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Post by pfieffer on Aug 6, 2009 3:14:45 GMT -5
i wrote this for school. it mimics the english sonnet. this poem reminds me of peter pan and i love peter pan.
Love is like flight beautiful careless and free. But it does not last because you quickly fall. It might seem amazing at the time to you and me, But in the end something else is your call. Flight is exactly like being in love, Since you cannot stay in the air forever, Your love is temporary just like the flight above. Ending your love will always be clever. This end will be the last breath you take, Because death is the end of your love and life. Flight ends with landing, when from dreams you awake. Love's end death will bring everyone great strife. When you fly above the world you wont yawn. As long as you live, love carries on.
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Post by jillybean423 on Nov 2, 2009 21:06:27 GMT -5
i love it pfieffer!
p.s.: i love Peter Pan, even though he's cocky :]
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