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Post by celticbear on May 20, 2011 20:31:51 GMT -5
Just then I noticed Sam. But Keith had not seen her yet! So much to Keith's and everybody else's surprise I grabed Keith by the collar of his open shirt and Kiss him full and Passionately on the lips! Then I just Smirk at My cousin, give Keith a wink and tell him I surf way better than Sam Does! And I have the trophies to prove it! And that if he's up for a challenge he knows where he can find me! I leave the bus with quite a few people behind me. And as I head out the door I hear Ryan say: *NOW THATS WHAT I CALL A WOMAN* I turn back around and give Ryan a brillant smile and go to beach hopeing Keith takes me up on my challenge! Sam, after the shock wears off, Demands some answers from Keith!
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Post by A Once Mc Ginty on May 29, 2011 19:00:51 GMT -5
(Keith's POV) I slowly laid in my bunk wondering what had just happen. The mind set of that women, thinking she can bet me? "She's not going to bet me," I whispered. "Dude, if I was your age, I'd tap," Ryan joked sitting at the edge of my bunk. "No, not an a million years!" "You were just obsessed over her cousin last year!" "Still, no! I don't want anything to deal with that family. They get annoying!" "Accept her challenge and bet her!" "All the way I am!" I ran to the bathroom and changed into my wetsuit, grabbed my surfboard and jogged to the beach that I knew she was at.
(Samantha's POV) "If he bets your arse I'm going to laugh," I joked sitting on a lonesome rock. "He's not going to, I saw how he surfs," Treena smirked running into the water. "If she only knew I still liked that kid. The world would be so better if the pictures were never burnt. I just want to be back with that kid, but Treena has a crush on him. I don't know what to do," I laid on the rock seeing a blonde lad walk onto the beach. He didn't see me, and in fact he didn't want to. He was still mad at me and he was going to bet my cousin.
(Keith's POV) Not with her here, not with Samantha. "Must of you come?" I asked pushing her off the rock. "Do you seriously have a problem with me being here? Your an arse and I don't see why Treena can't just get over the fact you are going to win her!" she yelled pushing me into the sand. Her cousin didn't realise I had even arrived, but I watched her crash on a meter wave.
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Post by DaughterofOphelia on May 29, 2011 20:35:56 GMT -5
Update please!
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Post by celticbear on May 29, 2011 21:48:06 GMT -5
Sam saw me wipeout but with her being mad at me for my little stunt on the bus ignored the fact that I was in serious Trouble! But Keith being the Surfer he is,knew I was is Danger and rushed into the water to save me! Keith got to the spot where I wiped out and dove under! He came up with me in his arms! He put me on his board and brought me back to shore! Sam was in total shock! Keith just ignored her and proceeded to do CPR! He had me revieved within minutes! Then he did something that totally shocked Sam but made me very happy, He very passionately returned the Kiss I gave him on the Bus!
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Post by celticthunder1510 on May 29, 2011 21:54:41 GMT -5
That update, while short rocked! You definitely need to make longer updates but yeah keep it up!
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Post by DaughterofOphelia on May 29, 2011 22:12:56 GMT -5
Update soon please!
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Post by celticbear on Jun 1, 2011 22:26:13 GMT -5
I usualy do write longer Updates! But that little scene popped into my Head and I could not resist posting it ASAP! It's Jennies turn to Update! I'll try to get her to update soon!
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Post by A Once Mc Ginty on Jun 8, 2011 20:05:31 GMT -5
(Keith's POV) What am I doing? What am I doing? I don't know what to do between these two? I backed away quickly, turning around, pushing my hands into my head. "So? Will you two just stop?" I asked walking away forgetting my bored on the beach. I walked to the bus knowing they WEREN'T going to me, or so I thought. "Leave Me ALONE!" I yelled as I heard Treena run up behind me with my board.
(Samantha's POV) So she left me here? So she's going to get Keith? So she wants to be with him more than me? So I don't want to be with her? So I don't want to be with anyone? So can someone please HELP ME?
(Keith's POV) I quickly jumped into my bunk not wanting to see anyone. I felt like being around not a single person. Ryan tried coming and talking with me but he backed away seeing that I had nothing for anyone. "Maybe you should talk with them?" Ryan suggested. "And hate them more? I don't even want to deal with them!" I replied shutting the carpet. The world stopped, I didn't feel anything, I didn't hear anything, I didn't even know we were in another state.
(Samantha's POV) He's off and am I every seeing him again? Probably never unless Treena drags me to New Hampshire. What now? Nothing that's it!
