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Post by angelenia100 on Dec 22, 2010 15:46:26 GMT -5
I love this story its amazing!!!!
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Post by CelticPrincess24 on Dec 22, 2010 16:44:08 GMT -5
Ok sorry about steeling your line, I won't do it again just update soon!!!!
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Post by orinocoflow on Dec 22, 2010 20:04:28 GMT -5
Loved the update! Very dramatic exit, lol, but she didnt even want to grab her stuff? update soon! thsi story gets better with each post!
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Post by celticbear on Dec 23, 2010 0:04:30 GMT -5
I agree with Ori! this story is getting better and better with each post! Can't wait to see what you do next! I'll be gone till Sunday. So I''ll catch up then!
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Post by laurenne on Dec 23, 2010 0:14:56 GMT -5
I absolutely loved it. Please update soon.
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Dec 24, 2010 18:13:46 GMT -5
sorry guys, this isnt an update. i just wanted to wish everyone a very merry, joyful, and safe Christmas 2moro!!!! y'all be in my prayers. i also want to say that there not may be many updates this week due to the fact that i am on school break and i shall be a VERY busy person!!!! so, Merry Christmas!!!!!! love ya meaghan <3
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Dec 26, 2010 21:38:49 GMT -5
Chapter 13 (Ryan's POV... in Ireland) I just stared blankly as she got into the cab and drove away. How could I have been such an idiot? As i turn around to go and sulk back in my hotel room, I see this tall, lanky looking teenage boy running and screaming frantcially around the hotel lobby. Damian. "You IDIOT!!! Why aren't you running after her to stop and stay?!?" he shouted at me, punching me. "OUCH, HEY!!! Don't you know how strong you are? And I did run after her, she just wouldn't stop and listened to what i had to say. Why? Where is she going?" I say to him, rubbing the part of my arm that he had punched. "You're asking me where she's going? Oh my God, how sad is that? You don't even know where your own daughter is gong?" Damian scolded rudely. "Dude, isn't she just moving into another home or something?" I asked him, fearing what he was gonna say. Damian slowly shook his head no and said, "No man. You were way off. And I mean waaaaaaaaaaaaaay off. Ryan, she is moving back to the States." Oh S**t!!!! (Aria's POV... one day later: in the U.S.A) Well, I'm home. As I walk up to the front door, I take in a deep breath, taking in my surroundings. Man, it's good to be home, but i sure will miss Damian... a LOT. Damian. That is all i have been thinking about these past few hours, from the moment I left the hotel to this exact minute right now. I love him. That is the only explanation for the heartbreak that I am feeling right now. Anyway... I slowly walk up the front proch steps and when I open the front door, I see a sight that I had not planned on seeing. My Aunt Jen, Uncle Steve, Uncle Johnny, and Aunt Jean were all sitting in the front room... crying. "Hey guys, what's going on? I come home and see y'all cryin'. What's up with that?" I ask, walking up to them. My Aunt Jen looks at me and says, "Aria darling, your grandmother is dead." WHAT?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! *hey, sorry for all grammer and spelling mistakes, i did this on a totally different computer at my cousins house and i didnt use the normal doc. that i usually use. and i'm also sorry that this is a little one the short side... i'm having a bit of trouble getting all my ideas on the site. speaking of ideas, i plan to do my next story on Haley and Damian. What do u all think of that? it will be a romance story of course, and i just thought i'd check in with y'all first about it. Soooo lemme know and please please please review!!! thanks!!! and i hope you all had a great Christmas!!! *
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Post by Deleted on Dec 26, 2010 21:59:48 GMT -5
Good and Sad Update Cant Wait to Read more i did have a Great Christmas Hope u did to
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Post by orinocoflow on Dec 26, 2010 22:13:51 GMT -5
same as RKIS! sad but good.
Update soon!
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Post by celticbear on Dec 26, 2010 22:36:01 GMT -5
I agree with Ori and RKIS! I hope when you get back to your own Computer your next update will be longer! And I think a romance between Haley and Damian would be great! They are such a cute couple when they do *Standing On The Corner.*
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Post by laurenne on Dec 27, 2010 0:06:12 GMT -5
I absolutely loved the update. Well, not the part where she finds out her grandma is dead. Update as soon as you can, please.
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Dec 27, 2010 12:51:52 GMT -5
Chapter 14
(Aria's POV)
1 week later...
Everyone was crying. Everyone. Just like my mom's funeral. Except, the only thing that was different was the fact that i wasn't crying. Nope. I refuse too. After everything that has happened to me these past few weeks, it seems kinda silly to cry. Anyway, I am sitting in the back corner of the reception party when my Aunt Cheryl comes up to me and says, "Honey, I am sooo sorry. A young girl such as yourself should not have to go through two deaths of loved ones in less than a month." She then pulls me into a big embrace, but it was nothing like the hug Damian had given me before I left. No where close. Damian's hug had a meaning to it and Aunt Cheryl's, well, I think she just hugged me to hug me. "Why don't you come over and sit with and and all your other uncles and aunts." She says, grabbing my arm and pulling me away. "Hey, Aria! We were just talking about you!" My Uncle Jeff, Cheryl's husband, said. "What where you saying about me?" I asked cautiously. "We were just discussing who you are going to live with afte today." My Aunt Lee-Ann informed me. "I'm staying in Grandma's house!" I exclaimed, fearing that i would have to leave the place before Damian would get the chance to write me. "Sweetie, you can't stay there all alone! That would be silly. No, you are gonna come with one of us." I was told. "NO!!! I will not go with you!!! I refuse to!!!" And then, I turned on my heel and ran out of the restaraunt that the reception was being held in. No one evening bothered to run after me like Damian had. I ran all the way back to my Grandmother's place and when i got there, i saw these six guys standing on the front porch. "Excuse me, but who are you?!?" I shout to them. They all turn around and when i saw who they were, i fainted.
*Well is it the lads or is it someone else??? sorry this was sooo short and the spelling and grammer was not accurate, i'm still at my cousin's house using her computer sooo... but i will be home tonight and i promise that my next update will be reeeeeaaaaaally long. soo bear with me. i should also say that i am almost finished with this story, no more than 5 chapters left soooo... please review!!!! Thanks!!!*
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Post by CelticPrincess24 on Dec 27, 2010 13:53:41 GMT -5
I love this, you have to extend it or write a sequel to it..... great update!!!! And update soon!!
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Post by laurenne on Dec 27, 2010 14:57:24 GMT -5
Loved the update. It has to be all the lads. Update soon, please.
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Post by orinocoflow on Dec 27, 2010 15:50:23 GMT -5
THAT"S IT?!?!?! only five chapters more? YOU HAVE TO HAVE A SEQUEL!!! I love this story!
Update SOON!!!!
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