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Post by WARNING-ObsessedFangirl on Mar 3, 2010 22:42:00 GMT -5
My first story/post of nox. Hope ya guys like it -------------------------------------------- Unraveling By Baakthatsthenoiseachickenmakes (My awesome author name Prologue Emerald pulled the ribbon out of her hair, letting her dark auburn hair fall down her back in wavy strands. She ran her fingers thorough her hair with a sigh, plopping onto her bed. Being royalty wasn't all it was cracked up to be. It seriously sucked donkey behind. A loud pounding echoed around Emerald's near empty bedroom, startling her. She hopped up, walking over to answer the frantic knocking on her bedroom door, the source of the insistent pounding. She almost yelled something like "Hold on, I'm coming you insistent, impatience bimbo!" But caught herself. People of this realm didn't speak like that. She opened the door, putting on a fake smile. Her signature fake smile would satisfy any of the royal servants or townspeople, whoever may be behind the door. "Wipe that fake smile of your face, Emie." Ah, the only person in this ridiculous place that understood Emerald. Her best friend, Marie. Last name unknown. Close family friend of the royal family and the royal seamstress. "Hey, Marie. You're here for a visit.... why?" Emerald opened the door wider, allowing Marie to step past her. Marie settled into a dark green chair that sat in the corner of the room, by the window. Emerald closed the door, before settling down onto her bed. "I'm here because we have a problem," Marie explained looking out the window. "What kind of problem?" Emerald asked, beginning to get slightly worried. Marie wasn't one to worry over petty things; She worried only if the problem truly was serious. "The bad kind." "Marie." A warning tinted my voices. She was avoiding the question, and I was about to go all crazy, psycho-path on her. "Fine. Another innocent kid has been charged with witch-craft." I gasped, jumping up from the bed. "Witch-craft? The same as the other cases?" This couldn't be happening. "Yes," Marie finally tore her eyes away from the window. "A kid just fell from this portal in the sky, landed right in the middle of town square, wearing a pair of skinny jeans and a leather jacket."
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Post by WARNING-ObsessedFangirl on Mar 4, 2010 15:39:17 GMT -5
Flipper... I just noticed how much I switch from third to first POV... Haha, gotta fix that. I'll try and write more soon!! I'm glad people like it
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Post by WARNING-ObsessedFangirl on Mar 4, 2010 22:42:38 GMT -5
Not my best work, but what ev Hope ya all like it. It's turning very cliched, haha. ---------------------------------- Unraveling By Baak Another one... Emerald thought, as Marie and her walked to town square. The town had the new 'witch' held up in the stocks. The girls were hoping to save this one before the town got what they wished. The last poor guy to be charged with witchcraft (much the same as this) was now being held in the towns dungeon. Emerald and Marie managed to save the guy from execution, but the town still wanted the man imprisoned. The girls went down to the dungeons regularly to visit the guy. He was around 23 with blond hair and talked with an accent. The guy was fun to be around, and, boy, was that ever an understatement. He was that type of guy you just couldn't help but love. Handsome, with an awesome attitude. Musically oriented to, which was a big thing in the town. Unless you knew you're music, how to sew, or how to cook, you were a nobody. He had beautiful eyes too. Marie liked that about him. As Emerald and Marie walked down the streets, headed to the town square, many of the townspeople would attempt to offer something to Emerald, or bow to her as she walked by. She was the strange one in the royal family; the only one who disliked all the attention you recieved as royalty. She royally hated being royal (A/N: See what I did there?? She didn't belong in the role, let alone this... place. Her and Marie didn't belong here, yet, here they were, stuck in a life that wasn't theirs. But more on that later. On with the story. They reached the town square, and the crowd standing around the stocks dispersed, letting the royal princess and seamstress move to the front. There the poor kid was, frightened out of his wits. They hadn't gotten him into the stocks yet, but his hands and feets were tied, and his mouth gagged. He looked at the two girls with a set of striking blue eyes filled with terror. That look of terror hurt Emerald. Being royalty wasn't always that bad, but when it came to dealing punishments, it took all of Emerald's will to give the punishment. And this poor kid was innocent. He deserved no punishment, he had no idea what he was doing here. With a sigh, Emerald step forward. "Under the name of Emerald Abigail Johnson, one of the royal family, princess and future queen of Ferrington, I command you to let this boy go. He can come with me back to the castle, and I'll deal with his punishment from there." The towns people seemed to think about it for a moment, most of them looking as if they wanted to argue. The man standing beside the boy, holding onto the back of his jacket (as if the poor kid could run away), spoke up. "Take the heathen, Miss Johnson," The man sent a purposeful look at the group of people. "For we do not argue with royalty." The towns people reluctantly nodded, and the man pushed the boy in those skinny jeans and leather jacket towards Emerald. She grabbed the boys shoulder and began to steer him back to the castle.