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Post by celticthunder1510 on Jun 8, 2011 20:14:36 GMT -5
Very good! Update soon I like your writing!
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Post by celticbear on Jun 8, 2011 22:21:20 GMT -5
(Treena's POV)
I could tell Keith did not want to talk yet. He was confused about his feelings for me and for Sam! I took his board back to the bus and just left there with a note saying thanks for saving my life and I'll see him in Manchester New Hampshire. I already had a ticket and a M&G pass for after the show. I had no intention of taking Sam with me! As of now she and I are no longer speaking! The reason why, Simple I'm Head over heels in Love with Keith Harkin! And I'll do what ever I have to make him see I'm nothing like Sam! Heck me and Sam are not even related by blood! We just say we are cousins because I was a foster kid and her Aunt and Uncle took me in and latter adopted me!
MANCHESTER NEW HAMPSHIRE:
(Keith's POV)
Well just before we left for New Hampshire I found my board up against the bus with a note from Treena saying thanks for the rescue and that she would see me in Manchester! I just groaned trying to figure out how to get out of the M&G after the show! I had feeling that Woman had a ticket and a special pass. When we got to the Venue and after sound check I went to Sharon begging to let me off the hook tonight! No such luck! I was long overdo for a turn and whether I liked it or not I had to do the Meet and Greet! Well the show went on and of course there she was third row center! Eventhough I kept telling myself not to look I could not help but make eye contact with her! Why you ask: Simple she was wearing a Hot looking blue dress that matched the color of my eyes that fit her in all the right places! I also noticed Ryan staring at her also and for some odd reason that was making me Mad has all get out!
(Treena's POV)
I could tell Keith was second guessing himself about his feelings for me by the way his eyes kept coming back to me during the show! I also notice Ryan checking me out also! I had no intentions of being sucked in by the Dark Destroyer! I wanted KEITH! I could not wait till the Meet and Greet.
MEET AND GREET
(Keith's POV)
Here I am doing the M&G with Damo! Thank God for that! At least I did not have to worry about Damo stealing Treena from me! Wait a minute where did that thought come from! Well the Meet and Greet draged on and still she did not show up untill the very end! She was the last one in line! I thought to myself Real Smooth Lady! When she walked in all eyes where on her! How could they not be with the way she looked and has she came up to me I got a good wif of her perfume *Inis Moonlight* I was a goner!
(Treena's POV)
Well I stayed back till I was the last one in line! When I made my entrance all eyes where on me! Damo's jaw dropped wide open! He just gave me a cute wink and went back to his fans! I was the only Harkin fan left in the room! I walked right past Keith close enough so he could smell my perfume! the action got the desired effect I was lookig for! I continued walking past Keith and sat down at one of the tables waiting for him to make a move!
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Post by DaughterofOphelia on Jun 8, 2011 22:26:51 GMT -5
Update!!!
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Post by A Once Mc Ginty on Jun 17, 2011 21:02:28 GMT -5
(Keith's POV) That smell, she's trying to, no! I felt something come down my eyes, but I quickly left the room. I urged myself not to leave the room but I stopped at the room and turned facing the fans.
(Damian's POV) What is he doing? How'd she know we were coming to Manchester?
(Keith's POV) "Bye?" I whispered opening the door seeing the blue eyed girl that I wanted. I didn't feel anything as I thought I would feel everything. I quickly walked toward her as she opened up her hands and hugged me. "I'm here for you always," she whispered. "I know you are, why does Treena always follow us now?" I grabbed her hand and walked to the bus locking it so no one could get in. "She just wants you, I don't know why but she does." I looked in her blue eyes and imminently kissed her. I couldn't back away but I heard knocking on the door. "I think someone's outside, let me look out the window real quick," Samantha rushed backing away toward the window.
(Samantha's POV) Oh my gosh I LOVE THIS GUY! I have to find a way Treena can get away from him. I know he wants me and I know Treena wants him but then me! Me! I'm in the middle and trying to find a way out but how on Earth can I? I don't know anything about nothing! Can that be a play on words because my inner thoughts are really really crazy right now. I'm lost and I don't know how to fix this in any how! "Just Treena, leave her out?" I asked looking out the window.
(Keith's POV) I love her! She walked back over to me and sat on my legs. I really, really, really, really am LOST! I can't tell the other lads they will think I'm crazy! As long as no one opens the door and let's her in the world will be okay.
(Damian's POV) "Treena? Please leave, I know you're like Keith's age but you kind of are creeping me out and I'd like to get into the bus without you coming in," I told moving my way past her to unlock the bus. I quickly opened the door and ran in, locking the door behind. "Keith?" I questioned shocked.
