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Apr 5, 2012 23:59:03 GMT -5
Post by HburgEagle44 on Apr 5, 2012 23:59:03 GMT -5
Ohhh boy... I agree with Auntie. "That creep" has done it, and there go Sharon and Phil (and Damian ).... creepy note and overturned house D: update soon please!! I loved this update, btw
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Apr 16, 2012 19:31:26 GMT -5
Post by celticthundergirl on Apr 16, 2012 19:31:26 GMT -5
~Hey guys please comment and tell me your fav. part!~
Damian’s P.O.V. When I heard her scream all I could think of was to run in and see what was wrong. She must not have heard me come in because she stepped back and bumped into me. She must have thought I was someone else because when she turned around she had a horrified look on her face. “What’s wrong? Why did you scream?” I asked. She didn’t answer, but handed me a note. Four words stood out at me. Remember, I’ll be watching. Anger flowed through me. What was wrong with this creep? What did he want from her? I took her arm and led her out of the room. “What’s the matter?” Sharon asked. I handed her the note, and led Annica to the living room. Setting her on the couch, I walked back into the kitchen. “Sharon, Phil what are we going to do?” I asked. “Charley, Megan, help me get her things together. Damian, go sit with her. Sharon replied. “Phil can you see if there’s some sort of suitcase in the basement?” I walked back to Annica as the rest of them went off to do as they were told.
~ Annica’s P.O.V. A few minutes later, Damian came back and sat beside me. He didn’t say anything but put his arms around me. I hugged him back, holding on to him like he was the only thing keeping me from drowning. It just felt so right to be held in his arms. Slowly I stopped shaking and my heartbeat returned to normal. I pulled back and as he looked at me, I saw in his eyes a mixture of anger and concern. “Are you alright now Anni?” “I think so. Thanks,” I replied, smiling at the nickname. Everyone else came back into the room. “We got all your things together. Maybe you can check to see if we missed anything or if there’s anything else you want to take,” Charley said gently. I nodded. Standing up, I walked into my parents’ room. I shut the door behind me and lay on the bed staring up at the ceiling. Then finally, I let out all the anger, sadness, and frustration that I had been holding back for a long time. Sadness for the death of my parents and anger at what was happening to me. I sobbed into the pillow. “Why, why did you leave me here? Why couldn’t I have come with you, then this wouldn’t be happening to me!” But, inside me I heard a faint voice in my head saying, “And then you also wouldn’t have met Damian and the rest of them.” I blocked that voice out and just cried. When I finally stopped crying, I sat up and went over the closet. I reached up to the top shelf and took down a blanket. As I did so, a small picture fell onto the floor. I had never seen it before. It was a picture of my mom and dad, a small boy, and me as a baby. That’s funny, I had never seen the boy before but yet he resembled both my parents. Putting it in my pocket I took down our family album from another shelf and grabbed my mom’s old jacket and a sweatshirt of my dad’s. “Something to remember them by,” I whispered. Walking to the door, I went across the hall to my room again. Remembering the note, I cautiously walked inside looking around. The girls already had taken all my clothes out. I walked to my dresser and opened a secret compartment in the back of the drawer. I took out the charm bracelet my mom and dad had given to me, the last Christmas that they were both alive. My ipod, camera, and wallet had been taken out already too. I hoped the girls had found them and they hadn’t been stolen. My driver’s license was in my wallet. I looked around and found my purse, putting the bracelet, and picture in it. Grabbing my favorite books off the bookshelf, I stuffed them in too. Then, I took all my drawings off the walls and took them out of the frames. Picking them and my sketch pad up I went out to the kitchen. I set everything down on the table and then went back to my room. In the closet, I found my flute and guitar in their cases and my piano music underneath it. Picking them up, I grabbed my pillow and once again left the room. A girl always feels better when she has her own pillow. Pausing in the doorway, I looked around. I hoped I’d be back someday, but for now, I would try to put all this behind me. I shut the door and walked back down the hallway to where everyone was waiting. Damian raised his eyebrow when he saw my pillow. “What? I need something to hit you with,” I teased. He looked surprised but just shook his head slowly and picked up my guitar and flute. “Is that everything?” Phil asked. I nodded. “I think so.” “Good, ok everyone, let’s go.” Taking the house and car keys off the counter, I glanced around one more time. I wouldn’t need them obviously but I didn’t want the car being stolen and I didn’t want anyone breaking in again. Then, I walked outside and didn’t look back.
