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Post by Deleted on Feb 27, 2011 16:56:28 GMT -5
ooh loving it great update i so want to be Fynn in this story at this part when they kiss :wink:
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Post by fallingn2ct on Mar 4, 2011 9:01:19 GMT -5
For Those wondering about the full Lyrics to the song that Neil played and sang, here they are No More Heroes- WestLife When the waves are crashing down
Pulling you to sorrow
I will sail you back to shore
When there are no more heroes
Over under, near or far
I’ll be right beside you
Standing here with open arms
When there are no more heroes
Chorus:
And through it all
And through it all
When you’re tired and you stumble I will carry you
When starlight falls, my love will guide you home
You’ll never be alone
When there are no more heroes
It was you who showed me how
Brought me back to glory
Through hopelessness and darkest days
It was breath you gave me
Chorus repeats about 3-4 more times.
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Post by fallingn2ct on Mar 4, 2011 9:52:44 GMT -5
"Would you like to get some lunch?", Neil asked as he and Fynn walked back towards the car.
"Sure," she nodded as her phone began to ring,"Hang on", she had to dig the device out of her pocket,"Hey Laur," she answered.
"Mommy, it's me," Mia giggled on the other end.
"Hey baby girl," she laughed,"What are you up too?"
"We are having some lunch right now and then we are going to some more stores. Keith bought me some candy, but Aunt Lauren won't let me have any til after lunch."
"Well, Aunt Lauren is doing a good job then. What are you having for lunch?"
"Ummmm....chicken fingers and fries. Oh and some sprite."
"That sounds delicious! Neil and I are going to get some lunch here pretty soon too. Are you being a good girl?"
"Yes, I am being very good. Want to talk to Aunt Lauren?"
"Sure," she looked at Neil who held a smile on his face while unlocking the car for her,"I'll be off in a sec," she whispered.
"No worries," he replied helping to put her camera bag and his guitar in the back seat.
"Hey sis!", Lauren said brightly.
"So, everything's going okay?"
"Everything is fine. Your daughter and Keith are little conspiracy pals. I am going to have to kepe them separated."
"Sounds like you have your hands full," she laughed,"We should be back before long."
"Take your time, we're fine."
"Thanks Laur, I love you, give my baby a hug for me."
"Love you too and I will."
"Mia checking in on her mum?", Neil grinned.
"Yeah," Fynn said buckling her seatbelt,"She had the little episode this morning about her dad and I told her to call me anytime she wanted too."
"I see," he said softly,"I didn't mean to make light of it."
"I didn't elaborate on what happened and you didn't know."
"How is she most of the time?"
Fynn thought about the question tapping her fingers on the steering wheel,"Honestly, she seems to do okay. Being that she's only five, I'm not sure the extent of what she comprehends. It's moments like yesterday & today when I am simply left scrambling for words and trying to figure it out. It's a day at a time for both of us."
"You are doing things right Fynn, for the both of you. As I have told you before, being a single parent is no easy feat. Let alone be one who has had the other parent pass away suddenly."
She cast a sideways glance at him, how could he be so simply understanding. He was willing to simply wait for her, to be there for she and Mia in what ever capacity he could. It scared her and yet comforted at the same time. She knew somewhere inside that Neil Byrne was going to be in her life for a long time, possibly forever and that idea shook her to the core.
"You in there?", Neil shook her arm gently.
"Sorry", she laughed shaking her head,"Just lost in thought."
"Thoughts about what?", he smiled.
"Nothing imparticular," she felt her face being to heat up.
"Oh really? Is that why your cheeks are suddenly a lovely shade of pink?", he said running a finer along her cheek and could feel the warmth.
"Knock it off," she slapped at his hand playfully.
"Caught you in a lie Fynn," he teased taking her hand and softly grazing her knuckles with his lips. Her skin was soft and smelled lightly of a warm vanilla,"Smell lovely," he said trailing his lips over her wrist.
"I'm driving", she tugged her hand free and ran a hand through her hair.
"Adorable when you get flustered," he mused.
