracle right now...best movie EVER. and great update! cant wait to see where this goes!
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Jan 18, 2011 17:02:22 GMT -5
Post by meg_cahill21 on Jan 18, 2011 17:02:22 GMT -5
i totally agree... it is the best movie EVER!!! i actually have it memorized word for word... yes, u may call me obsessed. but, it is a great hockey movie about one of the greatest feats in the world soooo... yeah.... oh great, now i wanna watch it... curse u Mala!!! hahaha u know i love u...
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Jan 18, 2011 18:15:33 GMT -5
Post by orinocoflow on Jan 18, 2011 18:15:33 GMT -5
the "i didnt do it" was actually kind of funny, but i expected slightly different reactions from the guys.
update soon?
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Jan 18, 2011 20:49:40 GMT -5
Post by meg_cahill21 on Jan 18, 2011 20:49:40 GMT -5
what type of reactions were u going for Ori? and i will be updating either 2moro or the day after sooo be patient.
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