Loppiainen
Wicked Fan
A black sheep amongst the white. A boy amongst the girls.
Posts: 58
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Ghost
Dec 9, 2011 0:19:58 GMT -5
Post by Loppiainen on Dec 9, 2011 0:19:58 GMT -5
There is so much angst in this. I mean. I feel compelled to apologize for this fic, purely because writing it made me utterly depressed. This is the first time in my life that I've actually cried while writing something. But the plot bunny wouldn't go away. ;_; But really, if you've had any particularly bad experiences with deaths in the family, I would advise you not to read this. If you think you can handle it, then okay. Go for it, I suppose. But I'm so so sorry if this gets you too down. Anyway... Yeah. Just another bizarre alternate-universe fic from me... ---------- EDIT:Due to my... Extreme guilt over posting this, I've moved the first part of this fic over to Tumblr, just so I can be sure that no one will read it unless they're absolutely sure they want to. I don't know if this is necessary or not, but it definitely makes me feel a lot better about it. Here you go!
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Ghost
Dec 9, 2011 0:33:32 GMT -5
Post by CelticCailín on Dec 9, 2011 0:33:32 GMT -5
Makes me think of my brother.. RIP Tristan McCann... I liked the drama in this kind of, it was interesting, Lopp. Your a good writer.
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Loppiainen
Wicked Fan
A black sheep amongst the white. A boy amongst the girls.
Posts: 58
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Ghost
Dec 9, 2011 0:39:56 GMT -5
Post by Loppiainen on Dec 9, 2011 0:39:56 GMT -5
I'm so sorry if it brought back any bad memories, dear. : (
But thank you very much, and if it's any consolation, there's another part of this in the works, and it's much happier. : )
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Dec 9, 2011 0:45:19 GMT -5
Post by CelticCailín on Dec 9, 2011 0:45:19 GMT -5
It's alright, Lopp it was years ago.. Anyway, I'm glad there is a happier version, I don't like imagining anybody dead, 'specially those who are very much alive an' all, ya know? Can't wait to read the happier one!
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Loppiainen
Wicked Fan
A black sheep amongst the white. A boy amongst the girls.
Posts: 58
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Ghost
Dec 9, 2011 0:51:52 GMT -5
Post by Loppiainen on Dec 9, 2011 0:51:52 GMT -5
I know exactly what you mean. : )
Anywho, here's the happier continuation! It's quick, but hopefully it'll make you smile.
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Years later, Neil met her.
Baby Kelly.
She only looked to be around ten at the time. She was small, with dark hair and the brightest eyes Neil had ever seen. She was also the only other ghost he'd ever met.
"Hello," She'd greeted him. "You're clear, like me. Are you a ghost?"
"I am," Neil said.
"That's nice," She smiled. "I didn't think there were others. I've only just left my grave. I thought there would be more. I mean, it's a cemetery."
"I thought the same thing when I first set foot up here," Neil smiled back. "You get used to the quiet after a while, though."
"I hope so," She said. "Anyway, what's your name?"
"Neil," he replied. "You?"
She paused, then frowned. "I haven't got one, really."
"Then we should find you one," Neil said.
And so, Neil took her for a walk around the cemetery, explaining to her that he had gotten his own name from a headstone, and that she could do the same.
She scanned several headstones before finally stopping at one in a far-off corner.
"This one," She pointed at the stone. "It's perfect."
Neil patted her on the head.
"Well then," He said. "Welcome to the world, Leanne Kelly."
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Ghost
Dec 9, 2011 1:25:01 GMT -5
Post by CelticCailín on Dec 9, 2011 1:25:01 GMT -5
It did make me smile! I liked that one much better! Nice job. Leanne is a nice name: I like it.
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Dec 9, 2011 10:21:04 GMT -5
Post by CelticPrincess24 on Dec 9, 2011 10:21:04 GMT -5
The first update made me cry. It reminded me of when my Mom lost a baby... It was a good update.. So sad though... I also liked the second update. Like canadianctgirl said, you're a very good writer.
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Ghost
Dec 9, 2011 14:15:10 GMT -5
Post by HburgEagle44 on Dec 9, 2011 14:15:10 GMT -5
Wow, that was an amazing update...both of them were...made me cry, but I've been crying at everything recently.. anyway. You are a beautiful writer. Please write more?
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