"What ever," she rolled her eyes pulling into the first restaurant she saw,"You're finding easy ins."
"Easy ins?", he laughed,"Fynn there are no easy ins with you."
"Apparently there are," she said climbing out of the car.
"Not really," he said holding the door open for her.
"What do you mean by that?"
"I care about you Fynn and that drives you crazy and scares you," he said softly to avoid anyone who may be eaves dropping,"It scares me too, but in a very good way."
"Patience," she said taking his hand in hers,"Just be patient with me."
"I have a lot of patience," he smiled kissing her gently,"When you decide that you're completely ready, I will be here."
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Post by CelticPrincess24 on Mar 4, 2011 16:02:54 GMT -5
I love it! Please, update soon!
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Mar 4, 2011 16:24:19 GMT -5
update sooon!!! that was really good!!!
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Post by laurenne on Mar 4, 2011 19:27:34 GMT -5
I loved it. Update soon, please.
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Post by puppylovegirl95 on Mar 4, 2011 19:48:32 GMT -5
another amazing update i love this story! ;D
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Post by fallingn2ct on Mar 4, 2011 23:47:38 GMT -5
The ride back to the hotel was talkative amongst the two. Neil was interested in the photography that Fynn loved so much. He could see the passion when she talked about capturing a moment, an emotion, a movement. That it would be forever enclosed in the single frame of a photo.
"That photo of Mia at the funeral is absolutely stunning," he commented.
Fynn swallowed thickly,"That was a hard day, being able to have a camera in my hand helped a lot."
"I think she will appreciate it more as she gets older."
"I hope so," she pulled into the parking garage of the hotel,"I will work on editing the photos this evening and have them ready for you to see tomorrow."
"You work quickly, I like that," he took his guitar out of the back seat.
"If I was back home, you wouldn't have them for a few weeks. I'm a bit of a perfectionist."
"One more thing I get to learn about," he slung the soft case over his shoulder,"Shall we do dinner tonight then?"
Fynn sighed chewing on the inside of her cheek, she wanted to say yes, but she knew that Mia needed time with her,"I haven't been with Mia much today and she probably needs some mommy time."
"That's fine," he nodded,"Maybe a drink later on tonight?"
"Neil Byrne!," she laughed exasperated as they stepped off the elevator.
"What?', he smiled innocently,"I just want to spend time with you Fynn, that's all."
She felt the heat creeping into her face yet again,"And that's very sweet of you. But I have a little girl to think about and I need to make sure that she isn't feeling left out or put to the side when it comes to me seeing someone."
"So we are seeing each other?", he had caught the line quickly.
"You know what I meant!"
"You said you had to make sure Mia was taken care of when it came to you seeing someone, I presumed you meant me," he still kept the same smile with a twinkle of mischief in his eyes.
"I need to check on my daughter," she shook her head while laughing. She attempted to insert the key into the door when she felt his arms slide around her waist,"What are you doing?"
"Hoping for a kiss goodbye," he said leaning the guitar against the wall.
Fynn turned to face him, not realizing how close he was to her,"Neil, Mia is inside and if she opens the door."
"It's just a kiss Fynn", he said brushing her lips lightly. He felt her lean closer against him, he watched her lips trying to form an argument.
"I.............I shouldn't," she stammered,"I don't....don't....want....her," she gave up as his lips covered her own slowly and gently. Why was she like putty when he made these plays against her? She should make him stop, push him away, and tell him that the answer was no. Her body wouldn't respond to any logical demands that her brain made. Instead she melded against him, her arms encircled his neck as he cupped the nape of her neck and held her tightly against him. Neil was gentle with her, keeping the kiss sweet and simple, but drawn out. He didn't want her to be afraid of him getting closer. He didn't want to let her go, he nearly feared the separation that would soon have to come to allow for air. She fit so perfectly in his arms and her lips were like a puzzle piece that fit perfectly and snugly into place.
"Drinks tonight?", he said as they both sucked in the much needed air.
"We'll see," she said slipping into the hotel room.
