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Post by meg_cahill21 on Jan 24, 2012 20:41:51 GMT -5
Ali's POV:
Two weeks went by since I agreed to be Damian's girlfriend and nothing could've been better. For example, just last night I had him over to properly meet my family and they absolutely LOVED him, but then again, what's not to love?
"Hey babe, are you alright?" Damian asked, taking me out of my thoughts. Today, him and I were just hanging out and enjoying each other's company by hanging out in the public park that was about twenty minutes from my own house.
"I am perfectly fine." I state as I lean over and kiss him. He kisses me back, then pulls away, kisses me on both cheeks, then my forehead, and says softly,
"Good, I'm glad. I'm sorry if this is too soon for you Ali, and you don't have to say anything back if you don't want because I'll understand, but I want you to know that I love you." I pull away from him slightly and look up into his beautiful blue eyes. The sincerity in them made me melt and made me feel slightly guilty as I said to him,
"Im sorry Damian, but I think it is too soon for me to definitly know. Like, my lve for you is there, but I don't really know what to make of it yet." He nods and smiles.
"I completely understand darling, and I totally respect your reasons." He says as he lightly runs his fingers up and down my arm, making my skin tingle at his touch.
"Thank you baby." I mutter quietly. We sit on the park bench in silence for a few moments until the beautiful quietness around us breaks by my cell phone screeching my ringtone: Domino.
"Hello?" I answer, slightly aggravated by the caller for ruining the perfect moment between my boyfriend and I.
"Ali!!! You HAVE to come QUICK!!! There's been a REALLY bad accident and mom and dad are seriously hurt and might not make it through the night!" my older sister screeched. I frozed and dropped my phone in shock. And then, everything went black.
*Ya, this was gonna be longer, but i have to shut my computer off...moms orders. Anyway, thought that was a great place for Jess to pick up...hope you guys liked it, sorry it was sooo short!!! COMMENT PLEASE!!! thanks!!! and sorry i didnt use Damos POV...*
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Post by celticbear on Jan 24, 2012 22:28:19 GMT -5
Wow! Meg! You sure do know how to end with a cliffy! I hope Ali's parents are okay! But at least Ali has Damo to lean on! Love how Damo said those three little words and that Ali was honest with Damo about her not ready say those words to him!
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Post by !!DerryChick!! on Jan 25, 2012 12:25:12 GMT -5
Ughhh!!!!!!!! I hate Cliffs!
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Post by HburgEagle44 on Jan 26, 2012 22:19:16 GMT -5
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Um, Jess, update. Now. Before I kill Meg. Humph. *Just kidding mods, it's just a friendly joke.. heh heh*
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Post by MsJessika :) on Jan 29, 2012 15:58:09 GMT -5
Meg, that was amazing! I'm sorry I haven't updated, I went on a short trip. I'll get an update in as soon as I can.
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Jan 31, 2012 16:51:24 GMT -5
thanks!!! and take as long as u need
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Post by MsJessika :) on Feb 4, 2012 14:34:17 GMT -5
Alright, I've been super busy lately, but I found the time to update. Enjoy!! ____________________________________________________ "Ali.... Ali.... ALI!" I opened up my eyes. I was in Damian's arms and he was shaking me. "Wha- what?", I stuttered. "You collapsed in my arms. Are you alright?" "Yes, I'm fine, but... Sara.... Sara said that...." "What, what is it?" "Something terrible happened to my mom and dad. She... she said that they may not make it through the night." "Oh my God. Ali, what exactly happened?" "I don't know, she didn't tell me." "Come on, let's go." We rushed back home as fast as we possibly could. I rang the doorbell and waited for Sara to open it, but she wasn't home. I pulled my phone out of my pocket. "Sara, where are you?" "At the hospital. Where are you?" "At home. How am I supposed to get to the hospital?" "I don't know, take a bus?" "Alright fine." I hung up the phone. I couldn't stop panicking. I needed to see my parents. It seemed like forever until the bus reached the hospital. I called Sara once again to ask where she was. I walked in the room where she said she'd be, along with my other two older sisters, Gaby and Melissa. I looked over and once I saw the condition I was in, I fell back into Damian's arms. ____________________________________________________ Meg, 'tis your turn once again! Hope you liked the update.
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Post by celticbear on Feb 6, 2012 1:31:44 GMT -5
Wow! Thank God Damo is there to comfort her! Things are starting to get really Tense. I don't her parents to die.
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Feb 6, 2012 14:59:52 GMT -5
haha that was really good..and HBurg, you would NEVER kill me, u LOVEEEE me 2 much!!! hahaha, ill try 2 update soon...whenever i canfind time...great job Jess!!!
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Post by MsJessika :) on Feb 10, 2012 18:10:59 GMT -5
Thanks, I'm glad ya like it. And Meg, tis your turn once again!!
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Feb 10, 2012 22:04:07 GMT -5
working on it...things have been hectic with all the high school stuff coming out this week...but im working on it...
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Post by MsJessika :) on Feb 11, 2012 17:17:39 GMT -5
Alright. Take your time.
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Mar 8, 2012 7:26:29 GMT -5
*ok so i am doing this at like 7am in the morning after a nite of celebrating...oh and im quickly doing thos before school so sorry if it sucks...*
"Oh my God! How's Mom and Dad?" I exclamed as i ran into my sister Sara's arms.