(Keith's POV) Oh NO! This is not happening! "Damian, why are you here?" I asked. "Treena's outside and," Damian began as the others walked into the bus. "I'll go talk with Treena."
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Post by celticbear on Jun 17, 2011 21:26:48 GMT -5
Keith: Treena you and I need to have a long talk now!
Me: Fine with me Keith and I know what you are going to say But I know something about Sam you don't and you are not going to like it!
Keith: What in the world are you talking about Treena!
We go and sit in the M&G Room!
Me: First I explain to Keith how me and Sam are not even related by Blood that her aunt and uncle adopted me! Then I tell him this: Keith I hate to be the one to tell you that Sam is just using you right now to make her Fiance Liam O'Grady Jelous!
Keith: Wait a Minute Treena! You mean to tell me Sam is going to mary her Brothers Surfing Partner!
Me: Yes Keith it happened after you left! They Had a fight on the very day you showed up! So Sam chose to pursue you! Liam knows all about what's going on! The wedding is in two weeks! You mean to tell me you did not notice the Diamond Claudaugh Sam is wearing! Hey if you don't believe me talk to Liam yourself and then go on the bus and talk to Sam and then we will talk again.
I leave the room and in walks Liam!
Liam: Hey Keith! long time no see! Believe what Treena just said because it's the truth! Yes me and Sam had a fight but we patched it up! But for some odd reason Sam can't let you go! And Treena realy has it bad for you! I say give Treena a Chance! She can give you a run for your money on both Water and Land! And heck you see how well she looks in a Dress! You better make up your mind Keith before Ryan snatches her up!
Just then you both hear a noise and Standing there is Sam knowing that she has been caught! She looks to Keith to see what he does! Meanwhile I'm giving the Heartbreaker the old brush off!
Me: Ryan believe me I love the attention but my Heart is set on Keith! He is more my style! So will you please leave me alone!
Ryan: Come on Treena just one date is all I ask! Besides Keith want's Sam!
Me: Well he Can't have Sam! She's using Keith to get back at the Guy she is going to Marry in two weeks!
The bus door was open and the others heard what I said! Ryan drags me back onto the bus and I tell them about Sam and Liam. They can see I'm not lying to get Keith! That I'm being honest with them! So we all leave the bus and head back to the venue! We See Sam enter the M&G room to find both her Fiance and Keith sitting there! We all wait with baited breath to see what is going to happen!
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Post by A Once Mc Ginty on Jun 21, 2011 21:53:59 GMT -5
(Keith's POV) I found Samantha crying on the corner of the street. "Baby, I love you, but maybe if you weren't engaged I'd love you more," I whispered in her ear, kissing her on the cheek. "I love you more than Liam. I wanted to end the engagement the day you came and found me. I wanted to be with you forever, more than Liam." "Why are you with Liam then?" "He asked me, I went with it to gain trust back in Damian. I realised I started to like him, but not as much as I ever will when we met on the beach. I want everything to end." "You've changed because of him. Call it off!" I insisted grabbing her hand. She wanted to relax, get away from Liam. "I can't call it off, it's too close to the date. I have to find a way to hold this back."
(Samantha's POV) How do I do this? Get away from Liam? I need a plan. Then she came and said what I wanted to hear. "Keith, Samantha, I talked with Treena, well she begged to talk with me. Samantha, you're coming on tour with us until December. You have to reschedule your wedding though, is that okay?" a lady named Sharon said. I feel to the ground, not realising she just made the whole thing better. "That will be perfect!" I stopped crying and ran and hugged her.
(Sharon's POV) What did I just do? 2 girls that are in love with Keith? This might actually be good for him.
(Keith's POV) TREENA?!?!
(Samantha's POV) OH MY GOSH!
(Sharon's POV) WHAT THE HECK?!
(Keith's POV) "Thanks Sharon! Hey, Samantha, let's go and show you your new home for the next 2 and a half months," I said joking around. I couldn't believe this was real. We walked back to the bus not even looking at Liam. He seemed p***ed and I knew he would be when Samantha called it off.
(Samantha's POV) "Liam," I said turning around, "no more wedding, I'm leaving you. Go back to New York, and find another girl. I never really liked you, I did it from Damian." "So what does this mean?" Keith asked. "Treena or I? It's your turn to decide who you want."
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Post by celticthunder1510 on Jun 21, 2011 22:01:22 GMT -5
Oh boy. Decisions, decisions.... Who will he choose?
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