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Post by HburgEagle44 on Feb 20, 2012 19:45:28 GMT -5
Ohhhh no... Keith can't die! D: I know, he won't, but you know. Just being a responsive reader. haha! Welcome to Nox, Allie! I like the beginning of this story, and the backstory is good, too! Update?
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Post by onyxfyrefly on Feb 20, 2012 19:48:12 GMT -5
Glad to see I'm not the only 'Once Upon a Time' fan around here! I love the beginning and can't wait to see what happens to poor Keith!
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Post by HburgEagle44 on Feb 20, 2012 21:57:04 GMT -5
Aw, Keith and Rebecca are cute siblings Mysterious lady.. His Siren? hahahaha update!! I have school tomorrow too... I love president's day and all, but it sucks having the day after
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Post by celticbear on Feb 20, 2012 22:57:42 GMT -5
Hello Allie! Welcome to Nox! LOVE THIS STORY! OF COURSE I WOULD LOVE IT SINCE MY KEITH IS THE MAIN CHARACHTER! YES LIKE YOU ALLIE KEITH IS MY FAV AND IT WAS HIS SONG THE *ISLAND* THAT GOT ME HOOKED! You have Keith's and Becca's relationship down perfectly! Looking forward to each and every update!
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Feb 21, 2012 15:39:08 GMT -5
welcome to the Nox!!! loved this story!!! cant wait for more!!!
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Post by celticbear on Feb 25, 2012 21:35:58 GMT -5
Allie! I have to give praise to Keith's siren for giving his three friends the scare they deserved! Keith knew they had one to many and should not be out surfing! And so did his Siren! THIS UPDATE WAS A HOOT TO READ! LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT UPDATE!
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Post by HburgEagle44 on Feb 26, 2012 2:48:08 GMT -5
Oh wow, those poor guys. Oh wait... hahaha... well, update soon! i wanna know about keith's siren!
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Post by onyxfyrefly on Feb 26, 2012 9:34:22 GMT -5
I love this story! I'm a total mythology nerd and was hooked at the title!
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Post by celticbear on Feb 26, 2012 21:36:51 GMT -5
Allie! This update was great! I do believe the woman Keith and this brief encounter with was his siren! But why was she upset with the mark on Keith's hand? Love how Keith avoided answering his sisters questions by stuffing his face with Pancakes! THAT IS SO KEITH! LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT UPDATE!
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Post by HburgEagle44 on Feb 27, 2012 19:09:34 GMT -5
Wow, that was intense!!! Wonder what's up, but I guess I'll just have to wait ; ) Update soon!!!
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Post by onyxfyrefly on Feb 27, 2012 20:55:48 GMT -5
Have I mentioned that I love this story? I can't wait until Keith meets his siren!
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Post by celticbear on Mar 4, 2012 21:07:08 GMT -5
Aella is Keith's siren! And of course she would be from the land of the Little Mermaid! Alie Looking forward to the next chapter!
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Post by onyxfyrefly on Mar 4, 2012 21:31:59 GMT -5
That was so good! I love that Keith noticed her "tattoo"! Can't wait to see what happens next!
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Post by onyxfyrefly on Mar 11, 2012 15:40:18 GMT -5
The tattoo disappeared? What? Please update! I love this!
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Post by celticbear on Mar 11, 2012 20:35:46 GMT -5
Ok Alli! What's up with Adella's attitude towards Keith! and why did the tattoo's vanish! KEITH DOES NOT DESERVE THE TREATMENT HE'S GETTING FROM ADELLA!
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