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Post by celticbear on Mar 11, 2011 23:02:16 GMT -5
WOW! Mala! Love your Update! I sure would have loved to see them try and take George down! George could take them! Man Paul,Ryan,and George are going to freak out with this new development! CP! LOOKING FORWARD TO SEEING WHAT YOU COME UP WHEN YOU ARE FEELING BETTER!
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Post by laurenne on Mar 11, 2011 23:30:22 GMT -5
Woah, now they have three of them. Update soon, please.
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Mar 12, 2011 12:43:06 GMT -5
INTENSE!!!! great update Mala!!!!
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Post by CelticPrincess24 on Mar 16, 2011 17:56:59 GMT -5
Update coming tomorrow... I just need to finish writing it, then type it up! Just to let ya know I'm working on it...
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Mar 16, 2011 18:09:16 GMT -5
FINALLY!!!!! i mean it took ye HOW LONG?
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Post by CelticPrincess24 on Mar 25, 2011 9:09:01 GMT -5
Sorry it took so long, but anyway, I hope you like it!
I felt Damian squirming next to me. He must have been trying to get out of the duct tape. I knew it was impossible even to try, they layered it so thick. The only way we were getting out is if you had something sharp to cut it with. It was going to be a long ride. I just hoped Kristy was ok when we got there.
~*~*~ Back at the house ~*~*~
"I can't believe got Keith, Damian and Jenny. What were they doing outside?" Paul said, angrily hitting the table.
"If they took Keith and Damian, it's not just about getting revenge on Jenny. They must know who we are and want ransome money." Ryan said, which he was probably right.
"We'll just have to wait and see what happens." George said. Neil nodded as there was nothing else to say. All they could do was wait.
~*~*~ In the van ~*~*~
What seemed like a life time, the van finally slowed to a stop. I heard foot steps. My breathing got faster. The doors then opened I heard Keith struggling then I could hear nothing. I heard foot steps again, this time they took Damian. He knew there was nothing he could do so he left with out a fight. Then I was grabbed. I tried to get away, but they just picked me up off the ground. After I was inside they removed the blind fold and the tape off my mouth. I couldn't help but let out a cry when they ripped the tape from my mouth.
"Why are you doing this? The others didn't do anything, please let them go." I said, doing the best to hide the fear in my voice. Instead of answering he grabbed me and threw me into a room and shut and locked the door.
"Jenny?" I heard the voice I so longed to hear.
"Kristy, are you ok? I am so sorry this happened to you. It's all my fault!" I said hugging her.
"Jenny, I'm fine. Just scared. And you haven't anything to be sorry about. It's not your fault at all." She said, hugging me back.
"Wait! Where's Keith and Damian?" I said, looking around for them.
"They have Damian and Keith too?!" She said, shocked at what I just said. The door then swung open and Damian came flying in. He looked like he had been a in a fight.
"Damian! Are you ok?" I asked as me and Kristy ran over to him. Breathing heavily he replied.
"Yeah, I think so." He said, holding his side.
"Where's Keith?" I asked, as Keith was thrown in. Just as breahtless as Damian was.
"Keith are you ok?" I asked running over, as Kristy finished looking at Damians eye. He was going to get a big bruise on his cheek.
"Are you guys ok?" I asked, after taking care of them. Poor guys. I felt so bad. It was all my fault that this was happening.
"Yeah, I'm good." Damian said, sitting down on the hard floor. Keith said he was also feeling better. I wish I knew where we were. Then a thought accured to me, maybe Kristy still had her cell phone.
"Kristy, do you still have your cell phone?" I asked, hopefully.
"No," she said sadly, "they discovered I had it and took it away."
"Too bad." I said, sitting down on the cold hard floor. Pretty soon we were all sitting down.
"How are we going to get out of here?!" Kristy cried. Damian put his arm around her. She seemed to calm down.
"We are going to get out. I promise." Keith said, sliding his arm around my shoulder. I leaned closer. He felt warm in this cold place we were in.
"Well, there's got to be some way out?" I said, trying to get up. But Keith wouldn't let me.
"Lets rest for a while. You and Kristy look exaughsted." He said, as I leaned my head on his shoulder.
"N-no," I said, trying to stifle my yawn, "I'm good. We need to get out of here."
Kristy was already sleeping on Damian. Keith laughed lightly. I gave in and went to sleep. It wasn't hard either. I felt Keith lay his cheek on my head and we both slept.
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Post by GalwayGirl on Mar 25, 2011 10:04:16 GMT -5
I love the story CP and Mala!
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Post by laurenne on Mar 25, 2011 18:39:44 GMT -5
More soon, please.
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Post by celticbear on Mar 25, 2011 20:23:57 GMT -5
CP! This was a great Update! I love how even though Keith and Damo are hurt they are still being protective of their girlfriends! SOME HOW I KNOW RYAN,GEORGE,NEIL AND PAUL WILL RESCUE THEM! OR KEITH,DAMO AND THE GIRLS WILL FREE THEMSELFS! UPDATE SOON! PLEASE!
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Post by Deleted on Mar 26, 2011 10:39:18 GMT -5
Great Update I Hope the lads find them and get them out of the creepy place and away from thouse buttheads...
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Post by !!DerryChick!! on Mar 27, 2011 17:31:00 GMT -5
Awe! ! Update
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Mar 30, 2011 15:14:22 GMT -5
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by mala1152 on Mar 30, 2011 18:28:14 GMT -5
ill probably update by the weekend... i got really sick on monday and have barely been able to leave my bed! im gratefully on the mend and will have an update soon!
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Post by CelticPrincess24 on Mar 30, 2011 18:58:32 GMT -5
Mala just get better 1st. the update can wait! You know, I was sick like 2 or 3 times since I started writing this... maybe this is a sick story! anyway haha get better soon!
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Post by mala1152 on Mar 31, 2011 8:00:07 GMT -5
im beginning to believe that sickness is contagious through the computer....
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