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Post by violalover on Aug 9, 2009 16:13:01 GMT -5
Heres the begingin on my "threequel"!! (this ones for you jen!!) This is the "threequel" to California Blues and Hellos & GoodByes... ENJOY!!
Reception…
Toni, Damian, Keith, and Lauren are going around saying “Hello” to everyone before they disappear onto the dance floor….
Lauren and Toni stop at a table…
Toni& Lauren: JEN!!!! Jen: Heyyy guys!! Congrats Lauren….and Toni....I assume you’re next?? I saw your little boyfriend over there…
*Toni Blushes* *Ryan Walks up*
Ryan: Hey Lauren I think the photographer’s ready…all we need is you, Keith, Damian, and Toni…everybody else is already over there…. Lauren: Okay come on guys!
Ryan to Jen: Why hello there Jen: Hi : ) Ryan: Have we met before? Jen: I think I would remember if we had…. Ryan: You a friend of Lauren’s? Jen: Yep! And Toni! Ryan: Well then, Hi! I’m Ryan! Jen: And I’m Jen
*Lauren from a distance*
Lauren: Ryan!! Come on or you’re not gonna be in the picture!!! Ryan: Well…Lauren calls….Talk to ya later??... Jen: Mhmm…!
*Jen Blushes*
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Post by violalover on Aug 10, 2009 17:06:31 GMT -5
*Jen after the reception…*
Okay let’s get this straight…so…
Keith: Lauren’s new husband… Damian: Toni’s boyfriend & Keith’s best friend & Keith’s band mate George: Keith’s band mate and friend Sarah: George’s too cute daughter! Meagan: Keith’s sister & Toni’s friend Paul: Keith’s band mate and friend And…Ryan….Wow…Ryan…he’s the epitome of an Irish man....He may not have reed hair but that’s okay with me…
*A week later at the pub*
Keith: Hey Mrs. Harkin! You want a Guinness? Lauren: Yes please Mr. Harkin! Toni: You guys excited for Morocco?? Lauren& Keith: DUH!!! Lauren: And I’m soooo glad you guys are coming with us!!! Toni: So am I!!!
*Jen walks in the pub*
Lauren: Well looky here!! Hey Jen! Come on over here! Toni: Ello dear! How ya doin? Jen: Haha hey guys! Ryan *Thinking* So we meet again Ryan : Hi there again! Jen : Hey
*They all get to talking*
Lauren: Heyy Jen…what are you doing next week? Jen: Well nothing really….Just going jogging ‘n’ such…..why? Lauren: Well….all of us are going to Morocco for me and Keefy’s honeymoon….and we’d all love it if you’d come with us! Toni: Yeah Jen! Come with us!! Lauren: So…..What do ya say? *Ryan thinking*: Please say yes….please say yes… Jen:……..
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Post by violalover on Aug 10, 2009 18:21:45 GMT -5
Jen: Well….why not? It’s not everyday I get to go to Morocco!! *Ryan thinking*: YES!!!!!
*The Airport* 4:00 AM *waiting for the plane*
*Toni’s asleep in Damian’s arms* Lauren’s slowly waking from Keith’s lap*
Lauren: UGH!!! Too early! Keith: You can sleep on the plane, don’t worry.
*Jen’s asleep on a chair* *Paul’s spread across a row of chairs* Paul: Why sooo early?!?!?! George: Do you want to go to Morocco or not? Paul: Fine I’ll shut up…
*Ryan’s jamming out on his ipod*
Keith: Whatcha listening to over there Ry?
*Ryan keeps dancing around not hearing Keith* *Keith Throws a doughnut at Ryan*
Ryan: HEYY! What a waste of a doughnut man!! Keith:….Well sorry! Whatcha listening to over there? Ryan:ummmmm…..Damian Rice….. Keith: Ryan……>.> Ryan: Okay Midnight Well…. Keith: That’s what I thought…
*Now Boarding Flight 317 to Morocco*
Keith: hey sunshine it’s time to wake up! Lauren: hmmm…..*looks up at Keith & smiles* Okay Damian: Toni…sweetie…come on we’re leaving now! Toni: mmmmmm… :/ Damian: Good Morning Sweets! Toni: Paul:UGH!..Come on people! Ryan: Hey Jen….we’re kinda leaving now… Jen: Who? What? Huh?...oh Hi Ryan….oh…Thanks…
*Boarding the Plane*
*First Class* Keith & Lauren: Here’s us!! *A couple rows back* Toni & Damian : Here we are! *A couple more rows back* George & Sarah: We’re over here! *Last row of first class* Ryan & Jen: and that leaves us!
*Coach*
Paul: WHAT GIVES?!?!?!? Keith & Lauren: *giggles* Keith: What’s that Paul??? I can’t hear you from 1ST CLASS!!
P.S: toni! its ur turn!!
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Post by violalover on Aug 10, 2009 19:06:34 GMT -5
hey guys! sorry its sooo short!! i have to go to dinner...but i figured id give you more b4 i left! this is what i have typed!
*6 Hours later*
*Lauren’s cuddles up with Keith …asleep* *Toni’s laid across Damian’s Lap….asleep* *Damian’s Listening to his ipod* *George is watching a movie with Sarah* *Paul is angrily twittering about being in coach*
Pilot: Thank you for flying Air Morocco, Please enjoy your stay!
*Paul grabs his stuff and runs up to first class* Paul:” HEY GUYS WE’RE HERE!!
