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Post by !!DerryChick!! on Feb 9, 2011 16:25:57 GMT -5
• Characters
Gibbs: George Donaldson
Zevi: Zara Curtis
McGee: Damian McGinty
Denizo: Keith Harkin
Abby: Ashley Nicole O'Conner (me)
Director Vance: Sharon Browne (just cause she keeps the guys in check)
Ducky: Phil Coulter
Jimmy Palmer: Neil Byrne
FBI agents: Paul Byrom, and Emmet Cahill, Ryan Kelly ***
"Hey McGinty! Have fun at Zara's party last night? Oh wait! You weren't there! Why weren't you there???" Asked Keith
"Well Harkin, if you must know I had a date last night" Damian says with a pleased grin
"With?" He trailed off
"Ashley of course" Damian chuckled
Keith gave Damian a look of death as George walks in and slaps the back of Keith's head
"Gear up. Dead sailor in Derry" George announces
"Yes boss!" Both men say
"Wait what about Zara?" Keith asked
"She's home sick Harkin" George said as they entered the elavtor
× well should I continue? Hope y'all like it×
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Post by orinocoflow on Feb 9, 2011 18:53:38 GMT -5
Like the personalities! although i can see Ryan as DiNozzo and Keith as Palmer, but vice versa, and George as Gibbs. Although, of course, Paul is the ultimate Dinozzo. Update soon!
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Post by Deleted on Feb 9, 2011 20:44:03 GMT -5
not a fan of CSI but i am loving this so please update
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Post by Deleted on Feb 9, 2011 20:44:41 GMT -5
sry i mean NCIS
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Feb 9, 2011 20:52:43 GMT -5
this is amazing!!! update soon but after u ead this note and do the following: WATCH THE BOSON BRUINS AND MNTREAL CANADIANS GAME NOW!!!! IT IS SOOOO INTENSE THE CROWD IS EVEN CHANTING "USA!!!!" WATCHING THIS GAME IS AN ORDER BY THE WAY!!!! I MEAN THE GOALIES R EVEN FIGHTING!!!! NOW WATCH THE GAME!!!!!
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Post by celticbear on Feb 9, 2011 22:02:27 GMT -5
Love the start of this new story! PLEASE CONTINUE!
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Post by !!DerryChick!! on Feb 9, 2011 23:17:15 GMT -5
I know who paul and Emmet can be now
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Post by CelticPrincess24 on Feb 10, 2011 22:47:30 GMT -5
please, update soon!
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Post by !!DerryChick!! on Feb 11, 2011 9:57:23 GMT -5
"SHOTGUN!!" Keith yelled as he ran to the car.
"Will you ever grow up Harkin?" George asked Keith
"Working on it boss not sure yet" Keith yelled happily as he climbed in to the front seat
"Working on it me deir aire." Damian mumbled
"Hey McGinty calm down I know you and Harkin have som issues to work out but don't worry about him, so play nice." George said as he got in to the back seat and Damian got to the drivers side and started to drive to the crime scene. As they got there George groaned and got out.
"I thought this was an NCIS crime scene not FBI Byrom" George said to Paul
"Oh it is but FBI will be helping you're team out so no worries" Paul said with a smirk on His face
"Yea no worries" George said as he walked pass Paul and over the 'DO NOT CROSS LINE'
"So McGinty what did you and Ash do last night? Did you guys...you know..have any fun?" Keith asked Damian
Damian came up to him and stood face to face with him. "No, we fooled around but it never came to that point. And besides you haven't had a date for months so who's the one the ladies want now?" Damian said with a grin and pointed to himself and ran off ti help George leaving Keith in a state of shock.
"When did he ge his big boy pants on?" Keith asked himself as Neil came up behind him.
"What just happened?" Neil chuckled
"I---im not quite sure Neil" Keith said still in a state of shock.
After a few minutes of in shock Keith finally joined the others.
"Well about time you got here Harkin!" George said
"Sorry boss wont happen again." Keith said after snapping a few pictures and as they all headed up to the van George gets a call and walks away from his team and runs back to the car
"Damian C'mon. Ashley's in trouble qnd she didn't even cause it this time is a stalker again" George said to Damian as he ran into the car and drove off going as fast as he can getting back to the office and headed straight to Ashley's lab. Once they got there Damian scooped Ashley into a hug and Ashley hugged him back and clung to him like her life depended on it.
"Thank you so much for coming Damian and George its a stalker I've known him since we were kids his name is Nathan McDowell. And he wont leave me alone and he just found out where I'm living at and where I work and----"Damian kissed her to shut her up because she always talked way to fast when she was scared
"Hey calm down I won't let him get you I promise I'm here now so don't worry okay" Damian asked the Gothic forensic scientist
"Okay Damian thank-you so much" Ashley said
"Ashley you're going to stay with Damian for as long it takes for us to find him. I don't want you to go anywhere without him I want you Damian to stay with her in the lab I mean everywhere. Are we clear?" George instructed his team
"Yes sir!" They both said
"Damian, Ashley I want you two too stay here untill I give you the permission" George added before heading towards the exit.
"Yes sir" they both said
×the more comments and veiws are what's my inspiration!×
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Feb 11, 2011 14:45:10 GMT -5
i LOVED this!!! especially the part were Keith is told that he should grow up and he shouts "working on it!" HAHAHA UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by orinocoflow on Feb 11, 2011 17:56:08 GMT -5
Love the Keith part! and FBI Byrom...eh, can't realyl see Paul as the antagonist, but oh well. Update soon!!!
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Post by celticbear on Feb 11, 2011 22:37:17 GMT -5
I agree with with Ori! Having Paul as the antagonist is something I'll have to get use to!
I also loved Keith's line about him trying to grow up and wondering where Damo got his big boy pants from! PRICELESS! SO GLAD DAMO IS GOING TO PROTECT HIS GIRL FROM THE BAD GUY! UPDATE SOON,PLEASE!
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Post by Deleted on Feb 12, 2011 16:42:36 GMT -5
ooh great update
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Post by !!DerryChick!! on Mar 1, 2011 13:37:40 GMT -5
As George walked out of the lab Damian still had a tight hold on the woman he loves, Ashley still had her head burried in his chest.
"Okay i need to get back too work Dami, so..Let me go" Ashley told Damian
"Alright, but im not leaving you" Said Damian
"I didnt say you had to leave, i just need you to let me go so i can work" Ashley smiled at Damian and kissed him on the cheek.
Damian let her go, and Ashley went to her stero system and put in SEETHER one of her favrioute bands. Then she headed to her computer system and had started her work on the the dead salior in Derry. Damian had decied to come up behind Ashley and wrap his arm around her waist and lay his on her shoulder he was greatfull she wears heels on her shoes because she only 5'3 and he's 6'0.
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Keith was in the attergation room waiting for George to come in and Talk to Paul and the new FBI agent Emmet Cahill.
"Hm. I wonder what George wants to talk to us about" Paul said to the 20 yr old agent
"Thats for us too know and for George to tell you!" Keith said sharply to the agent.
Just as he said that George walked i and told Keith to leave. Keith had left.
"Okay, Byrom,Cahill. What were you two doing at an NCIS crime scene?" George said calmly
"Well, you see George..." Paul trailed off.
~Sorry it took so long!!!~
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Post by Deleted on Mar 1, 2011 15:04:41 GMT -5
cool update and glad u are putting Emmet in it i love seeing stories with him in it
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