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Post by WARNING-ObsessedFangirl on Mar 15, 2010 10:38:01 GMT -5
It is incredibly short, and I apologize. Missed school today, and I have two essays to write. Woo. I'll try my best to update more often!! Love ya guys!! Reviewers make my day X) ----------------------------- Unraveling By Baak "It's boring down here... I want my guitar, or surfboard," The guy muttered to himself. The guard standing at the entrance to the dungeons sent the guy a concerned look. The blond man was always speaking, as if to someone, but there was no one else down in the dungeun. A couple weeks ago, the guard came to the conclusion that this fair haired man was simply a loon. The guard moved back to his position, as he heard foot steps thundering (A/N: Haha, thunder..) down the staircase. Miss Abigail Johnson appeared, dragging some boy in strange clothes along with her. "You are relieved of your responsibility, for now. Begone, I don't wish to see you," Abigail told the guard. The poor confused guard fiercely nodded. "Yes, your majesty. Of course, you majesty. Anything you want." He started up the stairs. "The princess seems bothered by something. I wonder what is wrong-" The guard stopped in his tracks. He had been thinking out loud. That blond man's maddness must be contagious!! The guard sprinted up the rest of the steps, and ran to the servants quarters.
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Post by WARNING-ObsessedFangirl on Jul 26, 2010 14:13:41 GMT -5
Finally, an update. It really sucks and is short. So sorry, I've got serious writer's block. ----------------- With the guard gone, Emerald let go of the young boy in the leather jacket. "Marie, keep an eye on the stairs please." Marie nodded to her friend and backed up the stairs, stopping at the top of the stair case. Emerald turned back to the the boy in the jacket. "Wait..." The blond man already down in the dungeon had stuck his head out of his cell, interrupting Emerald. "Damian, is that you?" The man asked. "Keith! What in the world are you doing here? What's going on?" Damian turned back to Emerald. "What's going on?" He repeated. Emerald put one finger to her lips, telling the boys to quiet down. "Time travel," She muttered. "It sounds crazy, I know, that's what I said, and look where I am now. I don't have the time right now to completely explain, but I need you two to cooperate. Just stay down here and stay quiet." Emerald walked over to Keith's cell, opening the door. "Damian, I need you to stay down here." "In the dungeons?" He asked, confused and slightly defensive. "It's the only place your safe! I promise to help you, but I need a plan, which I don't have right now. I'll get you food, clothes, whatever you need." "Damian, just go along with it," Keith told him, waving him into the cell with one of his hands. "Come on." Damian seemed suspicious, but played along, walking into the cell. Emerald closed the door, and started to back up. "I'll get us home, I promise." And with that she turned and ran up the stairwell. "Well, she's kinda odd," Damian mumbled, settling down on the one small bench inside the cell. "A little," Keith agreed. "But it's thanks to her that we're alive." Keith plopped down on the floor, laying down with his hands behind his head. "My advice is to just play along, as if it's just one big role play. Oh, yeah, and act like your totally bonkers, it keep the guards away."
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Post by saerphe on Jul 26, 2010 14:40:59 GMT -5
Bweehee! Yay! I loved it, so funny! 'Specially Keith's last line there. X3
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Post by pfieffer on Jul 26, 2010 16:30:04 GMT -5
I love the new post. So cute. Keith's last line is the best thing ever.
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Post by swimgurl96 on Jul 29, 2010 14:40:56 GMT -5
hee hee this is sooo cute!! Please update soon
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Post by celticbear on Aug 3, 2010 0:41:45 GMT -5
Okay "B" I so love this story. I agree with Pfieffer Keith's last line is a classic! Update soon.
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Post by CelticPrincess24 on Feb 25, 2011 19:31:55 GMT -5
Please update soon!
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Post by musicgirl on Jun 4, 2011 11:18:18 GMT -5
i like it!!! i love keith's last line!! please update??
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Post by musicgirl on Jun 4, 2011 11:23:46 GMT -5
i like it!!! i love keith's last line!! please update??
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Post by celticthunder1510 on Jun 4, 2011 12:02:12 GMT -5
Come on that is funny. UPDATE!
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Post by HburgEagle44 on Jun 4, 2011 14:25:24 GMT -5
oh wow lol I love it! You should update soon!
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Post by DaughterofOphelia on Jun 14, 2011 17:21:41 GMT -5
Update Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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