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Post by celticbear on Mar 4, 2011 23:53:13 GMT -5
So Do I! Fall this was the best update yet! I love how Laurene described the relationship between Keith and Mia! She better watch out with those two! Also love how Neil is willing to wait it out to claim Fynn has his own! HE IS GOING TO BE THE PERFECT NEW DADDY FOR MIA AND KEITH IS THE PERFECT UNCLE FOR MIA! UPDATE SOON! PLEASE!
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Post by CelticPrincess24 on Mar 5, 2011 0:02:54 GMT -5
That was very sweet! please update soon!
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Mar 5, 2011 11:29:24 GMT -5
that was sweet... now UPDATE SOOON!!!! oh, and CB is rite, Keith would make the perfect uncle and Neil would make the perfect dad...
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Post by puppylovegirl95 on Mar 5, 2011 18:57:13 GMT -5
they are too cute! awesome update!
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Post by Deleted on Mar 6, 2011 22:47:03 GMT -5
ooh wonderful Updates Cant Wait to Read More
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Post by fallingn2ct on Mar 7, 2011 10:07:10 GMT -5
They did not meet for drinks that night, Neil felt slightly disappointed, but knew that Fynn had needed to be with Mia. The little girl had an upset stomach after the sweets that Keith had bought for her. Instead of spending the evening in the hotel lounge he opted for room service and a film.
"Staying in Byrne?", Keith said sitting on the couch to put on his shoes.
"Yeah, Fynn is staying with Mia. Nice job on that by the way," he grinned.
"She wasn't supposed to eat the whole bag!", he defended with a laugh,"Lauren and I were up front and when we looked back the bag was gone and Mia was smiling with chocolate on her face."
"Last time you baby sit," he shook his head taking a bite of his burger.
"I have done you a favor the last few days mate."
"Much appreciated by the way."
"Anyway, Lauren and I are going out this evening. You will be impressed."
"Why is that?"
"Because I am taking her for a romantic dinner, just the two of us, some wine and Italian food."
"Nice work Harkin," he nodded,"have a good time."
"See ya", he gave a wave as he left the room.
Neil switched from the chair to the couch to stretch out some. He hadn't realized how tired he was until his body fully relaxed. His eye lids grew heavier as he tried to focus on the image on the screen.
"How are you feeling honey?", Fynn asked Mia who was curled up with her head in her mother's lap.
"Okay", she sighed with a yawn,"I'm never eating candy ever ever again."
Fynn stifled a laugh,"See why mommy tells you no sometimes?"
"Yes," she pulled her blanket closer to her,"But they were yummy and Keith and Aunt Lauren said I could have some."
"Some, not the whole bag silly girl," she placed a kiss on her head,"Are you okay to lay by yourself? I need to work on the pictures I took today."
"Are they of Neil?", she looked up at her mother.
"They are, I will show you after I finish them."
"I think I will be asleep," she said closing her eyes,"Maybe tomorrow."
"That's fine sweetheart," she smiled and carefully stood up. She stretched allowing her body to shake off the position she had been in for a few hours. She pulled out her lap top and sat at the small round table. She plugged in the small memory card and waited as the images came up. She clicked on the first one studying the image carefully. For the next several hours she went through each image adjusting them until they were exactly what she felt they should be. Neil had been an easy subject to work with. He was very relaxed and in his element when he played his guitar. He nearly looked other wordly in some of the shots with the light splaying across him & glinting of the guitar. The show was the following night and then, she wasn't sure how long it would be before she saw him. The thought of that sent different feelings through her, feelings that confused her. Perhaps it was best they would have some separation. She needed to sort out her feelings and get Mia back into her routine of school and time with family. What were her feelings for him? How could she even ask herself that when Isaac had not been gone long. Why had Neil been suddenly dropped into her life? She sighed looking at the clock on the lap top, it was nearing two am,"Enough for now", she yawned saving the files and then closing the computer down. She kicked off her shoes and lay down next to Mia falling quickly into a deep sleep.
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Post by angelenia100 on Mar 7, 2011 11:28:51 GMT -5
Please update soon. It is very good indeed.
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