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Post by celticbear on Feb 28, 2012 21:26:24 GMT -5
Fall! Glad to see the twins are doing fine! LOVE THE NAMES! MIA IS GOING TO BE THE PERFECT BIG SISTER!
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Post by missufishy on Feb 28, 2012 21:28:00 GMT -5
great update.Glade the twins are doing well.
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Post by fallingn2ct on Feb 29, 2012 13:21:05 GMT -5
"Mommy, I'm happy Ana and Paddy are finally home", Mia said as Fynn tucked her into bed.
"So am I honey", she smiled,"You have been such a big help today."
"I tried to be", she said with a yawn.
"You get to sleep sweetheart", she kissed her forehead.
"Are the babies asleep yet?"
"I don't know, daddy was rocking them while you were in the bath."
"Kiss them goodnight for me", she closed her eyes and turned on her side.
"I will baby girl", she smoothed her hair before rising and turning off the lights. She strecthed her tired muscles and made her way to the nursery, stopping in the doorway as she spotted Neil pacing the floor with their son in his arms. He was singing softly to him, the baby's cheek was pressed against his shoulder, his mouth slightly open.
"Hey there", Neil stopped as he saw her.
"Little guy having trouble falling asleep?", she crossed to him.
"He was a little fussy, but I think I finally got him calmed down", he kissed the side of his son's head inhaling his sweet scent.
"Different feeling isn't it?", Fynn said quietly as she checked on Ana.
"It is", he lay Paddy in the crib,"I could just watch them sleep."
"I remember doing all this with Mia, I never imagined being able to do it again."
"And now?", he took her hand as they left the nursery with a baby monitor.
"I couldn't imagine not having any of them", she sighed happily. They made their way downstairs to the living room. The house was warm and quiet against the cold outside. The volume on the television was low and a comfortable silence had enveloped the husband and wife. Fynn looked at Neil who's eyes had just fluttered to a close. Never had she imagined that in just a few short years her life would be with someone like him and in another country. When she lost Isaac, her world had crumbled and she had felt lost, fearing that she would never be whole again. That had changed the day Neil had nearly run her down in the park, the memory bringing a smile to her face. Slowly, piece by piece he had helped to repair her heart and to show her that it was possible to love again. His love had built a bridge that connected their hearts in a way that she had thought didn't exist. She sighed with a contentment. contentment of her life and her family and her love. Love had a built a bridge that connected them all.
*****THE END***********
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Feb 29, 2012 15:07:35 GMT -5
awww..that was sooooo good!!! this was such a great story!!! i loved it sooo much and now im kinda sad that its over...great job with this!!!
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Post by missufishy on Feb 29, 2012 15:53:20 GMT -5
this was a really great story I agree with Meg I loved it so much and now i'm kinda sad that its over.
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Post by onyxfyrefly on Feb 29, 2012 19:42:18 GMT -5
That was beautiful! I'm sad to see it end and I hope you'll write more stories!
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Post by Deleted on Feb 29, 2012 19:47:07 GMT -5
I loved this story. I am sad to see it end. hopefully you right more stories . I realy like your writing style.
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Post by !!DerryChick!! on Feb 29, 2012 19:53:41 GMT -5
Perfect ending!!! Loved it
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Post by celticbear on Feb 29, 2012 21:52:52 GMT -5
Fall! I hated to see this story to end! BUT YOU ENDED THE STORY IN YOUR USUAL PERFECT DESCRIPTIVE STYLE! THIS IS ONE OF MY FAVORITES OF YOURS! KEEP WRITTING!
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Post by fallingn2ct on Mar 1, 2012 8:07:52 GMT -5
Thank you all so much for all the feed back & comments on every update. You all are why I continue to write these stories. I appreciate each & everyone of you more than I could possibly express. I have a story going in the Ryan forum right now called "Torn", I also have one in Emmet's forum called "Music of the Heart". In the Keith forum under the completed stories I have one called "To Know What Love Is", also in the Ryan forum under completed stories is my first one I ever wrote called "Desperado" I have some more ideas swirling about, but I am trying to concentrate on the current stories to make sure I can devote the time I want too and need too. THANK YOU ALL!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by puppylovegirl95 on Mar 28, 2012 16:22:27 GMT -5
Fall, this story was absolutely fantastic. You are an awesome author, I can't wait to read your other stories!
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Post by fallingn2ct on Mar 30, 2012 12:48:26 GMT -5
Thank you!!! I have a new one going in the Keith forum called "All Out of Love".
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