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Post by celticbear on Dec 14, 2010 0:14:54 GMT -5
Miss Meg! for somebody in the 7th grade you are doing just fine! I'm so glad Paul and Damo are going to help Aria meet Ryan. Can't wait for the next Update! The Fireworks are really going to explode when Ryan finds out who Aria is! UPDATE SOON! PLEASE!
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Dec 14, 2010 15:19:41 GMT -5
yes, i am only in 7th grade and i probably should say that i'm not even 13 yet, but i will be 2moro so pleeeeeeeaaaase dont yell at me for joining this site underaged, please, i freaking beg u!!! and thanks sooooo much, your reviews/comments mean the world to me!!!! love you guys!!! and yes, i've been told that i'm a pretty good writer for someone who's only 12... soon to be thirteen...
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Post by orinocoflow on Dec 14, 2010 16:03:30 GMT -5
no problem joining this site, thats why its G-rated! im 14 myself, and we actually have quite a few teengers here, so no problem at all! Happy early Birthday, if I dont catch you tomorrow!
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Dec 14, 2010 17:06:10 GMT -5
awww thanks Ori...
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Post by celticbear on Dec 14, 2010 22:37:49 GMT -5
HAPPY BIRTHDAY MISS MEG! ENJOY THE START OF YOUR TEEN YEARS! YOU ONLY OF SIX OF THEM,SO MAKE EVERY ONE OF COUNT AND DO SOMETHING SPECIAL EACH YEAR!
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Post by orinocoflow on Dec 14, 2010 23:08:19 GMT -5
*cough* seven *cough*
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Dec 15, 2010 21:13:08 GMT -5
Chapter 7
That night, after I had gotten in from my walk with Paul and Damian, I sat down and started to watch whatever was on TV. Which was absolutely nothing. So, I popped in one of the movies I had brought with me into the DVD player and watched that. I was halfway through the movie I was watching when I heard a knock on the door. ¡§Who is it?¡¨ I call. ¡§Leonardo DiCaprio!¡¨ a deep male voice called back to me. ¡§Hardy har-har. What do you want Damian?¡¨ I shout back over the movie. ¡§Am I allowed to come in?¡¨ he asked. I sighed and got up to answer the door, not even bothering to pause my movie. ¡§I guess, just don¡¦t trash the place.¡¨ I say while letting him in. He laughs and heads straight for the mini fridge that is right next to the TV. ¡§Are you serious man? After all that food you ate today?¡¨ I scoff at him as he pulls out a ton of food from the fridge. ¡§Uh, yeah. Dude, remember what Paul said? ¡¥I have the stomach that is equal to ten grown men¡¦.¡¨ He comments as he grabs some chips to go along with all the food that he got from the fridge. I shake my head in disgust and I go and sit back on the couch so that I could enjoy my movie. He sits down next to me. ¡§Whatcha watching?¡¨ he asks, shoving a sandwich into his mouth. ¡§Grown Ups.¡¨ I say back. I can¡¦t help but notice that in three bites he is done with the sandwich and is now starting on one of the many bags of chips that he got. ¡§You know, if my mother saw you right now she¡¦d probably kick you outta the house for being such a pig.¡¨ I comment. ¡§You said your mother died. How?¡¨ he asks, totally ignoring my comment. ¡§Oh, uh well¡K it¡¦s a long story. Like I mean REALLY long.¡¨ I say. ¡§Good, I like long stories.¡¨ He said, putting his feet up on the coffee table. ¡§Of course you do.¡¨ I mutter under my breath. See, the truth was, I don¡¦t really want to tell him what happened to my mother, but I guess now I have too. And so, my story begins¡K
*sorry, this may not be the greatest, but it¡¦s the best I can do right now¡K sorry. And I should tell you, that Aria will be telling Ryan about who she is any time know, sooo keep reading. Love y¡¦all for the reviews and thanx sooo much for the birthday wishes!!!! I should probably let you know that I had a great day and that I am now OFFICIALLY 13!!! Love y¡¦all and keep reviewing¡K ƒº*
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Dec 15, 2010 21:14:39 GMT -5
i'm just gonna say this, i have no idea why there are weird symbols all over the new chapter. i did not put them there and i have no idea how they got there!!! so please, pretty please, excuse them!!! thanks. Love ya Meaghan
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Post by celticbear on Dec 15, 2010 23:06:05 GMT -5
No Prob Meg! and I'm glad you had a wonderful 13th B-day! You have Damo down pat!,when it comes to food! LOL. UPDATE SOON! PLEASE!
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Post by orinocoflow on Dec 15, 2010 23:31:12 GMT -5
Love how he made himself right at home there! lol
Happy 13th!
Update soon!
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Post by laurenne on Dec 16, 2010 20:16:38 GMT -5
I loved the update. I can't wait to find out how Ryan reacts. Update soon, please.
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Dec 18, 2010 7:41:09 GMT -5
i'm sorry it's been awhile, but i am having writer's block and i have NO FREAKIN' clue on what to write!!! so if y'all would be soooo kind and PM me some ideas, i would be FOREVER greatful!!!! thanks a ton!!! meaghan
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Post by celticbear on Dec 18, 2010 21:12:41 GMT -5
Meaghan! it's so plain on the nose on your Face! You need to write the Update where Aria meets Ryan and tells him she is his Daughter!
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Post by orinocoflow on Dec 18, 2010 21:43:55 GMT -5
or she can continue to delay, not finding the right way to tell him, and then he might find out through someone else, say overhear Damo and Paul talking, or have one of those two accidentally slip some detail.
other choice, is she tells him but he shakes it off, saying that she is just a fan trying to connect, since she did tell damo that she was a "huge" fan, remember?
update soon!
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Dec 19, 2010 17:49:31 GMT -5
Chapter 8
“Well, it all started about two years ago when my mom fell down a flight of stairs…” I began.
Flashback…
“Mom, oh my God, are you alright?!?” fifteen year old Aria Kelly exclaimed, running towards her mother who had just falling down a flight of stairs. When her mother didn’t answer, Aria started to worry. “Mom, mom, MOM!!! Please answer me!” she cried, tapping her mom on the shoulder. Nothing. “Oh God… oh God…” Aria muttered as she ran to the phone to dial 911. When the ambulance got to her house, the paramedics quickly strapped Aria’s mom onto the gurney and drove her to the nearest hospital.
3 hrs. and 37 mins. Later…
“Is there any family member here that is related to Ms. Rosalina Neely?” a guy nurse asked. Aria stood up and walked over to the guy. “Will she be alright?” she asked as soon as the guy nurse brought her out into the hall of the waiting room. “For now, yes. But, we have made a discovery about your mom that may not be so good.” He said calmly. “What kind of discovery?” Aria asked slowly, fearing the worst. “Well, sweetie, I’ll make this short. Your mother has a tumor forming in her head.” The doctor said. “NO!!! YOU ARE LYING!!!” Aria shouted. “I wish I was, believe me. But what I just said is the truth. I’m sorry.” He said to the crying girl. “Ho-ho-how long?” Aria asked through tears. “It’s hard to decide. But my guess would be a year or two. I’m very sorry.” Then the guy nurse walked off, leaving Aria all alone.
End of Flashback…
“And then two years later she died.” I concluded. Tears had starting falling. “I’m sooo sorry Aria, I really am.” Damian said, wrapping his strong arms around me. We sat like that for awhile and then, pretty soon, we fell asleep.
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