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Apr 16, 2012 22:30:02 GMT -5
Post by celticbear on Apr 16, 2012 22:30:02 GMT -5
My favorite part was how Sharon took control and everybody listened! And the whole scene in her parents room and how she finished cleaning out her own room and her answer to Damian about why she had the pillow!
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Apr 16, 2012 22:39:32 GMT -5
Post by HburgEagle44 on Apr 16, 2012 22:39:32 GMT -5
I loved when Damian held her in his arms... <3 haha so cute! update soon... I want to know who the boy is...
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Apr 19, 2012 12:39:23 GMT -5
Post by CelticPrincess24 on Apr 19, 2012 12:39:23 GMT -5
Wow. I wonder who the boy is. And the part where Damian hugged her was cute. n_n Update soon!
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May 3, 2012 20:02:37 GMT -5
Post by celticthundergirl on May 3, 2012 20:02:37 GMT -5
Sorry guys, I feel really bad cause it's taking me so long. I've been really busy with school and work. I'll try to update soon.
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May 12, 2012 16:48:40 GMT -5
Post by HburgEagle44 on May 12, 2012 16:48:40 GMT -5
updaaatteeee
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May 15, 2012 20:30:21 GMT -5
Post by thunderhead2009 on May 15, 2012 20:30:21 GMT -5
I love your story!
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May 18, 2012 14:08:49 GMT -5
Post by thunderhead2009 on May 18, 2012 14:08:49 GMT -5
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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May 20, 2012 12:09:02 GMT -5
Post by celticthundergirl on May 20, 2012 12:09:02 GMT -5
I promise I'll update as soon as possible. Hopefully a couple of weeks at the latest. School's almost done so once vacation starts I should have more time to update.
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May 29, 2012 16:48:47 GMT -5
Post by celticthundergirl on May 29, 2012 16:48:47 GMT -5
Hey guys, I finally had time to update. Sorry to make you wait so long. I feel terrible! It's not the longest update but it's all i could come up with. So before I bore you all with my talking, here ya go!
After driving all day long, Sharon finally told us that we would reach the hotel we would be staying at in about half an hour. That received loud whoops from Keith and Damian. I smiled and shook my head. Boys will be boys, especially when they’re hungry like these two were. “Hey Annica, come on back here a minute,” Ruth said motioning me to come into the girl’s section of the bus. I guess I’d be staying there now too. I got up slowly, my knee still hurting somewhat, and followed her. I pushed aside the curtain to see all the girls waiting. “What’s going on?” I asked. “Well, we wondered if you would play your fiddle for us,” Ruth stated. “Well I guess I could. I don’t see why not.” I sat down, and, picking up my fiddle, I began to play, softly at first but then I put my whole heart into it. I played a song called “The Fields of Athenry.” After the song ended, I looked up. Sharon had come in as I was playing and now smiled at me. “That was beautiful,” she said, a thoughtful look on her face. “Would you play that again for Phil and the lads?” “I guess, but wouldn’t they have heard?” “Listen.” They were pretty loud out there. Keith and Damian arguing over who had played the best prank on Paul, (“Mine was way better,” “No, mine was and you know it,” “Prove it,”) Paul grumbling about everybody always picking on him, and Neil strumming his guitar, not to mention the loud clamoring of the others as well as the puppy barking. No, they wouldn’t have heard. Walking back out, everyone else stopped, but Keith and Damian didn’t even notice us until Sharon slammed a book on the table in front of them. Jumping, Damian looked up and grinned sheepishly, then whispered quietly, “I did,” in Keith’s direction. “You little…” “Keith, Quiet!” Sharon said, angrily. “But he…” “No buts. Annica is going to play for us now.” She nodded at me to begin as Keith mumbled under his breath and Damian gave him