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Post by A Once Mc Ginty on Apr 2, 2011 21:08:43 GMT -5
(Prologue) Keith is back in Donegal with Damian but sneaks away to see a rival surfers sister. This is the story of how the fude between the families hope to end.
(Keith's POV) "I'm going out surfing!" I told the lads, grabbing my surf board, changing into my wetsuit, and running off to my secret surf location in Donegal. "Don't get eaten!" Damian joked just before I left. I ran off in my fancy old style car to the beach. The waves are just as they should be, not better, nor worst. "Aho! Aho Donegal! Aho!" I yelled just before running into the Irish water. I surfed for I'd like to say 30 minutes, before I wasn't alone at the beach.
(Samantha's POV) The sun, the sky, the ocean blue, the young man surfing? When did that man come? Shall the world turn on him?
(Keith's POV) She stood on a rock watching over me as I surf. I'm shy, and don't like when someone I don't know watches me surf. I felt like she needed to leave soon or I would be the one leaving.
(Samantha's POV) I never seen anyone like him surf so great. I must meet this man, but whom is he? Is he known or just a local? I walked down to the beach as I saw him wipe out on a strong tall wave towering over his head. "I'm Samantha Lee, your such an amazing surfer. May I ask what your name is?" I asked trying to he professional. "I'm Keith Harkin, I've been surfing here forever but never seen you once," The young man answered. "I'm from Belfast, I'm just visiting family here. Do you know Damian Lee?" I questioned nicely. "I've heard of him. Is he a local surfer?" Keith became interested. "He's my older brother and he is a local surfer. My whole family surfs for local groups." I believe I began to brag about this time.
(Keith's POV) She was gorgeous on the water and land. She looked just like her brother. They both had the blue eyes and dark brown/black hair with sun blonde highlights. The height seems incredibly different; Her brother short; Samantha herself tall; Damian was packed with muscle; Yet, Samantha was as skinny as a twig.
(Samantha's POV) He's he, but shall I say he could be mine?
(Keith's POV) I just wish! I just wish she was mine! I can't help it, I must kiss her! I must!
(Samantha's POV) He did? He did just kiss me? May I fall into his hands and watch his blonde colour hair blow in the wind?
(Keith's POV) "Yes," I said laying her down on the beach holding hands. I must be in love with her, but I just met her. I looked her into her blue colour eyes and kissed her again. I need to stop.
(Samantha's POV) I'm in love and no one can stop this. Who is this man? He's to perfect. I released his hands and felt his hair brush onto my face. I can't tell my brother about him though. We must not be together.
(Keith's POV) She's more than just a girl, she's mine. I kissed her one more time and laid next to Samantha on the sand. Everything about her is perfect. She's perfect but the past......
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Post by celticbear on Apr 2, 2011 21:32:28 GMT -5
DAMOJ! THIS STORY IS GOING TO BE GREAT! LOVE THE START! IT'S SO LIKE KEITH TO FALL IN LOVE AT FIRST SITE! UPDATE SOON! PLEASE!
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Post by Deleted on Apr 3, 2011 12:39:42 GMT -5
liking it please update
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Post by A Once Mc Ginty on Apr 13, 2011 22:26:14 GMT -5
(Samantha's POV) Why is he so perfect? He's everything! He's enemies with my brother though. I was told never to be with enemies. Does he remember? I hope he does.
(Keith's POV) I heard a car pull up; it was Damo, whom sat on the edge of the rocks watching us.
(Damian's POV) "ROMAO! WHY ART THOU JULIET?" I joked throwing my book to the ground and jumping off. I watched Keith grab his board and run away from me.
(Samantha's POV) "Bye!" I yelled as I watched him run from the kid. Who are these people? I might never know. I hope I see him again soon. Keith Harkin <3
1 week later at Donegal Surf Competition
(Keith's POV) "I'm going to get this one!" I yelled hitting Damo's head and racing toward the ocean wave. I swear the wave was the highest I ever surfed. It was higher than the Empire State Build doubled!
