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Post by onyxfyrefly on Mar 4, 2013 15:47:59 GMT -5
How do you do it? It was perfect...absolutely every second of it was perfect.
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Post by fallingn2ct on Mar 4, 2013 15:52:10 GMT -5
Thank you <3 <3 <3 every comment means more to me than anyone knows, they all keep me going.
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Post by IrishGal on Mar 4, 2013 16:54:44 GMT -5
I loved this story you should do a sequel!
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Post by celticbear on Mar 4, 2013 19:06:37 GMT -5
FALL! You have done it again! Loved the ending! Having Meri and Colm get married on December 31st was Perfect! The Fire in the fireplace and the Champaign was the perfect romantic touch! Again Well Done! Looking forward to your next story!
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Post by fallingn2ct on Mar 5, 2013 10:16:27 GMT -5
*****Epilogue**************
*************2 Years Later***************
The baby slept soundly in his father's arms, the motion of the bus and the rocking from his father had subdued his crying. Colm laid on the couch, placing the baby on his chest an arm protectively holding him. William Colm Keegan had joined the world barely two months before the new fall tour was to start. The small family would share a bus with George, he knew what it was to have a baby after all.
"Look at you two", Meredith smiled as she came into the back area.
"Thought I would let you sleep", he yawned.
"Seems like you need to sleep", she laughed,"Did it take him long to go back to sleep?"
"No", he shook his head as he rubbed his son's back,"A bottle, diaper change, and my expert skills, he was out."
"Expert skills? At least Will appreciates your efforts",she grinned,"I can take him if you want to go back to bed."
"No", he said as as she sat down. He moved so his head rested against her leg,"I think this is just fine."
"Me too", she kissed his forehead and placed a hand over his that rested on their son's back. Meredith knew there was a silent contentment she felt. Over the last few years with Colm she had never once known fear or pain, they had created a child and now here he was with them. She knew they would both always be taken care of and that he would never know the darkness that she had known for so long. She felt Colm's breathing begin to even out and allowed her own eyes to close, this was her family, her world, and all the love she had ever known was wrapped up with the two men in her life.
**********THE END******************
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Post by onyxfyrefly on Mar 5, 2013 10:54:18 GMT -5
Awwwww...
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Post by IrishGal on Mar 6, 2013 1:06:10 GMT -5
Awwwwwwwwwwww cute
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Post by celticbear on Mar 6, 2013 19:01:39 GMT -5
Awe! A little Keegan came into the world! Great Epilogue! Good choice to have the new family share a bus with George!
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Post by celticsweetheart on Mar 7, 2013 0:16:53 GMT -5
Awe such a lovely ending, I love the idea of an Irish wedding on New Years Eve, that's my plan for Thunderous Applause on Facebook, you see its kinda got some steamy elements that are a bit too hot for this site but you are an excellent writer
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Post by fallingn2ct on Mar 7, 2013 7:48:55 GMT -5
Awe such a lovely ending, I love the idea of an Irish wedding on New Years Eve, that's my plan for Thunderous Applause on Facebook, you see its kinda got some steamy elements that are a bit too hot for this site but you are an excellent writer I requested to join the FB group, it showed up as private. I haven't been approved yet. Thank you!!!
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Post by IrishGal on Mar 7, 2013 11:11:34 GMT -5
Fall! I'll add you to the group when I get home from school this afternoon!!
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Mar 8, 2013 15:18:26 GMT -5
best ending! loved this! great job...as always
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Post by HburgEagle44 on Mar 8, 2013 17:57:24 GMT -5
Beautiful. Simply beautiful.
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Post by glow on May 2, 2014 23:38:22 GMT -5
I love this story! I read until the last chapter the first time read it and just found the last bit.
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