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Post by laurenne on Dec 8, 2010 23:09:12 GMT -5
I think I can forgive you, miss m.
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Dec 9, 2010 18:00:18 GMT -5
*ok I promise that I will use ARIA’s proper name this time and if I don’t, well I’ll let you guys hunt me down with a shotgun… just kidding. But I promise that I will get her name right.* Chapter 5 “So, where to next?” I asked as Paul, Damian, and me walked out of this really cute place that had a ton of old artifacts. It was kinda like a museum, but it wasn’t. “Lunch. I am famished!!!” Damian shouted. Paul started to shake his head while saying, “Aria, darling, if there is absolutely one thing you must know about Damian, it’s that he is always hungry. So, if you ever have him over your house or whatnot, make sure that you have at least enough food for ten people.” Damian playfully punched Paul while I asked, “Why ten?” “Because Damian’s stomach is the size of ten, full grown men.” Was my answer. I started to laugh, and pretty soon, we were all laughing, and we laughed all the way to the nearest restaurant. “Hello, my name is Erin. And what can I start you off with today?” our waitress said a few minutes after we had seated. Paul had chose this lovely restaurant called, “Lucky’s”. “Coke.” “Water.” “Beer.” We all said. The lady jotted it down and then walked off to get our drinks. “So, Miss Aria, what is such a pretty lassie like yourself doing here in Ireland?” Paul asked me. Oh no, should I tell them or not? I guess I should, I mean maybe they could help me. And besides, either way, they would find out. “I’m here on a quest to find my dad.” I say. They look back and forth between each other before Paul says, “Your dad lives in Ireland, cool. Whereabouts?” “County Tyrone.” I say simply. “Hey, that’s where Ryan lives! What’s your dad’s name? Maybe Ryan knows him!” Damian exclaimed. Alright, time to tell them… “You see, the truth is… well… Ryan is my dad.” I say. Their jaws drop. And I’m not just saying that, for their jaws literally drop. *Well, how was it? Please comment and review!!!*
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Post by orinocoflow on Dec 9, 2010 18:10:05 GMT -5
lol, "coke. water. beer." i cant really see Paul saying "lassie..." more like Keith or George would say that... Loved it! Please update soon!!!
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Dec 9, 2010 18:11:09 GMT -5
u know what Ori? inmy book he says Lassie sooooo.... and thanks.
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Post by celticbear on Dec 9, 2010 23:42:35 GMT -5
I can so see Paul using Lassie. Keith prefers love,sweety or babe. Meg you just set off the CT version of the Atom Bomb with this Update! Can't wait to find out what happens after Damo and Paul get over the shock of what Aria just told them! UPDATE SOON! PLEASE! Oh Paul's comment about Damo's stomach is so right on!
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Post by laurenne on Dec 10, 2010 1:34:08 GMT -5
I loved Paul and Damo's reaction. Still waiting for Ryan's reaction, though. hint, hint. I can't wait for more. Update soon, please.
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Post by CelticLass91 on Dec 10, 2010 2:13:26 GMT -5
I can see Paul using lassie, not as much as some, but I can still see it. But... About an update.... I loved this one!! haha I can sooo picture Damo and Paul's reaction! B"hahahahha! Can't wait for more to see what you have in-store!
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Post by Deleted on Dec 11, 2010 18:40:10 GMT -5
ha finally spilled the beans great update cute and funny cant wait to read more
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Dec 13, 2010 15:42:46 GMT -5
Chapter 6
(Damian’s POV)
She’s Ryan’s daughter? How could she be Ryan’s daughter? Well, I guess she sort of looks like him… but still!!!
