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Post by laurenne on Nov 22, 2010 20:27:44 GMT -5
It wasn't sucky, I liked it. Can't wait for more.
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Post by celticbear on Nov 22, 2010 21:19:09 GMT -5
Meg! this update was not suckish or crappy! I think it was just right, it caputered each of the lads personalities perfectly! Me thinks sometimes all that water from surfing gets stuck in Keith's head and he can't think straight! LOL! UPDATE SOON,PLEASE!
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Nov 24, 2010 8:20:53 GMT -5
*well, here it is, the truth about Mari’s and Damo’s break-up*
Chapter 10 Damian
The next day at rehearsals, the guys wouldn’t stop pestering me about Mari. “Guys, will you just SHUT UP!!!” I shouted, having enough. “Damo, we’re sorry. But, we really want to know how you and managed to loose a girl like Mari.” Neil said. All the guys looked at me with pleading eyes and I finally caved. “Do you guys really want to know?” I asked, sitting down on the bench sighing. “YES!!!” they all shouted. “Alright, but you’re asking for it…” And then my story began… “It was about three or four years ago. We had been going out for about a year, but we had known each other since the day we were born. Uhhh… I don’t remember it that well, because I somehow forced myself into not thinking about it and casually, I sorta of forgot. But, I guess I may as well tell you what I do remember. There was this girl, Jenna, and she really, really liked me. And so, one night at this party that my friend was throwing, she came onto me. I don’t really remember much after that except the fact that she kissed me right when Mari walked into the room. I remember how Mari refused to talk to me for at least three weeks. And when she finally did talk to me, she wouldn’t let me explain what had happened and she broke up with me. And yeah, that’s about it. Oh, except for the fact that we haven’t really spoken to each other since then. And yeah… So, are ya happy you finally know?” I told them. There was a silence, a loooong awkward silence. It ended when Paul whistled. “That’s rough man, that’s real rough.” He said. I shoot him a menacing look. “Hey, sorry, just trying to help you out.” He defended himself. “And what part of that will help me?” I ask. “Uhhh… the part were I…. uh, the part were I, yeah what I just said was no help.” Paul stammered. We all laugh. “So, whatcha gonna do about it?” Keith asked. “About what?” I asked back. “About the fact that you still love her.” He told me. “Nothing. I mean, she has a boyfriend. There’s nothing I can do about that, I mean, she really loves him. I actually think she loves him more than she loved me.” I say, my voice full of remorse and sorrow. The guys say nothing. Instead, they pat me on the back and go back to practicing their songs because Sharon was calling us.
*Yeah, I know this was not the best. It’s just I was having waaaay to much trouble trying to figure out how Damo and Mari split. But anyway, there’s the reason why. Hope it wasn’t too suck-ish. Thanks for all the reviews, I hope there are more to come!!!!*
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Nov 24, 2010 9:05:54 GMT -5
Chapter 11 Mari
“Damian, give it back!!!!” I yelled as I chased Damian all around my house. “NEVER!!!! I must read this!!!” He yelled, running outside, me right behind him. He ran into his house and slammed the door in my face before I could follow him inside. I shout in frustration, for he has my diary that is filled with EVERYTHING that goes on in my life, the good and the bad. And, knowing him, I’m not gonna get that book back until he reads every single darn page in that book. Knowing this is a lost battle, I slowly trudge back to my house to sulk and wait.
6 hours later…
My cell phone started to vibrate. I pick it up and look t it. One new message from Damian. It says. I look at the message
Come over my house ASAP.
Sighing, I get up off my bed and head over to his house. When I ring the doorbell, the door instantly opens. But, instead of seeing Damian’s face, I see his older sister’s Gemma. “MARI!!! Oh my GOSH!!!! It’s been way too long! How’s it been?” she shouted when she saw me. “Good, good. Congrats on the engagement.” I say. She beamed. “So, uh, Damian just texted me saying to come over. Soooo… where is he?” I ask. “Oh, he’s up in his room. You can go up if you like.” She said. I nooded, thanked her, and headed up to Damo’s room. “Hey, you called.” I say timidly as I opened the door. He says nothing. Instead, he motions for me to sit down next to him on the bed. “When were you going to tell me?” He asks angrily. “Tell you what?” I say, playing dumb because I know what he’s getting at. “Oh, don’t be stupid Mari, you know.” He says, his voice going up an octave. “No, I don’t know! And don’t call me stupid!” I shout back, this time, not playing dumb. Because, there are many things he could be talking about. “Fine, if you don’t know, I’ll rephrase my question so that it will make sense to you. When were you going to tell me that that loving boyfriend, who according to you is the best thing that’s ever happened to you, beats you senseless just about every night?!?” he shouts at me, fury written all over his face. Ohhhh… so that’s what he meant…
*So, how was this? Personally, I think this is one of my better chapters. Oh, and I just though that I’d give you the heads up that I’m almost finished. Sooo… bear with me these next few chapters. Please comment and review!!!!*
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Nov 24, 2010 9:06:52 GMT -5
oh, i should say, that last chapter took place a least a few days after Damo told the guys the truth about his and Mari's breakup.
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Post by laurenne on Nov 24, 2010 23:15:16 GMT -5
Loved the updates. It was hilarious when Damian stole her Damian. Stupid Sam, beating her. I don't like him.
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Post by laurenne on Nov 24, 2010 23:15:49 GMT -5
Oops, I mean, when Damian stole her Diary.
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Post by aliblast on Nov 25, 2010 18:59:18 GMT -5
so, what happens next??
