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Post by meg_cahill21 on Dec 19, 2010 17:59:36 GMT -5
Chapter 9 (Damian’s POV) “Hey Damo, where were you last night?” Ryan asked me as I walked into the room me and him were sharing. “Oh, uh, I was with an old friend of mine.” I lied. Truth was, I stayed with Aria all night. “Oh cool.” Ryan said. Then he said, “Well, I’m gonna go down to breakfast. Anyone care to join?” I looked at Paul (he was in the room as well) and I shook my head no. He did the same. As soon as Ryan closed the door, Paul said, “You were with Aria weren’t you?” “Yeah.” I said nodding. “We’ve got to tell him sooner or later, you know that right. We can’t wait until she’s ready.” He said in a low voice. “And why not?” I asked. “Because she may never be ready and he’s got to know.” Paul said, raising his voice a little. “Look, dude, I think we should wait. No, no, hear me out. This is Aria’s business. If she doesn’t want to tell Ryan that she’s her dad, then fine. But if she does, then we got to let her do it on her own time, we wouldn’t want to rush her, because then it wouldn’t turn out too well. Alright?” I told him. He nodded and then together we walked down to breakfast. And what do ya know? When we get down there, we see Aria tlking to no other than her dad, my band mate, Ryan Kelly. *Well, is Aria gonna tell Ryan or not? ? Review and let me know what you think should happen!!! And thanks for all the ideas already, appreciate it!!! *
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mandy4525
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Post by mandy4525 on Dec 19, 2010 18:00:14 GMT -5
Awww how sad that her mom died like that! Im glad Damo was there to comfort her after she told him!
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Post by celticbear on Dec 19, 2010 21:48:18 GMT -5
I'm glad Damo was there for Aria! and as to answer your question:YES! NOW IS THE TIME FOR ARIA TO TELL RYAN HER STORY! I mean she is already talking to him at the end of this update! GO FOR IT ARIA KELLY! Okay Miss Meg give us a longer UPDATE SOON! PLEASE!
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Dec 20, 2010 15:36:40 GMT -5
Chapter 10
(Aria’s POV) I woke up the next morning only to find out that Damian had left. So, I slowly get up and as I do, a piece of white paper fell into my lap.
Aria, it said:
Sorry I couldn’t stay with you this morning, it’s just I had to get back to my room before the others start to worry bout me. See you later today. -Damo
I smiled, put the letter down, and went and got ready for the day.
1 hour later…
I was just walking into the hotel’s restaurant when someone bumped into me. It was my dad. “Oh, I’m so sorry!!!” I exclaimed. “Nah, don’t worry lass, it was my fault, I should’ve been looking on where I was going.” He said. I smiled weakly at him. He smiled back and then turned to leave. He was at least three feet away when I called out, “Ryan! Wait!” he stopped turned around and asked, “What is it lass?” “I-I-I need to tell you something.” I say timidly. “And what’s that?” he asked. “You should probably sit down.” I say, gesturing to a nearby chair. He stares at me queerly and says, “Lass, what is going on?” “I, uh, well, you see, um…” I trail off. I couldn’t do this. I mean, there is a one in a million chance that he’ll believe me and I know for a fact he won’t. And also, I don’t have the guts to do this. Not here, not now. And especially not without Damian standing by my side. “Look, lass, will you please just tell me what you need to tell me so I can go and finish my breakfast. Please?” Ryan says. Just as I open my mouth to say something, I spot Damian and Paul enter the restaurant. Good, maybe then I’ll have someone to back me up if he doesn’t believe me. And just as they start to head towards us, I open my mouth and say, “My name’s Aria Kelly. And I’m your daughter.” Ryan’s mouth drops. “No you’re not,” he says calmly, “I’ve never had that sort of relations with a woman. So therefore, you are lying. Plain and simple. Ah, Damian, Paul! Care to join me for breakfast!?” Damian looks at me and I think that he can tell what just occurred by the tears that were now streaming down my face. “Aria, what happened?” Damian asked, not evening bothering to look at Ryan. “Damian, you know this girl?” When Damian nods, Ryan continues by saying, “Well, can you please tell her that she has the wrong man. She seems to think that I’m her dad.” “Ryan, she’s right. You are her father.” Paul says gently. Ryan just stares. “You believe her? How do you know that this is not some sort of joke? Remember, she did say that she was a big fan? How do you two know that she is not just saying this for attention?” Ryan asks finally. But, before I could say anything, Damian says, “Cuz dude, she wouldn’t have flown all the way from the states to here just to get our attention. That would be kinda stupid.” Paul nods, agreeing with what Damian had said. “I have a letter.” I say meekly, pulling out the letter that my mother had wrote. Ryan, shaking his head and muttering, “This is madness.” Takes the letter and starts to read…
*Well??? Comment and Review on what you thought of it!!!*
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Post by laurenne on Dec 20, 2010 19:46:08 GMT -5
I absolutely loved the updates. Update soon, please.
