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Post by HburgEagle44 on Dec 23, 2011 20:08:34 GMT -5
This is really cute!! ;D you two are good cowriting together I love it!! sorry I haven't been commenting, I had a concussion... update??
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Post by MsJessika :) on Dec 23, 2011 21:47:02 GMT -5
Ooh, a concussion?? That suckssss! and thank you, Meg's quite the genius, isn't she? Lol. I would've updated, but it's not my turn.
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Post by HburgEagle44 on Dec 23, 2011 22:46:48 GMT -5
lol yes, you're both geniuses ;D yeah... a concussion... lol it did suck
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Dec 24, 2011 18:56:10 GMT -5
how the heck did u get the concussion??? oh and Jess: i plan on updating AFTER Christmas, so probably either Tues-Friday, whenever time permits cuz i have to make plans to watch the Bruins kick Cnacuks u know what on Saturday the 7th
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Post by MsJessika :) on Dec 25, 2011 22:54:55 GMT -5
We all know the Canucks are gonna win, Meg. Admit it!! And update as soon as possible!! MERRY CHRISTMAS TO ALL WHO CELEBRATE IT!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by HburgEagle44 on Dec 26, 2011 2:23:50 GMT -5
I got the concussion.. well, I got kicked in the head... if you want to know the details, message me so we don't get in trouble for having conversations on here... lol UPDATE.
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Post by MsJessika :) on Jan 2, 2012 13:28:11 GMT -5
Meg and I are unsure of an idea for the next update, so if any of you have an idea, you can tell one of us and we"ll try and get an update in. Thanks!
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Jan 2, 2012 16:13:23 GMT -5
what Jess said...sry guys, im like brain dead rite now but ill try to have an update out by the end of the week
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Post by MsJessika :) on Jan 6, 2012 16:49:27 GMT -5
Meg is still having a little trouble with the next update, but not to worry, she'll post one soon.
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Jan 9, 2012 19:40:32 GMT -5
*FINALLY i was able to write this...ENJOY!!!*
Ali's POV:
Dinner was awkward to say the least. Keith and Paul kept slagging Damian and Ryan and George kept looking at me as if they wanted to say something but they held it back every single time.
"So, Ali, what do you think of dating an international LOSER?" Keith questioned with a laugh as his fifth Guiness came around. Damian just rolled his eyes as I laughed, though silently, I thanked Keith for saying something to me and for trying to loosen the tension that clearly engulfed the table.
"Well..." Damian looked at me with a look before adding in his two cents.
"We aren't dating you idiot, she's just my new best friend." he said. I couldn't help but notice though that his eyes glazed over as if he was far off in his own thoughts and his face got all sullen.
"Hey, I thought I was your best friend?" Paul questioned.
"You've been replaced because she is way more nicer to me than you are." Damian stated with a half-hearted laugh. And just like that, the tension was gone and the lads and I spent the next two hours laughing and joking and slagging one another.
Later that night...Damian's POV:
"Did you have fun tonight?" I asked as I walked Ali from my house back over to hers. She pauses and thinks for a minute before saying,
"Yeah...yeah, I did. At first it was completely awkward, like we were jst meeting each other for the first time even though it wasn't, but then that awkwardness just faded away and I was really enjoying myself. I'm glad you asked me to come with you tonight." Now, it was my turn to think my next move. After a mini debate in my head, I slipped my hand into her small one and said,
"I'm glad you came." She said nothing as I walked her up to her front door.
"Well, I guess that this is goodnight." She said, swinging our clased hands back and forth as we now stood in front of her house.
"Yeah, I guess so." I muttered, starting to have another mini debate in my head with myself.
"See you tomorrow?" She whispered, moving closer towards me. I moved closer to her and muttered,
"Yeah." And then, on impulse, I pulled her close and kissed her. It took her a moment to relax against me, and when she did, it was the best kiss that I ever had. But, when we pulled away and I saw the look on her face, I panicked and sprinted away, before either of us could get another word in.
*Yeah...i hated this update from the moment that i started writing it...but i promised jess that i would update today, so this is all i could come up with. Jess:enjoy having to write an update to make up for this pathetic one...oh and BTW jess: the Bruins sooo won that game Saturday, the score may have said other wise, but physically and on a skill level the B's outplayed the Canucks and wouldve wiped the ice with them if it wasnt for that bad call on Looch and if Marchy wasnt so stupid to hit that wimp from behind...lol...sorry for this short and awful update!!! hope you guys can forgive me!!! REVIEW ANYWAY though please... thanks!!!*
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Post by celticbear on Jan 10, 2012 0:00:21 GMT -5
Wow! That was some dinner! Glad Damian kissed Allie at her front door.And him running off after the kiss was PRICELESS!
