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Post by meg_cahill21 on Feb 5, 2011 16:51:19 GMT -5
i'll try not too, but if u dont update, that may be hard to do. but then again, u posted a nice comment on my new story sooo... maybe i wont kill u cuz u r like the only one reading it....
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Post by laurenne on Feb 5, 2011 18:20:48 GMT -5
What was on her suitcase. It must be something from those guys that are after her telling her that they know where she is. Update soon, please.
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Post by CelticPrincess24 on Feb 5, 2011 20:57:10 GMT -5
"Jenny, whats wrong?" Keith asked running over to where I was. I couldn't say anything I just pointed at the picture of myself on my suitcase with a note on it. I couldn't move so Keith went to look at it while the others came over.
Keith read the note outloud, "Running won't do you any good Miss Jenny! We will always be one step ahead of you, and we WILL get our revenge. Better keep your friends out of the way, someone might get hurt!"
"How did they know I was coming here?" I asked, shaking. Keith came and put his arm around me. "You guys have to get out of here. You heard what the note said. One of you guys could get hurt, and I would feel horrible if something like that happened."
"We're not going anywhere!" Keith said, looking at the other guys to agree. Of course they all did because their so sweet.
"George, you have a family. If something were to happen...." I couldn't finish. I felt tears stinging my eyes.
"Nothings going to happen, the police are going to catch these guys and we'll be safe and sound." George said.
Kristy looked just as scared as I did. I felt bad for putting her through this.
"Why don't we get back to where your staying." Ryan said, not wanting to say the location outloud.
We all grabbed our luggage and headed out to the car. It was about an hour drive to Keiths beach house where we would all be staying for a while.
The police knew where we would be so they could get there quickly. I was still worried, not about me, about my friends. I don't know what I'd do with out them!
*I know, I know it's really short. But it's better than nothing, right? Ok read and reply and tell me what you think!*
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Post by celticbear on Feb 5, 2011 21:44:13 GMT -5
CP! It was a great UPDATE! I'm so Glad the Lads are not backing down! You kind of used my suggestion. But without the scary part. UPDATE SOON,PLEASE!
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Post by CelticPrincess24 on Feb 5, 2011 22:36:48 GMT -5
Yes, I did use your suggestion.... I had an idea for it but yours was better. I kind of combined the two! So thank you!
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Post by laurenne on Feb 5, 2011 22:39:43 GMT -5
Glad that the guys didn't back down. Update soon, please.
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Feb 6, 2011 12:47:56 GMT -5
intense!!!! i thought it was a great update!!!!! now update sooooooooooon!!!! thank u!!!!
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Post by mala1152 on Feb 6, 2011 14:41:46 GMT -5
great update! cant wait to see where this goes!
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Post by CelticPrincess24 on Feb 7, 2011 17:18:00 GMT -5
Just to let you all know, I've been terribly busy with school. Sooooo I might not be updating to often. Sorry! I'll update every chance I get though! Just because you guys are so great and comment so much! I'm really happy you all read my story and like it!
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Post by angelenia100 on Feb 7, 2011 17:18:08 GMT -5
UPDATE!!!!!!!
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Post by CelticPrincess24 on Feb 8, 2011 16:38:08 GMT -5
After everyone got settled in at Keith's house, Kristy and I decided to make dinner. Since none of the guys had ever tasted a chicken fajita we made that.
"Kristy dinners ready, could you tell them." I asked her.
"Sure." She replied, and then she yelled, "Hey everyone, dinners ready so come and get it!"
"I said tell them not yell to them! Gee do you want me to lose my hearing!" I said, we both then started laughing. Then guys walked in.
"Mmm, it smells delicious in here." Damian commented sitting down at the table.
"It sure does, what is it?" Keith then asked.
"It's called," Kristy started, "Chicken fajitas. And if I do say so myself there absolutely delicious!"
After everyone ate dinner we all went to the living room to watch a show.
"That was a great dinner girls, I can't believe we've never had that before!" Paul said. Everyone agreed.
"Thank you!" I said smiling.
"So what are we gonna watch?" Damian asked.
"How about Jurassic Park 3." I suggested. Everyone agreed.
We started the movie and we all decided we wanted popcorn.
"I'll go make some!" Paul said getting up.
"NO!!!" We all shouted at the same time.
"Fine, you don't have to yell at me!" He said as he fake pouted. We all started laughing.
"I'll make it." I suggested.
"Someone should go with you just Incase." George said.
"I'll go." Keith said. So Keith and set out to make some popcorn.
"I'm so happy you guys are here with me and Kristy." I said practically sighing.
"We couldn't just leave you gals alone, now could we?" He said smiling.
"Thanks Keith!" I said. Then the power went out and we heard a scream coming from the living room. It was Kristy. Keith and I went running into the living room.
Then the lights went back on. I didn't see Kristy anywhere.
"What happened? And wheres Kristy?" I whispered, tears coming to my eyes.
Paul started explaining, "Kristy got up to see what was taking you two so long. When she got up and started walking the lights went out, we heard her scream and then it sounded like someone being dragged. We all jumped up but we couldn't find anything. Then the lights went back on, and Kristy was gone." He finished.
"They must have thought she was me!" I said as I started to cry. "This is all my fault! They were after me, not Kristy!"
"We're going to find her." Keith said. "Someone go call the police."
After George got off the phone with the police, he came back into the room. I was sitting on the couch with Keith and Ryan. Damian and Paul on the other couch.
"The police are on their way over now." He told us. We all just sat there waiting for them to arrive, eventually I got so tired from crying I fell asleep.
*OK, here it is. I hope you like it. I'll try to update as soon as I can! Please tell me what you think!*
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Post by mala1152 on Feb 8, 2011 16:45:33 GMT -5
and the plot thickens...! cant wait for the next update!
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Feb 8, 2011 18:08:27 GMT -5
OH. MY. GOD. that was amazing!!!!! u have to update this soooooon!!!!!
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Post by Deleted on Feb 8, 2011 19:47:59 GMT -5
Great update love the popcorn part please update
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Post by laurenne on Feb 8, 2011 21:20:52 GMT -5
Oh my gosh, they have to find her. Update real soon, please.
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