(Paul’s POV)
Ryan has a kid? Since when? I didn’t even know he that he dated, let alone have a kid with someone…
(Aria’s POV) “Huuuh… could you guys please say something? You’re making me feel really awkward.” I say nervously, hoping that they would also stop staring at me as if I was a freak. “Oh, um… well it’s just we’ve known Ryan for three, almost four years, and we never knew that he had a kid, that’s all. This is just some sort of surprise for us.” Paul said a little awkwardly. “Oh well, funny story, Ryan doesn’t know that he has a daughter either. Actually, I kinda just found out about him a little less than a year ago when I finally asked my mom who my dad was.” I tell them. They start to stare at me like I’m some freak again. “How could Ryan not know he’s a dad?!? And how could you not know who your father is?” Damian finally exclaimed. “My mom didn’t really like to talk about my dad a lot and when my mom found out she was pregnant with me, she ran away to the States without telling a soul. Sooo yeah…” I say. “Man, we gotta tell Ryan. We gotta get you two together. We gotta- NO! I will not let you tell Ryan! This I something I have to do on my own! So don’t you guys even dare try and interfere with that!” I shouted, interrupting Paul. They looked taken back. “Well, sorry. We just thought that we could help you, that’s all.” Paul said rudely. “I know and I’m sorry I yelled. It’s just that I don’t even think that I’m even gonna tell him. I mean, he probably won’t even believe me and he probably doesn’t remember my mom. So… I think that I might just ending up going back to the states or something.” I say, realizing that what I was saying was actually the truth and what I was feeling about this whole situation. “You should tell Ryan, because I know he will believe you. He may not at first, but he will. And peaking of your mom, where is she? Is she here with you or did you do what Amanda Bynes’s character did in “What a Girl Wants”? You know, sneaking off to England to find her dad?” Paul explains when he saw the weird looks me and Damian were giving him. “Ummm… actually, my mother is dead. And the only reason that I’m even here is because I promised her that I would find my dad and tell him the whole story. And also to deliver him this letter.” I whisper. Then, I pull out the letter my mom wrote to Ryan out of my purse and showed them. “Oh my God, I’m so sorry.” Damian muttered, his eyes staring into mine. “’S’alright.” I say shrugging. “Well, Aria, I swear the Damo and me will do everything we possibly can to help you reunite with Ryan.” Paul says sincerely. “Really?” I ask, a smile starting to form on my face. “Really.” Damian said, answering for Paul. The smile on my face was now transformed into a huge, full out smile, a smile that I haven’t shown since the day my mother died.
*well, how as it? All reviews are welcomed, good and bad. And I was wondering if I should put this in the general stories or not? I mean there will be romance between Damo and Aria, but still… please review!!!*
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Post by orinocoflow on Dec 13, 2010 16:09:24 GMT -5
LOL, that movie is exactly what i was thinking of when i was reading this. Love the update! but maybe check your grammar and spelling before posting next time...
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Dec 13, 2010 16:43:12 GMT -5
Ori, what is wrong with my spelling??? i did this on Word with spell check AND grammer check!!! but, oh well...no one is perfect
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Post by orinocoflow on Dec 13, 2010 16:56:09 GMT -5
well, there are some words that are words, but they do not work in this sense. For example, if you read again, there are a few times when you accidentally typed "the" or "that" when you meant the other, and added words that don't belong in the sentence, like "he" when thinking from Paul's POV.
"Ryan has a kid? Since when? I didn’t even know he that he dated, let alone have a kid with someone…"
Either do "I didn't know that he dated" or "I didn't know he dated."
Other times, you had "the damian" when you meant "that damian", and vice versa.
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Dec 13, 2010 17:02:38 GMT -5
ohhh my bad... i promise i will try harder next time. but please remember, i am only in the seventh grade, my grammer aint the best yet.... sooo and thanx for correcting me. i appreciate it a LOT!!!
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Post by laurenne on Dec 13, 2010 22:02:18 GMT -5
Well, I loved the update. And, don't worry, I have horrible grammar and I graduated high school 3 years ago. I can't wait for the next update.
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Post by orinocoflow on Dec 13, 2010 22:48:48 GMT -5
Only 7th grade? These are really good! sorry im criticizing you so much update soon, anyway!
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