"Well, Mom looks like she'l be okay, um she only got multiple cuts and bruises and has a few broken bones...mostly ribs." Gaby started.
"And Dad?" I asked, hoping that the news would be what I want to hear.
"He's in a coma and the doctor's don't think that he'll ever wake up from it." Melissa said bluntly. I burst into tears as my knees buckled from under me. Sara was just able to hold me up along with Damian's help. But, I couldn't help it. I mean, what can I say, I was a Daddy's girl. Ever since I was little, I adored and looked up to the man and to hear that now he may be out of my life forever...it killed me.
"I'm soooo sorry Ali." Damian muttered in my ear as he took me from Sara's embrace and held me in his own.
"He can't die...he can't. He has to stay alive so he can see me walk down the isle, meethis grandkids, take them to baseball games like he used to do with me since he got no sons to share his love of the sport with...Damian, he just can't die." I sobbed, burrowing my head into the crook of his neck, not even the littlest embarressed that I looked like a blubbering idiot in front of him.
"Ssh, Ali, it'll be ok, he'll probably wake up." Damian tried to comfort me. Something inside of me snappedas I pulled away to face him.
"How do you know that? You know what, you don't even know what this is like right now! With all your money, your perfect family, the perfect job, you never have to worry about this kind of thing! So, how can you say that it will be ok when you don't even know what I am going through!?! You know what, just leave! I don't want to see you ever again Damian McGinty!" I shouted. Damian looks at me with hurt, then shock, and then confusion...But, I held my cold stare. So, without saying a word, he got up and left.
"All he was trying to do was help Ali." Sara muttered to me when Damian was out of view.
"I don't care." I grumbled while thinking in my head,
"What have I done?"
*Comments please...sorry if this sucked...Your turn Jess*
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Post by celticbear on Mar 9, 2012 0:12:50 GMT -5
Alli did not just send The best person to ever come into her life away! This better be just the shock of what she heard talking! JESS SINCE IT'S YOUR TURN,PLEASE FIX THIS! YOU CAN'T LET WHAT ALLI AND DAMO HAVE BE DONE!
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Post by MsJessika :) on Mar 10, 2012 20:37:32 GMT -5
Okay Meg, all I can say is Oh. My. God. I did not expect that at all!! And here is the next update. _______________________________________________________ The scene played through my head once more. Damian looked hurt. He looked as if he was about to cry as well. But he looked confused as well. He just left though. No more had to be said. Was he even going to come back? I wasn't sure. I was still crying. And now for two reasons, one- for my dad, and two- because of how harshly I pushed Damian away. He was only trying to make me feel better. I have no idea why I snapped at him like that. though. Really, he didn't do anything wrong. But I was too caught up in my own emotions to even think about what I was doing. just because I was hurt didn't mean he deserved to be hurt. I wanted to apologize, but I decided to give Damian some time to let it all sink in before trying to talk to him again. -Damian's POV- Mixed emotions came across me as I walked back to the bus stop. 'What did I even do to her? Nothing. It isn't my fault that I tried to make her feel better and she got all defensive. I should be the one who's angry here, not Ali. But wait. I can't just go on and start confronting her. Her parents are in a critical condition. And if I did do that, she'd feel even worse. But she deserves to feel hurt. ...Wait, no she doesn't. I...', I thought. My own feelings were arguing with each other. I spent my entire bus ride thinking about Ali. And honestly, I felt sorry for her. She only snapped at me because she was hurt and upset. There's nothing that I did wrong. From what she's told me, Ali and her dad are really close. And hearing that her dad was in a coma basically broke her heart. I walked back inside to the house where the rest of the lads and Conor were. I didn't say a word, but I ran straight up into my room and started crying. normally, I'm not the kind of guy who will cry over this kind of stuff, but Ali... She's different. She's like no other girl and I don't want to lose her. But she just told me she never wanted to see me again. After I finally stopped crying, I just laid on my bed and stared at the ceiling. Millions of thoughts raced through my head. And all of them were about Ali. -Ali's POV- I sat on a chair in the room and thought about Damian. Still, I didn't know why he deserved that. And a wave of guilt rushed over me. I just remembered that i told him I never wanted to see him again. That wasn't necessarily a lie. I didn't want to see Damian. I needed to see him. I took my phone out of my pocket and I decided to call Damian. I couldn't take it anymore, I needed to apologize to him. -Damian's POV- My thoughts were interrupted by my phone going off. I checked to see who it was. Ali. I thought for a moment. Why does she want to talk to me? I don't want to talk to her... Maybe I do. No. I don't. I can't. Why am I pushing her away? Just because she hurt me doesn't mean I have to hurt her. She's hurt enough already anyway. I answered it. "Hello." "Damian, look I'm sorry. I really don't know why I said that to you earlier. None of it was true. I was just really hurt and upset. And I wasn't sure if my dad would wake up and when you said he probably would, I just got defensive because I..." I interrupted her. "Ali, it's alright. I completely understand." "It's not alright, I feel awful about it actually." "Ali, don't worry about it, darling. It's fine." "No, I want to make it up to you... By the way, you might just want to check the balcony." "What? Why?" She didn't respond, but I walked over to the it, pushed aside the curtains aside and surely enough, Ali was standing there. She had a giant poster that read "I'm sorry. Forgive me?" I kissed and and answered, "Of course I forgive you." ____________________________________________________ Hope ya liked it and Meg, can't wait to see what you'll be writing next!!
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