(Samantha's POV) "Damian! Your going to kick that kid out of the standing right?" I told my brother. I didn't recognize who it was in the wet suit but once I heard the name and score I raced to him.
(Damian's POV) Who's that?
(Keith's POV) She's here? NO! NO! NO SHE CAN'T POSSIBLY BE HERE FOR DAMIAN LEE! I have to run!
(Samantha's POV) Why is he running? He can't be remember because of the rival here. "Keith! Keith Harkin! Mr. Harkin don't run away!" I yelled. Keith turned around and grabbed my hand. We ran to the the rocks above where people watched the surfers.
(Keith's POV) I didn't know what to say so I just hugged her and gave her a kiss. "You heartthrob, my brother is going to kill you if he finds were together," She spoke with a worry. "He'll never know! That's why people have secret relationships. Rivals I am with your brother, but that doesn't mean I have to be the same with you." "Kiss me now if your not lying," she told me. I kissed her one more time.
(Samantha's POV) He's not lying! I can't believe he's not lying. I kissed him once feeling Keith push me away. He turned me around and....
(Keith's POV) Damian stood right behind her. I tried walking away but his face seemed evil, and wanted to kill. Behind me I felt Damo's hand grab my elbow.
(Damian's POV) Who's that? I don't know what to do. "Keith," I began. "Not know Damo," he interrupted. "Damo? Damian? Why steal my name? You pity my rival! You pity my sister! You pity me!" Damian, I believe his name was, yelled at me. "You pity the world, with hate and sorrow. Why not let love end rivals? Is the rivalry that serious, or is it just this day?" I asked. "Not know Damo," Keith repeated to me.
(Keith's POV) SHUT UP DAMIAN! <Both>. I just want Samantha! I grabbed her hand and ran away from them. Damo ran after us but I didn't care much about Damo, only Damian.
(Samantha's POV) Is Damo his brother? But he only has a sister, Rebecca is it? I need to know.
(Keith's POV) "Your more than just a girl, Samantha. Your a rival of mine. Our love must be secret. Not one of our family member must know. Damian must not tell anyone," I respectfully mentioned kissing her. "Is Damo your brother?" she asked kissing me. "Damo? Yes he's my lad brother."
(Damian's POV) "Liar," I whispered as he whispered a curse word in return. I pushed Keith into Samantha knocking them down.
(Keith's POV) Does Damo really want me and Sam together?
(Samantha's POV) Ask. Ask. Ask? "Will you please leave?" Keith asked me. I slapped him and ran to Damian.
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Post by celticbear on Apr 13, 2011 22:48:56 GMT -5
Jennie! this is getting more and more interesting with each update! Me like a secret Romance! Also love how there are two Damians! I'm figuring when you mention Damo you are talking about our CT Lad McGinty! and using the full name of Damian for Sam's brother? UPDATE WHEN YOU CAN!
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Post by A Once Mc Ginty on Apr 15, 2011 21:30:51 GMT -5
(Damian's POV) "Keith, why do you want her to leave?" I asked. "Damo, she's annoying. I can't stand it knowing she only likes me because I'm her brothers rival," Keith responded to me. I felt like pushing him into the sand but my anger wouldn't let me.
(Keith's Pov) That's girl is annoying. May she leave the earth with her brother? I am Donegal's Surf Champ. Not Damian Lee. Damo doesn't understand anything I'm going through right now. "Why don't you leave Damo?" I asked. "You Like her! You LOVE her! Not lush but LOVE! Keith, you tell me I'm in love to much, your the one this time. Get her!" Damo said to me. I don't want to leave her with her brother. I WANT her. I NEED her. I LOVE her.
(Samantha's POV) He hates me. I don't know why he hates me so much. I sat on the sand near the rest of the surfers. Damian left to go home knowing he lost. I never would see anyone again.
