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Post by celticbear on Jan 1, 2011 20:43:54 GMT -5
Well it looks like Zara has forgiven Declan and she's sweet on him! Poor Paul and Ryan! Shay good Update! But we still need to know who the Mastermind is so that Paul and Ryan can arrest him/her and put them away for a long time! UPDATE SOON! PLEASE!
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Post by angelenia100 on Jan 5, 2011 17:50:08 GMT -5
You have to update!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by shaybo on Jan 17, 2011 20:57:23 GMT -5
I'm trying to think.
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Post by angelenia100 on Jan 19, 2011 12:08:52 GMT -5
Shay If you want a little help let me know. I might be able to give you a little help. Or read a real life murder mystery and see what they do.
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Post by shaybo on Feb 8, 2011 16:39:25 GMT -5
Oh God I hate this . I have an urge to start another story, but I have to finish this one first.
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Post by shaybo on Feb 8, 2011 17:06:08 GMT -5
After they finish their interview they all leave the room. Paul is still perplexed that a mole and murderer is still out there. Dom taps Paul on the shoulder and in her best Mae West immatation says, "Buy me a drink sailor?" Paul smiles and laughs, "Who was that?" Dom pouts, "That was supposed to be Mae West." Ryan roles his eyes, "Hey Dom don't give up your day job." Dom just sticks out her tounge and gives him a raspberry. Paul goes into Phil's office and fills him in on the interview, "Paul do you think that maybe he was faking it?" Paul shakes his head, "No way Dom is too good. She'd spot it a mile a way." Phil looks at Paul, "Paul I hate to say this, but we need help." Paul looks up at Phil, throws up his hands, and jumps up, "Phil NO we're not going to the Feds." "I'm sorry Paul we have no choice. They have more resources then we do." Paul finally relents.
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Post by celticbear on Feb 8, 2011 23:00:39 GMT -5
Hey Shay I would love to be one of the Feds!Who just happens to have thing for one Federal agent Keith. Other than that,great UPDATE!
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Post by shaybo on Feb 10, 2011 16:34:33 GMT -5
As Paul leaves Phil's office Phil makes a phone call to Sharon, "Sharon this is Phill. Yeah we're going to need help on this one." Phil fills Sharon in on what's going on. Then he hangs up. After Sharon hangs up he calls Keith and George in, "Guys looks like we have a problem." So she fills them in on what's been going on. Keith and George look at Sharon, "What do you mean Zara's alive?" Is this some kind of joke?" Sharon shakes her head, "Fraid not boys. She thougt that if she planted some ideas into her computer and used her and her plans as bait. That she'd catch the mole that way, but it back fired and her twin sister got killed." George and Keith look at Sharon, "Is Declan ok?" Sharon looks up, "Yeah George he's fine just feels guilty aout what he did." Keith stands up and slams his hand on the desk, "Sharon it wasn't even his fault. He didn't know what he was doing." Sharon looks over at Keith, "We all know that, but he feels like it's his fault that he didn't do anything to stop it." They stop talking as a secretary comes into the room with more papers to sign. Sharon signs the papers and the secretary leaves the room. Next the secratary goes to her cell phone and makes a phone call, "Sir we have a problem they know about what we did to that agent." The voice on the other end of the line says, "Don't panic I've got a back up plan. Meet me at the warhouse and we'll talk later. In the mean time keep your eyes and hears open, " "Yes sir." Then she hangs up.
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Post by celticbear on Feb 10, 2011 22:24:50 GMT -5
So now we know who the Mole is! Sharon's secretary! Remember Shay if you deciede to put me into the story, I want to be one of the Good Guys! Great Update! LOOKING FORWARD TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
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Post by shaybo on Feb 25, 2011 18:15:34 GMT -5
The next day Paul, Ryan, Keith, and George get together to see what they have so far. Just as Paul's about to say something the phone rings, "Yeah Paul here. Ok dead body where? Ok the warehouse district. On it."Paul grabs his coat, "They found a body. It may or may not be connected, so you might as come along." Keith looks at Paul, "Hey look We don' like wotking with you either, but we have no choice. So we might as well suck it up and deal with it." Paul smiles, "You speak your mind I like it. We might just get a long after all." They get to the wearhouse and open up the door. When they do they look up to see Sharon's secretary hanging from the ceiling.
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Post by celticbear on Feb 25, 2011 22:34:31 GMT -5
Wow! Shay Short but what a shocking find! UPDATE WHEN YOU CAN! PLEASE!
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Post by shaybo on Feb 28, 2011 20:43:47 GMT -5
Keith calls in the C.S.U. to collect evidence and take photographs. While they're doing that Paul cuts down the body. Next a brunette goes up to the body, kneels down, and proceeds to examine the body. Keith comes up and kneels down next to her, "Hey CB whatcha got?" "Hey Keith you sure know how to show a girl a good time don'tcha. Well you've got a female about 30 years of age time of death was about 11:30 p.m. There was no signs of a sexual assault, and cause of death was strangulation, but I need to take her back to the morgue to know more." Keith winks at her, "Sorry CB next time I'll take you to a nice restaurant." Paul and Ryan look at them, "Hey Keith would you like us to leave you two alone?" Keith smiles and CB blushes. They all leave and go back to the FBI headquarters.
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Post by celticbear on Feb 28, 2011 21:16:40 GMT -5
Shay! I love you for this Update! it made my night! Thanks for my romance with Keith! And he better make it up to me with that nice dinner! I want the works! UPDATE SOON! PLEASE! LOVE HOW YOU GAVE ME DUCKY'S JOB IN NCIS!
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Post by shaybo on Feb 28, 2011 22:36:32 GMT -5
Not a problem CB. Glad you liked it.
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Post by shaybo on Apr 12, 2011 17:01:44 GMT -5
The body gets loaded into the van. Then gets driven to the FBI morgue. Paul, Ryan, Keith, and George look around for more clues and also do a little brain storming Keith starts off, "Ok she walks into the building to meet her "boss". She sees "Him" and begins to panic." George continues, "She tells "Him" that she has to confess." Paul goes on, " He calms her by gaining her trust and then strangles her." Ryan pipes up, "How do we know it's a he? For all we know the murderer could be a she." Paul looks at Ryan, "I don't think so Ryan. I mean if the murderer was female she could've strangled her, but she wouldn't have the strength to hang her." Keith pipes up what if the murderer had an acomplice?" While they're tossing ideas back and forth they don't know that they're being listened to, "They're getting close to close." She thinks to herself, "They can't not now. I've got to much riding on this."
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