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Post by meg_cahill21 on Jan 7, 2013 13:57:21 GMT -5
colm colm colm....love that guy...lol update soon!
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Post by HburgEagle44 on Jan 8, 2013 1:15:48 GMT -5
I'm afraid I stole a pun... lol. Sorry. Anyway, the final update. I'm pretty sad, actually. This is one of my favorite stories. Please tell me what you think; I really, really appreciate the reviews! ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Emmet shut the door and jumped when his phone buzzed. Pulling it out, he glanced at the screen and smiled. Phoebe had said, “Thanks, Emmet. Took you long enough, but it was worth it!”
“Would you have even gone with me a couple of weeks ago?” he asked.
“Nope. But it’s a nice thought, right?”
Emmet laughed and went to actually clean his house, since he hadn’t actually done it before. He was startled, however, by another text. It was from Colm.
“Hey, mate, today is the perfect day to ask. Just look at that rare sunshine!”
“Phoebe and I went to breakfast together today. Colm down.”
Colm glanced at his phone, surprised at how quickly Emmet answered. He could take anywhere from 0.02 seconds to 3 days to answer, true, but it was still different for 0.02 to be the norm. “That’s an awful pun!” he answered. On second thought, he asked, “Wait, what? Really? I’m so proud!”
His phone buzzed three hours later. “Thank you, I think.”
“There’s my Emmet,” Colm said to himself before putting his phone down. He was getting ready to go to Starbucks with Mark. It was a tradition for them, and traditions had to be upheld. But he was surprised when he got another text from Emmet.
“How are you and Becca? Another date planned anytime soon?”
Colm smiled slightly. “Maybe. Who cares?” Before he sent it, though, he stopped and erased. “Hope so. See you later. Got a hot date right now ;)”
Emmet smiled. “Okay. Bye. Have fun with… Mark, probably, am I right?”
“Uncanny.”
Laughing, Emmet put his phone away and went to go eat lunch. Colm is right, he thought with surprise. It is a wonderful day. Glancing out the window, he smiled.
There was a rainbow.
God’s in his heaven. All’s right with the world.
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Post by celticsweetheart on Jan 8, 2013 20:14:55 GMT -5
Loved it.. Good that you found a use to Colm down. I love the way you write its so easy to read. My story is a bit long but than again so is trying to get Neil. Emmet is a doll and Colm is so cute. This is one awesome story.. Loved the humor as well especially at the beginning, I almost fell out of my chair a couple times reading it. Love the Piano shop.
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Post by celticbear on Jan 8, 2013 22:10:51 GMT -5
Funny ending to a great story! And in my imagination Emmet is with Phoebe and Rebecca realized Colm was the perfect guy for her! And Keith approved it!
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Jan 11, 2013 9:56:34 GMT -5
love this soo much! update soon!
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Post by celticsweetheart on Feb 28, 2013 0:54:06 GMT -5
When are you gonna update, I need more I love stories about Emmet and this is such a good one.
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Post by HburgEagle44 on Mar 1, 2013 0:20:59 GMT -5
I said this was the final update... I might consider updating again but right now I'm just too busy to write and besides, I just don't have ideas... hmm... anyone? inbox me if you have an idea. can't promise I'll take it though hahaha. cuz I'm lame. ;D
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