(Damian's POV) I ran away from Keith as he got a tear in his eyes. I didn't know who to run to. I saw Samantha sitting on the beach and ran to her. She didn't look happy nor did she run away from me. "Samantha, where did Damian go?" I asked. "He left because he lost to your brother," she replied ticked off. "Keith loves you. He just doesn't like to admit it. Meet him at the local PUB near his home around 10 on Friday. Be causal and don't come earlier than him. Make it seem like you came out of random not planed. Remember Friday at 10," I said running off.
Friday at Local Bar
(Keith's POV) I need a relaxing beer on this mist full love life as I dare to forget the name Samantha Lee. I need no hope just her. No Damian just Damo. Only Samantha when she's not with Damian. I need Samantha Lee.
(Samantha's POV) Friday at 10. Friday at 10. Friday at 10. It's Friday but 9:30. I can't wait 30 minutes. I need to keep Keith on my mind. He's all I care about. Rival or not I love him. He's the one I need no matter what. Damian is no need. Damo, that name will be unforgettable. His young filled brother that's not even his brother.
(Keith's POV) Her lips so soft like the ocean brushing against mine. Her eyes like the ocean blue looking at me. Her body as small as a twig yet beautiful as an apple tree.
(Damian's POV) Their love is so pitiful
(Samantha's POV) It's Friday at 10. I must leave now. I walked to the PUB and saw Keith sitting at the bar with a beer. He was alone as if he knew nobody there. I sat at the bar with one seat between us.
(Keith's POV) One seat between. She must hate me. "Hey, you can move over. I need to tell you something," I said quietly. "If it's that you like me, I figured it out and Damo ended up telling me," she was smarter than I thought.
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Post by celticbear on Apr 15, 2011 21:59:47 GMT -5
Jennie! I love this Irish Version of Romeo and Juliet! Plus it also reminds of the old folk legend of the Hatfields and the McCoys! I say the you know what with Sam's brother and let Keith and Sam date in the open! Glad Damo found a way for those two to talk to each other! UPDATE SOON! PLEASE!
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Post by A Once Mc Ginty on May 14, 2011 16:04:54 GMT -5
(Keith's POV) "I love how Damo told you I liked you, well that fact is true, but I don't like how he ruins everything," I said giving Samantha a hug. "I actually believe you hinted it a wee-bit to much. But hinted gives you a wonder. I won't tell Damian about this. Just make sure Damo plans more things like this?" Samantha joked un-hugging me. "I have to go to Dublin tonight. I'll be back on Tuesday the earliest; next Friday the latest." She left me with a napkin, on it her cell phone number. I always told myself I was to busy to call but I pushed my mind into calling her the minute she left to the bar. "Samantha. Here's my number. Bye. Have fun in Dublin," I said saying goodbye and finishing up my pint of beer.
Thursday Morning
(Samantha's POV) "Mum may I go home now?" I pleaded. "Go ahead and see that boyfriend of yours," she complained to me. "How do you know about Keith?" I sat down on the kitchen table chair. "Oh darling, I know you like Keith. I mean I went into your room and I saw a picture of you and him in the frame wheel. How does Damian deal with you liking his rival honey?" "He doesn't even know. That's a wee bit of a problem."
(Keith's POV) I had waited so long for a call while Samantha was in Dublin. I knew something was wrong and I had to find out. "Beep. Beep. Beep. Beep," my phone vibrated. I didn't feel like getting it as I laid on my bed wrapped up.
(Damian's POV) I walked into the Harkin house being greeted by his sister, Rebecca. I saw Keith laying in his bed denying answering any phone call. "Keith! Why have you not been answering your phone? I've called like 5 times!" I yelled jumping on Keith.
(Keith's POV) "Shut up Damian! I've been sick dumb butt! Who's called besides you?" I asked pushing Damian off of the bed. "Me, your mum, dad and Samantha," Damian read off. "SAMANTHA?" "She just called stupid!" "Hand me the phone!" I grabbed the phone out of his hand and dialled Samantha. She didn't answer and I began panicking.
