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Post by celticbear on Jan 1, 2011 20:53:07 GMT -5
Meg about an Epilouge that tells what happened after they got back to Ireland! I would love to find out how Sharon reacted to Ryan the Dark Destroyer being a Dad! So PLEASE WRITE THE EPILOUGE! I loved the ending and how for just a minute or two My Keith Freaked out!
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Post by laurenne on Jan 1, 2011 23:41:03 GMT -5
I absolutely loved it. I agree with cb, you should do an epilogue so we know what Sharon says. Pretty please.
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Jan 2, 2011 10:13:53 GMT -5
so i take it that i just do the epilogue and then call it quits? like, no sequel or anything??? -m
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Post by CelticPrincess24 on Jan 2, 2011 10:44:16 GMT -5
I'd like a sequel if you'd want to write one!!!!!!
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Post by angelenia100 on Jan 2, 2011 14:26:16 GMT -5
You have to keep going its so good. I want to know how things go with Ryan's family when they hear about Aria and about the struggles they have learning about each other and living together.
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Post by angelenia100 on Jan 2, 2011 14:27:38 GMT -5
sequel defiantly we need to know how their life goes and all that good stuff.
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Jan 2, 2011 16:51:23 GMT -5
*okay, here is the epilogue!!!*
Epilogue 1 year later…
“And now,” I heard Sharon Browne say to the audience that was crowded into the Wang Theatre in Boston, Massachusetts, “I would like to welcome a special guest singer onto the stage. Miss Aria Kelly, would you please come out here.” Yep, that is right, she said y name. See, when everyone found out that I could sing and play guitar, my Dad had the wonderful idea to put me into the show somehow. And now, every once and a while I will appear on stage and sing one song, a song that I wrote about everything that has happened to me in the past year. I walk onto the stage with my guitar, shocked by how many people were crowded into this one building. “Uh, hey guys. This is a song that I wrote. It’s about that no matter how tough the game life can get, you just have to keep playing the game to your full strength, despite the many rode blocks on the way. So, here we go…” And then I started to sing:
“What you gonna do when the show is over What you gonna sing when the song ends, yeah How you gonna cope when there is no closure Where you gonna reach when the goal gets higher How you gonna make it through when you think you've lost your chance
Play on When you're losing the game, play on 'Cause you're gonna make mistakes It's always worth the sacrifice Even when you think you're wrong So play on Play on
Even when the flood gates swing wide open Never let the currents take you down, no Even when you're not sure where you're going Swimming through a mess, and you can't get out Just going through the motions, and trying not to drown
Play on When you're losing the game, play on 'Cause you're gonna make mistakes It's always worth the sacrifice Even when you think you're wrong So play on Play On
Even through a storm on the darkest night Don't you ever give up the fight Even when you feel you're all alone
Play On Play On Play On When you're losing the game, play on 'Cause you're gonna make mistakes It's always worth the sacrifice Even when you think you're wrong So play on Play on Play on
Oh yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah Na na na na na na Na na na na na na”
The crowd erupted in applause. WOW. How could so many people like this one song that I wrote? This is just amazing. I take a quick bow and then run back stage, only to be pulled into a great big hug by Damian. “You did amazing, babe.” He whispered into my ear. Keith was singing now. “Thanks.” I muttered, pulling away. “What’s wrong?” he asked. “It’s just, who would’ve thought that I would be performing here tonight? After everything that has happened. I mean, remember how hen we got back to Ireland and y Dad introduced me to Sharon? And that she like hated me? And yet, now she is letting me perform in your show!!! And how, my grandparents were sooo shocked to hear about me and what had happened, that they wouldn’t even let me or Daddy visit them? Well, now I practically live at their place!!! It’s like, how did I get so lucky, ya know?” I ramble on to him, thinking back at some of the good and bad times that I have had. “I know baby. I know. But hey, I’d love to chat, but I am on next.” Damian said, starting to put is mike back on. “Alright, good luck!” I shout to him as he runs off. He just waves his hand above his head at me. I smile to myself, not knowing that someday, him and I are gonna get married and have four kids, three boys and a little girl. Not knowing, that I will end up being a school teacher and teach little first graders. Not knowing that I will survive the fight of breast cancer. Not knowing that I will have the probably the BEST life anyone could ever ask for. But, I’m gonna take it slowly, one chapter at a time. THE END!!!
*well, I hope that ending satisfied you all. Thank you sooo, sooo, sooo much for all the reviews that you have given me!!! I love you forever for those review, cuz without them I would have NEVER finished this story!!! So, thanks. Oh, all song credits go to the lovely and talented Carrie Underwood, wait I mean Carrie Fisher (she got married… I still HATE her husband). The song was “Play on” and y’all should check it out sometime. Anyways, thanks again. Love you all, Meaghan*
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Post by orinocoflow on Jan 2, 2011 18:29:26 GMT -5
It's a nice ending, true, but I still think that you should have left it as is.
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Post by celticbear on Jan 2, 2011 21:08:37 GMT -5
Meg! I'm glad you wrote the Epilouge! It filled in all the missing blanks! So glad Sharon and the rest of the Kelly Clan excepted her! What I liked best was Damo becoming a father of Four! That image is Priceless! Great Job!
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Post by laurenne on Jan 2, 2011 23:20:22 GMT -5
Well, I absolutely loved the epilogue. It was awesome.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 3, 2011 14:36:45 GMT -5
loved it
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Jan 3, 2011 14:47:58 GMT -5
hey, i forgot to put this in when i finished: this story is dedicated to my best friend Aria. She made up the main character and as all the same characteristics (including the two different colored eyes). So, Aria this one was for u, even though u hate Celtic Thunder.... Love ya girly. and guys, thanks soooo much for all the reviews!!!
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Post by angelenia100 on Jan 3, 2011 16:10:39 GMT -5
I would love to see more about her life when her and Damian get married all about the cancer and the kids. Cancer is something that has touched my family. We lost my granddaddy to cancer April 15 2010. and a friend just after that to breast cancer.
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Jan 3, 2011 16:30:14 GMT -5
oh Angelenia, i am sooo sorry. My grandmother has breast cancer rite now and it has been really tough on my whole family. So, once again, i am soooo sorry to hear about ur granddaddy and ur friend. and i will see about writing a sequel... -Meg
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Jan 3, 2011 18:38:45 GMT -5
Hey, i am thinking of doing a sequel to this story called The After-Life Story of a Girl Named Aria Kelly and i wanna know what u guys think. so lemme know. and yes i know the title sucks. but still tell me if i should do it or not. Thanks!!! meg
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