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Post by celticbear on Feb 8, 2011 22:44:18 GMT -5
OMG! The Plot realy thickens now! I hope they find Kristy unhurt! UPDATE SOON,PLEASE!
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Post by angelenia100 on Feb 9, 2011 12:04:06 GMT -5
Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by CelticPrincess24 on Feb 10, 2011 18:57:08 GMT -5
(Kristy’s POV)
I couldn’t figure out where I was. After I was grabbed I was blind folded, and dragged into a car. Then I heard talking.
“You idiot! This is the wrong girl!” The first guy yelled.
“You cut the power before I could get a look at her! So I just grabbed whoever I saw!” The second guy yelled back. They got quiet then. I heard them whispering, they were so quiet I couldn’t here a thing they said.
“What’s you name?” One of them said to me. I didn’t answer. I could tell they were growing annoyed with me.
“He asked what you name was, now answer!” The other one yelled.
“Why should I tell you, you take me away form my friends and blind fold me! No, I’m not going to tell you!” I yelled back. Next thing I knew I was slapped across the face. It took everything I had not to cry out in pain.
“If you don’t tell us in the next 24 hours, I guarantee you’ll never see your friends again!” The one who slapped me said. I was scared, I hoped and prayed that my friends would find me. I then had an idea; they didn’t take my cell phone.
(Jenny’s POV)
I woke up to see all the guys sitting around with glum looks on their faces. They didn’t notice I was up.
“Any news?” I asked, knowing what the answer would be.
“No.” Damian said sullenly.
“This shouldn’t have happened!” I practically shouted, “They should have me, not Kristy.”
“It’s not your fault…” Ryan tried to so comfort, but I cut him off.
“Yes, it is. We knew they were here, I should have known better.” I said, getting quieter.
“The police are doing everything they can to find her, and they will.” Keith said.
“I hope so.” I said. I couldn’t help think of what could be happening to Kristy right now. It was a horrible thought.
“Why don’t we do something while we’re waiting.” Suggested Paul.
“I don’t feel much like doing anything.” Damian said, looking like he could cry any minute. It broke my heart to see his usually, bright blue eyes look so sad.
“Why don’t we sing?” George suggested. I didn’t feel much like singing, but none of us had much of choice since George started singing. I don’t really know the words to their songs, so I hummed along with it. When they finished Keith started talking to me.
“Jenny, why don’t you sing something you like. From the sound of your humming you have wonderful voice.” He said encouragingly.
“I don’t think so, I really don’t feel much like singing right now.” I said. They understood. We sat there in silence until we heard something.
“What was that?” Ryan said, suddenly.
“What was what?” Damian asked, only to be shushed by Ryan.
“I heard it too!” Keith whispered. Soon we could all hear the noise. I was scared; I thought it might be one of those guys coming back for me!
“Ryan and Paul, you two come with me. I want to check out that noise. Damian George you two sit with Jenny.” Keith said. When they left Damian and George came and sat on either side of me. I heard a noise, it sounded like footsteps. They were getting closer. The lights went out and we heard a grunt, then something touched my shoulder! I screamed and George went after the guy while Damian stayed with me. I heard running footsteps and thought the imposter got away, but it was the other three.
“I got him!” George yelled, “someone plug the lamp in.” Paul went and plugged the lamp in. The we were able see the face, we were all shocked at who it was….
*I hope you like it, please tell me what you think*
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Post by laurenne on Feb 10, 2011 22:05:52 GMT -5
Well, who was it? I have to know. Update soon, please.
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Post by celticbear on Feb 10, 2011 22:31:59 GMT -5
I'm with Laurene! I have to know who it is they have caught! UPDATE SOON! CP! PLEASE!
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Post by CelticPrincess24 on Feb 10, 2011 22:42:55 GMT -5
I'll update tomorrow! I don't want to keep you in suspense for to long! Glad ya liked it!
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Feb 11, 2011 14:47:18 GMT -5
who was it?!?!?! UPDATE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by CelticPrincess24 on Feb 11, 2011 15:13:04 GMT -5
I will definatelty try and update today! but I might not have time.... but I'll definately try!
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Post by !!DerryChick!! on Feb 12, 2011 8:47:52 GMT -5
Update Update Update Update Update or I get ninja Kitty
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Post by Deleted on Feb 12, 2011 16:44:49 GMT -5
ooh update please who is it?
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Post by CelticPrincess24 on Feb 12, 2011 20:15:21 GMT -5
sorry I didn't have time to update today, I should have one by monday! again sorry to keep y'all waiting!
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Post by CelticPrincess24 on Feb 14, 2011 16:26:03 GMT -5
(Jenny's POV)
"I got him!" George yeld.
"Quick, somone turn the lights on!" I heard Ryan say. We then heard the person George tackled moan. It sounded like he said, "Get off me George," I think I was the only that noticed it though. Then Paul turned the light on.
"Neil?!" They all yelled shocked.
"I thought you went home?" Keith said, still shocked.
"I did, but I thought Jenny might need a little more protection, but with George here, I don't think you need me." Neil said.
"Sorry about that, Neil." George said, rubbing the back of his neck.
"Thats alright," Neil replied smiling, "where's Kristy?" I started crying again. "Ugh, did I say something wrong?"
"Kristy was kidnapped," Ryan started, "they thought she was Jenny and they took her instead."
Then I felt my phone vibrate. I almost fainted when I saw who it was from.
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(Kristy's POV)
When we got to the place they dragged me out. I was locked in what it looked like a closset. I had no idea where I was, so there was no way I could direct them to come save me.
As soon as I was sure they were gone I grabbed my cellphone, it's a pain in the neck trying to text when you hands are tied in back of you. But I did it.
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(Jenny's POV)
"I just got a text from Kristy!" I practically squeaked out. I was shaking and I could even look at it, so Ryan took my phone from me.
After he read it he let out a sigh of relief, "She's fine. But she doesn't know where she is."
"How are we supposed to find her then?" I asked despairing again.
"I promise we'll find her." Keith said.
*sorry it's short, I'll update soon*
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Feb 14, 2011 19:55:51 GMT -5
ugh, i thought it was gonna be someone trying to kidnap Jenny. but i guess not... good update now update sooooooooooon!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by !!DerryChick!! on Feb 14, 2011 20:05:57 GMT -5
Whoop! ! I love it! Update
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Post by Deleted on Feb 15, 2011 10:35:06 GMT -5
glad it wasn't a bad guy poor Neil thought getting tackled dang being tackled by George that would hurt well i hope they find her soon please update
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