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Post by lylychan1029 on Sept 4, 2011 10:12:17 GMT -5
so I'm sure you're all as sad as I am that Damians left CT This is so hard writing !! lol ~Chapter 12~ LAUREN'S POV Dear Diary, Orientation was a blast...I met a nice guy *blush blush* his name is Cameron and he knows how to play the guitar and can sing amazingly. His voice it almost...howled...when he sang. I was forced to perform my own original song in front of about oh...300 of my classmates! It was... exhilarating. Anyways Damian is coming over tonight, he had to work all day sooooo yeah...wish me luck ;D XOXO, Lauren I put my diary in my secret hiding place and put on some makeup...I wanted to look good for Damian after all... he is kind of sorta, actually, VERY cute. As I was applying eyeliner I heard a knock on my window where I usually sat to watch the sundown and rise. I looked up flabbergasted to see Damian standing there. Mom wasn't home right now and I swear I didn't leave the door unlocked...so how did he... "Good evenin' Lauren." He smiled without showing teeth. "H-how did you...I mean...Hi Damian." I blushed while stuttering. "Oh I just climbed over the vines on the side of you house." He grinned this time. "Oh...anyways what's up, come on in to my room, aren't you cold?" I asked curiously while he jumped into my window. "I'm always cold. It's just in my...blood." He said that word with such fascination, pausing and looking into my eyes. A silly grin was plastered on his face and he grabbed my hand. "Want to go see a movie?" He asked. My cheeks were flushing...my very first date. "U-uh sure Damian." I blushed. I was NEVER this intimidated...I don't know why I'm feeling this way. He just has this hold on me...and when I look into his eyes...those blue orbs just fascinate me. "Well shall we?" He asked while grabbing onto my arm. I smiled and guided him down the stairs. While walking down to the stairs Damian paused and looked around my room. He studied several things...my books, posters, pictures. "You like Celtic Woman?" He asked fascinated. "That I do." I nodded. He smirked. "I know them personally. Keith next door had a fling with Lisa. She's like my Aunt." "KEITH DATED LISA?! SHE'S MY FAVORITE!!" I screamed very loudly. Damian laughed and nodded his head, "Mine too." He replied. We then descended down the stairs to go to the movies. "So what movie are we seeing?" I asked curiously, hoping it wasn't a scary. "Some new movie called "Fright Night". It seems cool." He grinned at my horrific expression. "You mean...that new vampire movie?" I gulped. "C'mon Lauren, afraid of vampires are we?" He grinned a creepy grin. "N-no. I guess it should be fine...McLovin is in it after all..." I sighed. This was going to be a long night...
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Post by celticbear on Sept 4, 2011 20:54:41 GMT -5
LyLy! Great choice of a movie! But of course what other kind of movie would a TeenVamp choose but a Vamp one! This is going to be one interesting night! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Post by celticpride1029 on Sept 5, 2011 12:41:10 GMT -5
love it!! <3 more more more moreeee !!!
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Post by angelmcfay on Sept 25, 2011 19:38:19 GMT -5
love this update please!
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Post by angelenia100 on Oct 13, 2011 14:36:39 GMT -5
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by angelenia100 on Nov 15, 2011 17:44:46 GMT -5
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by dollydaydream on Jan 12, 2012 16:03:17 GMT -5
Wow, this is great! I don't normally enjoy vampire stories ( other than Dracula, which I still haven't finished reading yet.) but this is really good! I hope you have time to update soon.
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Post by pattydear on Jan 15, 2012 1:53:38 GMT -5
I <3 THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT'S SO AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's pretty original. I like how the characters are so...... complex. For instance, Ryan seems so stern and harsh, but at the same time it seems that down inside he is the nicest, most wonderful father anyone could have. Also, Damian frightens Lauren so very, so very, so so very much, but there's something calm and unintimidating about this fright. Please keep writing! The story is so beautiful so far!
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Post by lylychan1029 on Mar 11, 2012 2:05:52 GMT -5
ok wow it has been so long...almost a year LOL
CHAPTER 13:
Keith was out for his annual midnight surf. He liked it best because high tide was just about over and he was riding the small waves. He missed the way sunshine would sparkle in the waves and radiate on his beautiful face. He sighed in annoyance.
"HELP! I DON'T WANT TO GO IN I CAN'T SWIM!" A loud, young woman screamed.