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Post by celticbear on Dec 20, 2010 22:56:52 GMT -5
Well Ryan went through the Gambit of Calling her a liar! Thank God Damo and Paul where there to back Aria Up! The firworks have just now gone into overload! UPDATE SOON! PLEASE!
Oh Miss Meg I'm a member of the Celtic Thunder PUB just like some of the others here on nox. And we have a new PUB member named Celtic_Princess 24, she logs into nox as a quest and she wanted me to tell you she likes this story also and looks forward to your next update! I'm trying to convince her to get her own free account in here so she can leave you comments herself.
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Post by orinocoflow on Dec 21, 2010 14:27:06 GMT -5
Would it be weird of me to have started laughing at the part where Ryan calmly tells her that she is wrong?
UPDATE SOON!!!
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Dec 21, 2010 16:57:40 GMT -5
Chapter 11
(Ryan’s POV)
I just finished reading the letter and though it probably was from my Rosie, I still didn’t believe the girl. I mean, it could be forgery!!! “I’m sorry Aria, you seem like a really sweet girl, but I still don’t believe you. I mean, for all I know, you could’ve forged this. And besides, if you really were mine and Rose’s daughter, where is Rose to back you up? Huh? I just cant accept the fact that you are my daughter without your mother here with you and telling me that you are right.” I say simply, handing her back the letter. My heart broke as she burst into tears and ran away. “Way to go Kelly.” Damian mocked. And then, he ran after herm, shouting her name the whole entire way. “Dude, that was low. I mean really low.” Paul said, staring off into the direction that the girl was running to. “And how’s that man? Rose isn’t here to back her up and until she tells me to my face that Aria is my daughter, I won’t believe the girl.” I say simply. I got no reply from Paul. Nope. All I got was a nice dope slap across the head. “Hey! Dude, what was that for?!?” I shouted at him, hitting him back as well. “Do you know the only reason Aria is here, telling you that you are her father?” When I shook my head no, Paul continued, “Dude, you are all that she’s got left! Her mother is DEAD!!! And it was either you or her grandmother who is deaf and blind. So, you should be honored by her picking you! But NO!!! You just have to call her a freakin’ liar!!!” And with that, Paul left to find Damian and Aria. Rose is dead? How? Oh my God, I am such a… jerk. And a horrible dad at that too.
*well, will Ryan be able to catch Aria in time before she leaves Ireland for good??? Keep reading and find out!!! All reviews (good and bad) are welcomed!!!*
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Post by mandy4525 on Dec 21, 2010 18:58:06 GMT -5
AHHHHH!!!!!BAD RYAN!!! YOU BETTER GO CATCH UP TO HER AND APOLOGIZE!!!!!! MISS MEG YOU BETTER UPDATE SOON!!!
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Post by laurenne on Dec 21, 2010 19:30:09 GMT -5
I loved it. I can't wait for more. Ryan had better find her before she leaves.