(Samantha's POV) "We're moving to New York, Samantha," my mum told me just before I left. I headed back to Belfast denying every call, even Keith's. I lost connection with him and I didn't know how to get back with him. That sun kissed blond guy just doesn't fit into my heart anymore. I couldn't stand looking at the picture wheel anymore and headed west to Donegal hoping he would allow just a wee bit visit before my flight.
(Keith's POV) I continued to lay in my bed with Damian sifting next to me watching Fottie. "Keith, you have a visitor," Rebecca told knocking on the half cracked door. "Damian, I need to see you." I watched Damian leave and a girl with black hair, but no highlights, walk in with a picture wheel. "Keith, I can't take being gone from you and know that I'm moving to New York, you can have it," Samantha handed the frame to me. "Why did you not tell me earlier?" I asked. She laughed and pulled the covers off me. "If I told you I wouldn't be able to come and personally tell you like now. I know you're going to come back to New York sometime so today isn't the last day. You never answered your phone." I hugged her, "I'm sick you idiot. Why do you think I've been laying here since you left?" "You're not wearing a shirt so it doesn't look like it. Mum's waiting for me outside so I must go. Burn the picture, and forget about my brother and I. I'm more than just a girl." "Bye," I whispered. I watched as she ran out to her mum. You could hear the car wheels leave. She was gone only until I see her again.
A Year Later On Fall Tour.
(Third Person POV) One beautiful day in New York City, Keith Harkin came to visit Samantha Lee just before traveling on tour. Samantha was in her small garden planting different flowers and cutting out the ones she thought were perfect. "Samantha," Keith whispered standing on the sidewalk. She lifted her head up seeing the hair blow in the wind.
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Post by celticbear on May 14, 2011 20:03:37 GMT -5
I wonder who the third person is? and I wonder how Sam is going to react to seeing Keith again! UPDATE SOON! PLEASE!
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Post by celticbear on May 15, 2011 21:48:47 GMT -5
OK I've chosen to take DamoJ up on her offer and help her out with this story!
Sam looked up when she heard her name and could not believe her eyes! Because standing right in front of her was Keith! The one guy she never thought she would ever see again! Before Sam could say anything, her cousin Treena came storming out of the house glaring daggers at Keith!
Me: WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE! DON'T YOU THINK YOU'VE HURT MY COUSIN ENOUGH ALREADY! WHY DON'T YOU TAKE THAT IRISH CHARM OF YOURS BACK WHERE YOU CAME FROM! BECAUSE IT WON'T WORK HERE ANYMORE! I stare at Sam waiting for her to agree with me!
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Post by A Once Mc Ginty on May 16, 2011 17:24:38 GMT -5
(Keith's POV) "I did nothing to her! And most of all wouldn't think of it!" I yelled turning around the the road. I heard Samantha walked up behind me and tapped me on the shoulder softly. "I thought you forgot about me? You know your a major idiot for coming here, right?" She whispered into my ear.
(Samantha's POV) I told him to burn EVERYTHING!!! Last time I saw him he was sick and that Damian kid set us up! To think I listened to a kid 5 years younger than me? WHAT A JOKE! Let's hope he knows I've changed since living with my mum to living with Cousin Treena.
(Keith's POV) I must be doing something wrong by what? She told me to visit her but she changed. I don't like this a wee bit. "Would you care to explain why you are here?" Samantha asked. "You told me to come and visit you but you moved away from your mum here? I wouldn't have come if I knew you were living with this lady you call your cousin!" I explained turning around and pushing Samantha to the ground. She wasn't happy at me, actually no one was now, not even Damian. SHOCKER!
(Samantha's POV) "You IDIOT! To think I liked you and hid it from my cousin? You're an idiot to come back. And no way on this Earth you're are going to call Treena that!" I yelled kicking Keith onto the road. Since the road was never used he never had to worry about a car hitting him. I mean Mr. Idiot walked here safely didn't he?
(Keith's POV) "Like you can try hurting me? I would of been much happier if I never saw you again! I would of stayed wrapped in the blankets, crying from being sick over you!" I stood up and grabbed my longboard. "What are you going to do?" Samantha asked. "Run away from the world?"
