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Post by CelticPrincess24 on Jan 14, 2011 15:10:00 GMT -5
I love this! Update again when you can!
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Post by orinocoflow on Jan 14, 2011 19:45:27 GMT -5
Paul! it's not polite to ask a woman her age! is Paul's friend a sibling of her mother? O.o what is Paul's secret? what is he hiding? what is SHE hiding? Love it! UPDATE SOON!
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Post by celticbear on Jan 14, 2011 21:25:03 GMT -5
WoW! This is getting better and better! Paul you better say yes and let Mia stay! And I agree with the others! Where were your Manners! A gentleman never ask's as a first question her age! Shame on you! UPDATE SOON! PLEASE!
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Post by angelenia100 on Jan 18, 2011 13:01:54 GMT -5
I love it!!!!!!!!!! You have to update!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Myna Chan on Jan 18, 2011 13:10:10 GMT -5
*waves* Keep up the Good work!! Can't wait for more!
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Post by orinocoflow on Jan 18, 2011 18:06:32 GMT -5
udpate soon!!!
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Post by celticgirl91 on Jan 18, 2011 21:33:59 GMT -5
Paul blinked, not sure he heard right. “You want to stay? Here?” “Please”, Mia said, smiling a bit. “I know, I know, it’s a horribly rude thing to ask. I’m intruding on your home and your life, and I’m sorry. But I KNOW that those men are still looking for me, and I can’t let them find me.” Paul was silent for a minute. She wanted to live with him?? For a couple of weeks… she barely even knew him. He barely knew her! What if she was lying? What if she was really working with those men and only wanted to rob him? The way she was acting, it seemed as if this was more than just some random men mugging an innocent girl. “Look… Mia. You barely know me. I mean, I understand that last night you were scared and out of it and had no clue what was going on, but now… I mean, are you sure these guys are even after you?” Mia stared down at the table for a second, than looked up. “They were after me before.” “For more than just the necklace,” Paul stated. “In a way…”, Mia hedged. “Look, I’m really sorry about all this, but it’s better if you don’t know the details.” Paul thought again. She seemed as if she really did need his help… “I know you didn’t ask for any of this”, Mia said softly. “You’re probably wishing you had just left me there” “No, never,” and as Paul said the words, he knew that they were true. He couldn’t have left her small, wet body there to those men. The seconds ticking on the clock were the only sounds for a moment. “You’re not going to rob me?”, he clarified. Mia laughed. “No, I won’t.” “And you’re not suspicious of me at all?”, Paul asked. “I’m a stranger. You know nothing about me. What if I want to hurt you?” Mia leaned toward him. “You may be a stranger, but I know that you’re a good man. You saved a poor girl and brought her to your home.” Paul leaned forward as well. “That doesn’t mean that I’m good.” “Okay then, are you intending to hurt me in any way?” “No.” Mia smiled. “See?” “I could be lying” “Are you?” “No” “I didn’t think so” “I could be lying about lying” Mia let out a huff of air and sat back in her chair. “Paul, if you don’t want me to stay, I won’t. I’ll figure something out” “No, no, that’s not what I’m saying,” Paul shook his head. “It’s just that you’re being too trusting. In my line of work, being too trusting of the wrong people could get you killed.” Mia didn’t reply. “Mia…”, Paul tried again. “I believe you. And I don’t want you getting hurt. Will you stay here?” “Yes. Thank you”, was the whispered reply. “I won’t be a burden, I promise. I could help you. Maybe tidy the place up a bit. Then you won’t have to hire a maid.” Paul laughed. “Mia, you don’t have to clean” “Paul. It’s the least you can do, really. Actually, I should probably get started now before your friend gets here.” “Nah,” Paul waved his hand at her and combed the other through his hair. “George has been here before, he doesn’t mind.” Then Paul realized something. One of his best mates was going to come and find a young woman in the apartment. Now, Paul wouldn’t call himself a workaholic, but he HAD been pretty busy these past couple years. Too busy for a girl. This was going to raise some questions.
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Post by orinocoflow on Jan 18, 2011 22:33:50 GMT -5
haha, love the "I could be lying about lying" line.
can't wait to see how Paul explains her presence! now, update!!!
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Post by celticbear on Jan 18, 2011 22:36:10 GMT -5
Me Like this update very much! Why do I get the feeling Paul is back in the Spy-game again! Becasue a long time ago there was story where somebody had Paul working for Irish inteligience before joining CT! CG! UPDATE SOON! PLEASE!
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Post by orinocoflow on Jan 19, 2011 0:43:03 GMT -5
yeah. I think RKIS wrote that, but dont remember the title, just the plot. amazing how many spy stories began ever since he first wore that awesome black coat, haha.
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Post by CelticPrincess24 on Jan 19, 2011 18:25:48 GMT -5
I love this story... I can't wait for the next update!
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Post by angelenia100 on Jan 20, 2011 12:24:44 GMT -5
I love it!! New all we need is an update
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Post by CelticPrincess24 on Jan 24, 2011 17:41:04 GMT -5
Please update soon!
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Post by orinocoflow on Jan 24, 2011 19:14:14 GMT -5
UPDATE SOON!!!
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Post by oceangirl1 on Jan 24, 2011 21:21:17 GMT -5
You actually updated!!!!! Yay!!!! Please more soon!!!!! Can't wait
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