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Post by celticbear on Dec 21, 2010 22:05:21 GMT -5
RYAN JOHN KELLY! YOU ARE A VERY MEAN MAN RIGHT NOW! SHAME ON YOU FOR THE WAY YOU TREATED YOUR DAUGHTER! GOOD FOR YOU PAUL FOR GIVING RYAN, ONE HECK OF GIBBS SLAP ON THE BACK OF THE HEAD! Okay Miss Meg! Ryan better catch up with his daughter and appologize and convince her to stay in Ireland! UPDATE SOON! PLEASE!
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Post by orinocoflow on Dec 21, 2010 22:35:15 GMT -5
haha, all I could think of when Paul did that was "Gibbs slap!" love the update! Update again soon!
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Post by xxfernandaxx on Dec 22, 2010 12:42:51 GMT -5
OH MY DAMIAN!! this story is so intense!! I LOVE IT!!
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Post by CelticPrincess24 on Dec 22, 2010 13:39:31 GMT -5
please update soon!!!!! This is a great story I love it so update asap or I will hunt you done with my baseball bat and.......(hehehehe)
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Dec 22, 2010 15:16:43 GMT -5
Chapter 12
(Aria’s POV)
“ARIA WAIT!!!” I heard Damian shout after me. Usually I would stop, but this time I didn’t. I just kept running. When I reached my room, I quickly opened the door and tried to shut it as quickly as I could before Damian could get in. I was not quick enough. “Aria, will you just wait and hear me OUT!!!” Damian yelled as he wedged himself between the door and me. “NO!” I shouted. “I knew coming here was a HUGE mistake but I did it anyway. And look where it’s got me! I just can’t be here any more, I am sorry.” And with that, I took all my strength and I slammed the door shut. I heard an “OUCH!” from the other side, but I didn’t really care. I quickly hurried over to my open suitcase and I stuffed the little clothes that I had brought with me into it. I angrily zippered my suitcase up and then I ran out of the room… only to crash I to Damian. “Where are ya goin’?” he asked. “Home. I never want to see this place again… EVER!!!” I shouted at him, trying to push the grip he had on me off. “Come on Aria, Ryan will come around. I promise.” He pleaded. I shook my head, tears starting to fall again. “No Damian, he won’t. But could you please give this picture to him for me?” I asked, handing him a picture of him and my mom and Ryan. It was the last picture ever taken of them while they were together. “Aria, come on, this is stupid. It was just shock that made him think you were lying, I swear!” Damian pleaded, taking the picture out of my hand. While he was looking at it I said, “And here, this has my address, my cell number, my email address, and just about everything that you could use to contact me with. That is, if you want to contact me, I mean.” I say, handing him a folded up piece of paper. He took and said nothing. Instead, he pulled me into one of the biggest hugs anyone has ever given me. After a minute or so we broke apart and Damian said, “I’ll miss you Aria.” “Miss you too. And thanks for everything.” I whispered to him. But before I could leave, Damian takes hold of my arm, pulls me close to him, and then he kisses me. My first kiss. WOW. We broke apart after a few seconds and this time we say nothing. And then, I walk away, leaving Damian standing where we said our last goodbyes. As I was walking through the lobby, I could hear Ryan yelling for me to stop, but once again, I didn’t. I just kept walking. I could hear him shouting after me as I walked outside, but that didn’t make me want to stop. I just kept going and when I got outside, I quickly flagged down a taxi. When the driver asked my destination, I simply said, “The airport.” And then, I drove away, not evening bothering to look back.
*That, in my opinion was AMAZINGLY good. But that’s my opinion. Review and tell me what YOU thought. Oh and Celticprincess24, the ‘hunt you down with a *form of sports equipment*’ is MY thing. Please don’t take that from me. Thanks. Love y’all. And keep reviewing!!!!!!!!!!!*
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