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Post by orinocoflow on Dec 30, 2010 16:08:48 GMT -5
Love the updates! Please update ASAP!
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Post by celticbear on Dec 30, 2010 22:44:50 GMT -5
Miss Meg! Great Update! I WANT RYAN TO WIN! AFTER ALL IT WAS ARIA'S MOM'S DYING WISH FOR ARIA TO FIND RYAN IN THE FIRST PLACE! I BET ARIA FINDS SOME LEGAL DOCUMENT THAT TRUMPS HER NASTY AUNT PAM'S CLAIM ON HER! ARIA IS A KELLY! AND KELLYS' STICK TOGERHER! PLUS ARIA IS A CT GIRLFREIND AND CT GIRLFRIEND STAYS WITH HER CT LAD! UPDATE SOON! PLEASE!
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Dec 31, 2010 8:04:04 GMT -5
Chapter 18
That night I was just sitting there on my bed all depressed when my phone started to buzz saying that I got a new text message. I picked up my phone to see who was texting me and to my surprise it was Damian.
D: what r u doing?
Me: nothing. U?
D: waiting outside ur house
Me: what r u doing out there?
And as I text that, I ran to my window to look outside, and sure enough I saw Damian, my Dad, Paul, Keith, George, and Neil.
D: waiting for u
Me: y?
D: we r here to take u back to Ireland with us. Our plane leaves real early 2moro morning and we have 1 xtra ticket. U coming or not?
Me: I’d love 2 but what about my aunts?
D: what about them?
Me: how am I gonna get away from them?
D: that is y we r taking u 2nite
Me: oh. Well then I’ll be rite down
D: yaaaay
And with that I quickly grabbed the stuff that my aunts made me pack earlier and I ran downstairs. When I got outside, I gave Damian the biggest hug while whispering “thank you” in his ear. When we finally came out of our embrace I turned to my dad and said, “Hey dad.” And then I gave him a big hug as well. He hugged me back while whispering, “I’m so glad you are coming.” But before I could say anything, the front porch lights turned on and there was my Aunt Cheryl standing there holding a phone in her hand. All she said was, “I called the cops.” And then she went back inside, leaving us all standing there dumbfounded.
*Dun-dun-dah!!!! How was that??? Please review and lemme know!!! Thanks!!!”
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Post by CelticPrincess24 on Dec 31, 2010 11:24:36 GMT -5
Wow! That was good! I love the part where Damian texts her yaaay!! Now update soon or I will take your hockey stick away from you!!!!!
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Post by orinocoflow on Dec 31, 2010 15:16:47 GMT -5
UPDATE SOON!!!
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Dec 31, 2010 17:49:26 GMT -5
NOOOO CP u cant take my hockey stick!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOO that will kill me!!!! plus then i'll just have to use my dad's...
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Post by laurenne on Dec 31, 2010 18:16:48 GMT -5
I loved it. They'd better leave before the cops come. Update soon, please.
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Post by CelticPrincess24 on Dec 31, 2010 18:49:13 GMT -5
OK miss meg I won't take your stick IF and only if you update soon!!!!
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Post by celticbear on Dec 31, 2010 22:50:43 GMT -5
Meg! I agree with Laurene! The Lad's better book it before the cops come! But if they don't What Cop in his right mind is going to arrest Celtic Thunder and cause an International incidient! But just in case, in the next update the Lads and Aria should be gone! UPDATE SOON! PLEASE!
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Post by CelticPrincess24 on Dec 31, 2010 23:19:58 GMT -5
I agree with Laurenne and CB! UPDATE SOON!
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Post by laurenne on Dec 31, 2010 23:32:09 GMT -5
CB, you have a point. WHat cop would arrest them and risk hatred from their daughter?
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Jan 1, 2011 9:22:01 GMT -5
Chapter 19
After my aunt said that, seconds later you could the sirens of the police cars turning onto the street. “You guys need to hide or something!!!” I said starting to panic. “Uhhh… where do we go?” Keith asked, looking around the place. “No where. We are gonna stay here and try to explain to the police what the situation is.” Ryan said gloomily. “Dude, that is stupid! They are NEVER gonna believe us. NEVER!!!” Keith shouted. “Well, you never know. They might. But still…” George said, looking down the street. The police car was coming into few of the house. We were all quiet, afraid. In fact we were so quiet that I could hear Keith mutter to Paul, “Sharon is sooo gonna kill us when she finds out that we are going to jail.” I saw Paul nod in agreement. By now, that two police cars were stopped in front of the house. “Hello gentlemen,” the cop said, “We just received a call down at the station about these men wandering around on private property and that they were about to take a girl that was described about your age miss.” He pointed to me. Just then my aunt came outside saying, “Ah, officer, these are the men I was telling you about. They raided into my house earlier today and now they are here about to take my niece.” “That is NOT true!!! Officer, they were not raiding the house earlier, they were just visiting me cuz well, they are my friends and that man right there, yeah well he’s my dad. And I think that a dad should be able to visit his daughter right?” I told the cop. The cop now turned to my aunt and said, “Ma’am is this true? Are they her friends and is that man her father?” “We-we-well yes. But why are they here at this time of night, huh? And why is my niece standing out here with a suitcase in her hands? Can you explain that?” my aunt snapped. “Well, I want to go stay with my dad, cuz he is my legal guardian and all, but my aunt here won’t let me. So, they came here tonight to bring me to the airport with them so we could head back to Ireland together.” I explained. The cop again turned to my aunt. “And why won’t you let her stay with her dad if he is her legal guardian?” But, before my aunt could reply I said, “Because she doesn’t like him that much because she thinks that he left my mom pregnant at sixteen when really it was my mom that left him.” The cop stared at me as if I was crazy. And then, he thought for a moment. Finally he said, “Well, I believe the girl. Sweetie, you may go with your dad. And you,” he turned to my aunt, “Well, you are just lucky that I am not going to arrest you for trying to mess with a legal matter.” And then he turned and left. My aunt, defeated, went back inside. “Well Keith, it looks like you don’t have to worry about Sharon being upset that you are in jail.” I laughed. And pretty soon, we were all laughing. “Well, come on Aria, it’s time to get you home.” My dad said, putting his arm around me, leading me to the car that the lads came in. “Alright… dad.” I said with a smile. My dad smiled down at me and hugged me tightly against his side. “Awww… how cute!!!” Keith squealed like a little girl. “Keith,” I heard Damian say, “ I think you just ruined the moment.” We were all laughing by now. “Oh shut up!” Keith yelled as we all got in the car. We just continued laughing a s we heading towards the hotel that the guys were staying in. And in only a few hours, we would be heading home…
*well… I think I may end it there, unless y’all can come up with a good reason for me not too!!!! Thanks for all the reviews and I’m sorry if this chapter sucked, it’s just that I couldn’t really think of anything!!!! And remember if y’all put up a good fight, I will continue to update!!!! Thanks again!!!!*
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Post by CelticPrincess24 on Jan 1, 2011 11:21:13 GMT -5
This is really goood!!! you have to keep going!!! What happens with Damian and Aria? Keith can take her surfing when they get Ireland! You have to keep going!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Deleted on Jan 1, 2011 14:07:43 GMT -5
ha love it and ya please keep going its cute
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Post by orinocoflow on Jan 1, 2011 18:53:52 GMT -5
i actually like the ending as it is, without adding anything. Great story, and I hope you write more! haha, love how Keith ends that one.
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