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Nov 27, 2010 10:41:02 GMT -5
Chapter 12 Damian
“Well, are you going to answer me or not?” I shouted at her. I was trying to keep my cool, but this was just too much for me. My best friend’s boyfriend, who, according to her is the best person she knows, hurts her just because he wants to? Yeah, that doesn’t make him very nice in my book. “Uhhh… actually, I wasn’t gonna tell you.” She says timidly. “And why not? I thought… no, you know what, I didn’t think! Everything I thought you were, well I was wrong. I thought that when you came back, everything would go back to the way it was before, but no, it didn’t! And I thought you would at least tell me that something like this was happening to you.” I yell. There was a silence and all we did was stare at each other. Her eyes glaring into mine, my eyes staring at hers and the tears falling out of them. Oh my God, I made her cry… “Mari, I’m sooo sorry! I should not have yelled at you like that. I’m sooo sorry.” I plead with her. She says nothing except run out of my of my room and downstairs. I hear the front door slam shut and that was when I knew that I really screwed up. In frustration, I slam my bedroom door shut and chuck a random item at the door. It was my trophy that I won in my first singing competition. I walked over to pick it up. And, as I did, a little note fell out of the top. The note that Mari gave to me before she left. I re-opened it and read it;
Damian, I couldn’t get the courage to say this to you in person, so I guess I might as well say it to you through a letter. I’m sorry. There I said it. I’m sorry that I just walked out on you without even letting you explain. Turns out, you were right, I was wrong. My friend had overheard Jenna telling people what had happened and she immediately told me. I would’ve talked to you sooner, but I was too afraid and scared. Anyway, I hope that the day we see each other again, we’ll put that behind and be friends again, maybe more. I love you and I always shall- wait, that was too cheesy, I love you. Huh. Man, I suck at writing letters. Anyway, good luck with life and I hope I shall see you again. Love, Mari
So, all along she knew that I didn’t cheat on her? Yeah sorry, I’m reading this for the first time because when she gave it too me, I refused to read it. An she loves me? Yeah right. If she did, she would have never started to date that loser Sam. Sighing in frustration, I collapsed down on my bed and fell into a restless sleep.
*there, I know this was a little weird, but I jjst needed something for Damian to do instead of run after Mari because of what ‘s gonna happen next. See if you can guess….. please comment because I’m not writing more until you do…. Sooo laterz*
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Post by aliblast on Nov 27, 2010 12:30:19 GMT -5
I liked it, even though I am hating Sam. So, I commented... you can update now:)
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Post by laurenne on Nov 27, 2010 12:30:59 GMT -5
It wasn't that weird. I liked it. Update soon, please.
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Post by celticbear on Nov 27, 2010 23:51:23 GMT -5
Miss Meg. This UPDATE Spoke Volumes! I think I know what is going to happen next! And god help Sam if he should show up in Ireland because when Damo and the Lads get done with him there will be nothing left of him! UPDATE SOON! PLEASE!
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Nov 28, 2010 15:25:15 GMT -5
Chapter 13 Mari
I ran all the way back to my place, tears streaming down my face. How could Damian yell at me like that? If anything, he should be trying to comfort me for all the crap I’ve been going through. I run up the front porch stairs to my house and I fling the front door open. “MOM! I’m home!” I shout. “In here honey!” her voice calls out from the kitchen. I walk towards the kitchen and when I enter, I froze. “Mari dear, you didn’t tell me that you have such a lovely boyfriend back in the states.” My mom says plainly, obviously not seeing TERROR or FEAR written all over my face. “Oh, uh, must’ve slipped my mind, sorry. Uh, hey Sam. I didn’t expect you to be here.” I say timidly. “Well, after our last phone call, I just thought that I should come out here and apologize to you and to see if you were all right.” He says, lying right through his teeth. My mother, I swear to God I may kill her, starts swooning and going all lovey-dovey on me. “Oh, aren’t you the sweetest little thing. Here, I’ll leave you two alone for awhile so you can talk. Just holler if ya need anythin’.” My mom says as she walks out of the kitchen and upstairs. “Nice place your mom’s got.” Sam says, starting to look around. I quickly snatch out my phone and take this time to send a quick text to Damian while Sam is distracted. Damian I’m sorry, please come over ASAP. HURRY
Was what it said.
“So, why are you here?” I ask again, trying to stall time. He turns and glares at me. “I am here to teach you a little lesson on why you should never speak to me that way again.” He says darkly. I knew it; he didn’t want to apologize to me at all. Instead, he’s gonna do the exact opposite. “Sam, please no! I’m sorry, I really am just don’t!” I say trailing off as he takes numerous steps towards me. He doesn’t say anything. Instead, he laughs and slaps me across the face, the skull ring that he always wears drawing blood. He does this repeatedly and all I can think is that Damian will be here soon. He never lets me down… right?
*Yeah yeah I know this was a little dark and dpressing, but hey, whats gotta happen, gotta happen. Please comment and review!!!!*
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Post by laurenne on Nov 28, 2010 19:08:15 GMT -5
Stupid Sam. Damian had better arrive soon.
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Post by celticbear on Nov 28, 2010 21:15:36 GMT -5
I agree with Laurenne! Damo better arrive soon and it would be nice if the rest of the Lads where right behind him! CT will teach Sam a lesson he will never forget! So Miss Meg get with it and write that Rescue update! UPDATE SOON! PLEASE! DAMO AND THE LADS TO THE RESCUE!
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