*waking everyone up*
Lauren: Paul….You’re…..you’re!! ugh I don’t even know!!!! >.> Keith: >.> Toni: UGH!! PAUL!! You stink… Damian: Singing Happy Birthday Sweet 16… *Toni Taps him*: Babe we’re here… Damian: Oh…. Lol…*blushes* George & Sarah: *Giggles*
*Ryan and Jen walk up*
Ryan: Okay we can all yell at Paul Later….but right now…We’re in MOROCCO!!
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Post by violalover on Aug 11, 2009 19:17:23 GMT -5
*Keith steps off the plane*
Keith: wait a sec! Lauren: What’s wrong hun? Keith: Where’s Meagan? Lauren: wow…you just noticed she wasn’t here? Keith: Sorry….it was 4 in the morning! Being up that early can have an effect on a guy! Lauren: Didn’t I tell you? She was busy this morning…something came up at work…so she called and said she’d be flying in tomorrow morning… Keith: Oh….okay…good! Lauren: Yeah now off to the hotel! I need a nap!
*At the hotel*
Keith: Okay room assignments…
Room 1: Me and Lauren Room 2: Toni & Jen Room 3: Ryan, Paul, and Damian
Toni& Damian: >.> Keith: Well sorry guys…you two aren’t even engaged! And I don’t want any calls from “mommy and daddy” Toni & Damian: WE’RE 18!! Keith: I know…When I hear wedding bells then I’ll let ya know… Toni & Damian: >.> fine…
*Keith texting everyone from his hotel room*
K: YO!!! Wheres tha pub?? I need me a stout… Damo: dnt ask me! Im 18 remember?!?! K: ok snarky pants! No man U tix 4 ur bday! Damo: off to google tha pub! K: Paul! Ryan! You noe where it is? P: 2 blocks away! Ry: he googled it with Damo… K: kk guys meet me & Lauren in the lobby…. Damo: wat bout me? K: you and toni cnt drink! Go 2 tha beach or sumthin….
*The pub*
Keith: Guinness please… Bartender: Sorry sir…we don’t have Guinness….. *Keith’s eye twitches* Keith: No….. no stout……I’ll…I’ll have a coke… Lauren: *Giggles* Pepsi please! Paul: I’ll have a VK…. *Lauren starts laughing her head off!!* Lauren: Paul…you know this isn’t like the Celtic Thunder Pub…they don’t have VKs….HAHA Paul: oh….Corona and Lime…. Jen: Bud Lite… Ryan: Coke please Bartender: coming right up!
Jen: Ry…a coke?? Ryan: haha it’s either Guinness or NOTHING!! Jen: Ahhh I see! Ryan: Yeah….Bud Lite?? How do you call yourself Irish?? Jen: HAHA! I lived in America for 6 years….just rubbed off on me I guess….. Ryan: Well I’m gonna have to rub off on you…cuz I don’t think I can handle a “bud” person. Jen: haha okay!
Damian txts: who wants to hit tha beach?? K: you didn’t even have to ask… Lauren: Hey Keefy! *reading over his shoulder* Can I come too? Maybe you can teach me how to surf… Keith: Sure!
*They leave* *Leaving Paul, Ryan, and Jen*
Paul: Well that was rude!...ahh well! Off to the mall!!
*Paul leaves*
Ryan: Correction…..THAT was rude! Jen: Haha! So… what do you want to do? Ryan: Well…wanna go to the park? Jen: Sure
*The park* Ryan: Sooooo…Why ya back I Ireland? Jen: I came back for Kelsie’s funeral… Ryan: You were there? Wait! You knew Kels?? Jen: Yeah…we were friends when I was in America…..that’s how I met Lauren& Toni! Jen: Wait you knew kels?? Ryan: Yeah!! We were best friends for the longest time!! Til she moved to Cali & I stayed in Ireland… Jen: So you’re the Ryan she used to talk about!! Ryan: Yeah…I guess I am! *Awkward Silence* Ryan: You miss her? Jen: Like a fish misses water…you? Ryan: Always have…and now I always will… Jen: You two were really close weren’t you? Ryan: She was like a sister to me…I was totally crushed when we didn’t keep in touch… Jen: awwww!! I’m sorry! *Ryan brushing a tear from his cheek* *Jen leans in and gives Ryan a hug* Jen whispering: you know you’ll see her again someday right? Ryan: Yeah…I know… Jen: So…you wanna go and see what’s going on at the beach? Ryan: Sure
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Post by derrybabe on Aug 20, 2009 15:31:17 GMT -5
So will there be more??
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Post by Damianite on Aug 22, 2009 22:41:29 GMT -5
great i love it
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Post by violalover on Nov 20, 2009 14:42:11 GMT -5
Hey guys! sorry i havent really written alot lately....ive been busy.... im thinking about changing the format of my stories....instead of my "script" format how about a real story format? lemme know what u think! thoughts...suggestions....?? anything would be helpful! thanks! -viola¢¾
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Post by discatangel on Nov 21, 2009 19:58:06 GMT -5
as long as you write it's all good with me!!!
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Post by violalover on Nov 21, 2009 22:16:44 GMT -5
any suggestions??? anything u want to see in the storyy??? anything helps!!!
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Post by meagab15 on Mar 1, 2010 8:38:57 GMT -5
viola I've got one for ya can you give me a love interest in your story
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