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Post by MsJessika :) on Jan 11, 2012 16:12:00 GMT -5
Meg, I like the update actually. It gave me a few ideas. And trust me, I've heard enough about those Bruins, my one friend loves them aswell and she would NOT stop talking about the game. Anyway, her's the update. Enjoy!! ____________________________________________________
-Ali's POV- Wow. He just kissed me. Damian McGinty just kissed me. Oh. My. GOD. -Damian's POV- Why did I just do that? What was I thinking? I've known this girl for a couple days! What does she think of this? Will she ever talk to me again? I think I ruined any chances of Ali speaking to me ever again. I kept my pace ad millions of thoughts and scenarios raced through my mind. I sprinted into the house and up the stairs. I knew the lads were trying to talk to me, but I ran straight to my room. I need to be alone, to think. And another thought, why did I sprint here? I could've just moderately ran instead of sprinting full speed. I thought as I was still catching my breath. I still could not believe I actually kissed Ali. I didn't even know if I should talk to her, wait for her to say something, or just not say anything at all, even if she does try to talk to me. More thoughts raced through my mind and I was thinking of every worse case scenario possible. I began to drift off into deep thoguht and worry. My thoughts were interrupted by George. "Hey Damo, ye alright?", George asked. "Yeah. I-I'm fine.", I replied, weakly trying to cover up the fact that I certainly was not. "Come on, lad. You can tell me. Really, what is wrong?" "Well, you know Ali, right? Well... I... I kissed her." "And her initial response was?" "I don't know. I sprinted here as fast as I could before either of us could get a word in." "Why don't you try talking to her?" "I don't know... I'm afraid for what her response will be." "I understand, but I'm pretty sure she likes you too. You never know, Damo." "Thank you, George." "Aye, it's not a problem at all, lad." Shortly after George left the room, my phone began to ring. I looked at tje screen. It clearly read 'Ali.' I debated on whether to pick the phone up or not. And I ended up answering the phone. "Hello?" "Hey Damo. It's Ali. I was going to tell you something, but I couldn't because you sprinted away so quickly and I didn't have the chance to say anything." "Oh..", I sheepishly replied. "You looked so worried about the, uh, kiss and I was going to say it was perfectly fine." "You were?" "Yes. And you're pretty good at that, ya know?" "So I've been told." "By who?" "...Okay, I admit, no one beside you." "Ha! I've prooved you wrong again, McGinty." I could tell she must have been smirking. I rolled my eyes at her. "Hey, um, Ali, I know we've only been friends for a short amount of time, but would you be my girl?" And with that question, she hung up. Wait, now what was it this time? Does she think I'm rushing things? Then I heard the doorbell ring and went to get it. I was hoping it wasn't some neighbor who was going to complain about the awfully loud noise Keith, Paul, and Conor were making. It wasn't. It was a beautiful girl. A girl by the name of Ali Dawson. And when I looked more closely, she held a piece of paper that said in all caps: YES. She tightly wrapped her arms around me and gave me a hug. Then Ali, looked up at me and smiled. I was smiling as I whispered to her, "Kiss me, I'm Irish." Surprisingly, Ali did kiss me. And it was the best kiss I'd ever had. We talked a while on the steps and then, I walked her back to her house. "Good night, Damian." "Good night, love." I kissed her cheek and walked back home. According to Paul, I walked in with a lovestuck smile. He, Conor, and Keith saw the whole thing they watched through the windows. "And the best part was when you said, Kiss me, I'm Irish!! That was hilarious. Keith and Conor would not stop laughing!", Paul said. Or at least tried to say, he was laughing way too hard. They wouldn't stop slagging me for almost twenty minutes straight. But I didn't let that get to me. I was just happy that Ali Dawson was now my girlfriend. ___________________________________________________
Hope you guys like the update!! Meg, your turn again!! ;D
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Jan 11, 2012 21:22:29 GMT -5
that was amazing...loved it...and it just dawned on me that the girl from the show Austin and Ali that is on disneychannel...well the ali from our story and the ali from that show have the same name spelled the same exact way...weird....and ugh, just when i thought that i would be off the hook for an update for awhile, the update lands on me again...haha, jk...ill see if i can have one up within the next 2 weeks...and tell ur friend that shes a very smart girl for liking the bruins...CUZ THEY ROCK!!!!! great update....for a 'nucks fan...lol
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Post by celticbear on Jan 11, 2012 22:06:57 GMT -5
Jessie! Something told me Ali did not mind the Kiss! Love how fatherly George was. Love how Ali said yes to being Damo's girl! And of course Paul,Keith and Connor saw the whole thing and had to slag poor happy lovestruck Damo about it! Looking Forward to your Update Meg!
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Post by MsJessika :) on Jan 12, 2012 18:57:44 GMT -5
Why thank you Meg. It was a great update for a 'nucks fan. haha. Any ideas for your next update?? And CB, thank you as well.
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