a triumphant grin, and then looked at me still grinning, a mischievous gleam in his eye. I could tell this argument was far from over. Shaking my head, I took a seat and played the same song as before, putting even more expression into it. (By the way, you should look up the song, it’s really sad.) When I finished, I looked up slowly, a little bit nervous at what their reaction would be. Damian had a far away look in his eyes, Phil had a thoughtful look on his face and the rest of the lads were smiling. “Annica, can you read sheet music?” Sharon asked me. “Yeah, why?” “Would you try out this song for me?” she asked, handing me some music. The title was, A Bird Without Wings. I started slowly, getting a feel of the tune. Suddenly, someone started singing along quietly. Damian. He had the most beautiful voice I had ever heard. It washed over me and he sang along as I played. When we finished, it was silent, and then, everyone started clapping. “You guys actually sounded kind of ok…” Paul said grinning. “Wow thanks. Okay is definitely something to be proud of,” Damian said sarcastically. He smiled at me. “We should do that again sometime.” I smiled and nodded. “Seeing as we did sound ok after all,” I said glancing Paul’s way. He just grinned as everyone else laughed. “Don’t listen to him that was great,” Keith said enthusiastically, “although I could do a lot better…” “O shut up Keith,” Damian retorted.” “Boys stop, before I get angry again,” Sharon said, although she was trying not to smile. “Aw Sharon, you’re no fun. You’re worse than my mother,” Keith whined. “That’s right and you’re really going to find that out when I send you to your room without supper.” “You wouldn’t.” “Wouldn’t I?” She said it with such a look that Keith didn’t dare reply. This made me start giggling and eventually everyone was laughing except Sharon, and Keith who didn’t dare risk Sharon’s wrath. The puppy jumped up onto my lap and started yipping loudly. “You know, you should probably name this little girl here,” Ryan said pointing the puppy in my arms. “You’re right. I guess I hadn’t really thought about it until now.” I sat there thinking, not coming up with anything. “Well at the moment, nothing is coming to me, I’ll have to think about it for a while I guess.” “Are we there yet?” Damian asked. “Damo, what kind of a name is that?” Paul asked. “No doofball I was asking if we were almost to the hotel,” Damian retorted rolling his eyes. I just smiled. “Ten minutes guys. You should be able to last that long I hope,” Sharon answered with a pointed look at Keith. Keith almost whooped again but quickly covered it up with a cough. “You know Keith, that cough sounds pretty bad. Maybe Sharon should send you to bed early and give you some soup instead of desert,” I said smugly. I couldn’t help myself. George covered up a laugh at the stunned look on Keith’s face and Damian and Ryan looked at me with a look of surprise on their face. Soon a whole new round of laughter started and didn’t end until we got to the hotel. ~ It shouldn't take me as long to update next time. I couldn't think of anything to write but I have some ideas now that I got it going again. Please tell me what you think. What's your fav. part?
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Post by celticbear on May 29, 2012 20:53:47 GMT -5
I do believe Sharon and Phil are going to make Annica a part of CT! My favorite part was the whole teasing scene between Damo and Keith and Sharon laying down the law!
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May 29, 2012 23:28:29 GMT -5
Post by HburgEagle44 on May 29, 2012 23:28:29 GMT -5
Oh, that was so cute! I loved when Damian joined Annica... adorable Update update update! (I agree with Auntie prediction wise haha)
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Jun 11, 2012 2:51:59 GMT -5
Post by MsJessika :) on Jun 11, 2012 2:51:59 GMT -5
Update??
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Jun 28, 2012 23:59:30 GMT -5
Post by thunderhead2009 on Jun 28, 2012 23:59:30 GMT -5
Please update this is sooo good!!!
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