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Post by celticbear on May 16, 2011 21:21:57 GMT -5
While Keith and Sam where having their little arguement, I was sitting on the porch watching the whole thing! Loving how my naive Cousin was defending me! Yes I said naive, because secretly in my heart I had a Crush on Keith myself! So of course seeing them argue and not wanting to see each other every again made me one very happy person! But of course I could not let Sam see what was realy going on! I was very glad when I saw Keith pick up his longboard and leave. Because latter I had plans of looking him up.
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Post by A Once Mc Ginty on May 18, 2011 21:20:19 GMT -5
(Keith's POV) "I can do anything I want Samantha! I don't need you to tell me what to do and get me going places!" I yelled. I wanted to run but I watched her cousin glare at me from a far. Something was up and I had no way of finding out. But I just ruined everything in the matter of 2 minutes. I can't believe in myself anymore. She's going to find out. (Samantha's POV) "Go ahead and do it. I really don't care," I whispers turning my back walking to Cousin Treena. She had a plan on him, the cousin of just 4 years older than me. Yeah she's 3 years older than that hot blonde singer from Donegal, not like I CARE! He IS mine! (Keith's POV) I reached the tour bus and raced into my bunk. Damian was trying to stop me but I continued to push him away. I didn't want to talk to him nor the rest. (Samantha's POV) I walked into Treena's room hoping to see what she was doing. "What's that lads name?" she asked. "That lad is named Keith," I replied a wee bit questioning why on EARTH WOULD SHE WANT TO KNOW WHO KEITH R HARKIN IS? "Last name?" she bugged. "Har, what are you doing?" I asked jumping on the back of the chair she was sitting in. "Not looking him up!" she lied closing the screen down. "Damian sure knows that rival of his. Remember him? Same surfer, same name, same Keith Harkin." No! NO! NO! I did not just say that! "Keith HARKIN!!!" she yelled clicking search and seeing everything people wrote about him and photos that had been taken. She ended up finding a picture She DIDN'T need to see of US TOGETHER IN DONEGAL!
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Post by celticbear on May 18, 2011 21:38:27 GMT -5
Wow! Cousin you sure are one for keeping a secret! Hey think of it this way at least he's out of your life and you and your brother can go on has before! In the surfing world it's not a good Idea for you date your brothers rival! Hey I would love to sit here and chat but I have some errands to run! I leave the house and go to Starbucks and get my favorite drink and Keith's favorite drink plus some sweets and go to where the CT tour bus is. I knock on the door and Ryan answers, I ask to see Keith. Ryan gets a strange look on his face. Keith comes to the the door he's about to tell me to take a hike when he spies the food and the two Starbuck cups. I give him my Killer watt smile and tell him I come in peace and can we go somewhere real private to talk. I wait for Keith's reaction....(OPERATION STEAL KEITH FROM SAM HAS BEGUN)
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Post by A Once Mc Ginty on May 20, 2011 20:02:16 GMT -5
(Keith's POV) And she's here WHY? "Yeah sure we can go somewhere private but um Ryan and I were," I began saying. "We need to talk now!" Treena exclaimed. "If you want to know why on Earth I like that brat cousin of yours, here's the answer, I Don't KNOW! She's a brat and I don't care about her anymore. How did you find me?" I asked walking into the back room of bus stealing the Starbucks. "Why did you keep a secret from her the whole time?" she asked closing the door behind her. "Who is she?" Ryan asked on the other side.
(Samantha's POV) "Why did Cousin leave? She has no errands to run! She lied and she's going to get KEITH!" I yelled running out of the house to where I knew she would be. I found Damian standing outside the bus. "Your weird cousin is talking with Keith," he said opening the door for me.
(Keith's POV) "Why did you come here? Why are you trying to hit on me? Want to go surfing later today after the show?" I said opening the door and trying to get her out of the room. "Sure why not," she said kicking my longboard over to me. "It runs in your family." "What does?" "You know but can you tell me?"
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