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Post by angelenia100 on Apr 27, 2011 10:32:42 GMT -5
GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Apr 30, 2011 10:29:31 GMT -5
intense!!!!!!!! woah!!!!! sooo glad they escaped!!!! now UPDATE SOON so i can find out what happens!!!!!
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Post by CelticPrincess24 on Jun 10, 2011 11:00:35 GMT -5
*** This is the last update before the epilogue! I hope you guys liked it! And thank you mala for helping me finish it! ***
I woke to a sharp pain in my side and jumped up. Someone put there hand on my shoulder to hold me down. “Sorry, I was just seeing if you had more than one broken rib. It appears you do,” The doctor said, who I recognized as doc. Masters. I held my side and tears started to sting my eyes as I thought of Keith and Damian. “Jenny, are you OK?” Doctor Masters asked. “Yeah, just need to get Keith and Damian back,” I said, getting up only to held back down by him. “You’re not going anywhere with two broken ribs. It’s to dangerous right now,” He said, sternly. “Ryan!” I called out, hoping one of them would come. Kristy wasn’t in here chair. “Jenny, what’s wrong?” He asked, wrapping me in his arms. “We have to go get Keith and Damian. They could be hurt or worse,” I cried out, unwanted tears started making a trail down my cheeks. “The cops are on their way. We had to wait for them so they could help us,” He said. “Doctor Masters said I couldn’t go with,” I said, still crying. “You can come, don’t worry. You’ll be safe with all the police that’ll be accompanying us,” He said, the doctor nodded. The police arrived and we got ready to go. All we could do was hope and pray for the best.
~*~*~*~ Keith and Damian’s POV ~*~*~*~
“Do you think they got back ok?” Damian asked. “I sure hope so. If they didn’t, we would know about by now,” Keith said, as the they heard footsteps approaching. Keith and Damian both held there breaths as the locks started to clink and the door handle turned. Four men walked in and didn’t look happy when they didn’t see the girls in there “Where are those little wretches?!” Shouted one of them, grabbing Damian by the shirt and holding him close to his face. “I don’t know,” He replied, not going to tell him anything. He threw Damian back on the floor and went to Keith this time. “If you ever want to see him again you’ll tell me where that girl went!” He said, in a menacing voice. “They’re gone by now. You’re too late to stop them,” Keith said, bravely. The man hit him in the stomach. Sending Keith breathlessly to the floor. Damian got up and ran at the man and started hitting him. The others came and grabbed Damian off of him and held him by both arms for the to be beat him up. Damian struggled to no avail. All he could do was prepare for the pain. Keith got up just in time to grab the man before he started beating Damian. “Put your hands in the air, now!” An officer yelled breaking the door down, 6 policemen ran and in to get them out. “You two come with me. We can take them in,” one of the officers said, leading them outside. They got outside and were met with tearful eyes of their band members and Kristy and Jenny. They all ran to meet them. Kristy jumped into Damian’s arms while Keith gently hugged Jenny. “I was so worried about you,” He whispered in her ear. Tears started to fall from her eyes. “I was more worried. Worried about what they would do to you once they found out we were gone,” She said, hugging tighter. “Ah, we handled it,” He said, laughing nervously. As they let go to say hi to the others. Jenny went and hugged Damian. “Damian, I’m so glad your ok,” she said, hugging him. “I’m glad your ok, I was worried about ya,” He said. “I’m sorry that I got you into that awfulness,” I said, crying. Mostly happy tears though. “It’s not your fault Jenny, beside, we made it out ok,” he said, giving her one last squeeze before letting her go. "Guys, the paramedics wanna take you to the hospital and check you out just incase. We'll take the girls home and come and get you in a while, OK?" Ryan said, putting his arm around Jenny while Paul held on to Kristy. "Ok, we'll see you then," Keith said, coming and giving Jenny a kiss on the cheek.
The end
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Post by celticthunder1510 on Jun 10, 2011 12:30:09 GMT -5
That was AWESOME! I loved it and Keith got to be a hero! That was amazing!
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Post by GalwayGirl on Jun 10, 2011 13:28:05 GMT -5
I LOVED IT!! So glad that the police were able to get there when they did!!! I can't wait to see how it ends!!! This was a great story!! Update again soon!!
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Post by DaughterofOphelia on Jun 10, 2011 13:58:59 GMT -5
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!
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Post by HburgEagle44 on Jun 10, 2011 14:15:33 GMT -5
Oh that was an AMAZING story!!!! But, sadly, I want more!! Are there any more updates? If so, UPDATE!
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Post by celticbear on Jun 10, 2011 20:49:23 GMT -5
CP! Great Ending! Glad Keith got to play the Hero and you would have to write this last chapter before the Epilouge where Keith is the Hero on his B-day! EPILOUGE! PLEASE!
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Post by laurenne on Jun 11, 2011 21:34:01 GMT -5
I loved it.
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Post by !!DerryChick!! on Jun 11, 2011 22:55:19 GMT -5
Yehoo!! Bravo!!!!
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Post by angelenia100 on Jun 14, 2011 18:36:53 GMT -5
You need to do a sequil!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Jun 15, 2011 16:43:17 GMT -5
hahaha... they got in a fight.... hahahaha.... write the epilogue ASAP!!!!! and Angel's write, u need to do a sequel!!!!
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