Keith turned his head to the other end of the beach where there was a small campfire. Keith's acute sense of smell sensed alcohol. He raced to the shore to run over to the other side of the beach where the fire and the two figures were. He heard a big splash and laughing. Keith noticed a drunk man stumbling away.
"HEY!" He hollered to the man. "She's your problem now." He slurred while laughing. Keith ignored him and ran out to where the current was taking the young lady. He swam over to her unconscious body and dragged her to the shore. She began coughing as Keith pounded on her chest and water fell out from her mouth.
"Ugh. Thank you kind stranger." She hugged his lifeless, wet body.
"Why...you're even more cold than I am! But...thank you for uh...for saving my life." She said with some beautiful accent...possibly Australian.
"It was my pleasure. Keith Harkin at your service." He said while bowing down.
"I'm Melody Thunder." She said while blushing. Keith could see in the moonlight her gorgeous features. She had short, brunette hair and stunning blue eyes. They were so full of life and hope. Her pale skin complimented her rosy cheeks and bright red lips. He enjoyed the shape of her neck specifically.
"That's a beautiful name." He said while sitting down by the fire on a log. He patted the seat next to him.
"Thanks. Where do you live and what are you doing out here so late?" She asked curiously.
"I love to night surf. I uh...I uh work all day so I only get to do it at night. Waves are beautiful...kinda like you." He smirked. She blushed a crimson red.
"Well I'm staying at the house right over there." She pointed to a beautiful house that was a light shad of blue. "Come by if you ever want to grab dinner or a movie sometime." She smiled.
Keith's lifeless heart would have been beating a hundred miles a minute had it not been dead...he sighed and shook his head. When Melody was out of sight he pounded his fist into the air and shouted "YES!!"
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Post by lylychan1029 on Mar 11, 2012 2:34:53 GMT -5
Chapter 14: DAMIAN POV
"That was...so....disturbing." Lauren shuddered.
"Oh come now, not all vampires are so bad." I smirked to her. She turned her head and gave me the cutest "stank" eye. My, she had gorgeous eyes. They twinkled in the moonlight, which was almost full. That could only mean one thing...and it wasn't a good thing.
"So you liked the movie?" Lauren asked while licking her ice cream cone.
I nodded my head. "Very gory and awesome!" I said to her. I began licking on my chocolate ice cream and grabbed her hand.
"Come on I wanna show you something!" I said while running incredibly fast with her.
"Woah Damian! Slow down!" She begged. I stopped at a clearing. There were some deer by the little stream I had found a while ago. Nobody really knew about this place but myself, and now Lauren. There was something so special about her.
"This is...amazing. I would love to just sit her and write music, stories, ANYTHING!" She gasped in shock. I took her hand and we sat down by the tiny stream. I found a lily and placed it in her head, behind her ear. I sniffed her hair. Mmmm mango. She casted a worried look my way, I had frightened her a bit. Oops.
"Sorry, I uh...I just dont like when people get so close to me..." She said while blushing.
"Why's that?" I asked curiously while looking into her eyes.
"Someone always ends up getting hurt..." She muttered.
"What do you mean?" I asked.
She sighed and looked out at the clearing in front of us.
"I dated a guy for five years and all of a sudden he wants to go to NYC and leaves me behind. He took my heart with him. About a month after that...one minute my father is kissing me goodnight and the next morning I wake up he's...gone.." She began to sob a bit. She hung her head down in sorrow. I stood up and she casted her teary eyes my way. I don't know what came over me but I forced her to stand and hugged her. She gasped in surprise but clung on tight to me.
"Lauren...I would never, ever hurt or leave you." I said with sincerity. She sniffled and smiled at me.
"Th-Thank you Damian. Can we go home now?" She asked politely. I nodded my head and took her hand. We walked home in silence and then arrived at her doorstep.
"I had a lot of fun tonight Damian." She said with her gorgeous smile.
"I did too, Lauren." I smiled.
"Well goodnight." She said and right before she opened the door I quickly (with my vampire speed) kissed her on the lips. She closed her eyes and re opened them again. Her tan skin now blushing a dark red.
"Goodnight, Laur." I smiled while walking over to my house.
Once I got to the door, Keith was just walking in too. I noticed a happy smile on his face.
"Well what are YOU so happy about?" I asked while raising my eyebrow.
"Nothin. But I got a question for you." Keith said while opening the door.
"What?" I asked curiously. He stiffled a laugh.
"Was Lauren a good kisser?" He laughed loudly while walking up the stairs.
"YOU KISSED HER?" Someone shouted in the hallway.
Uh-Oh...
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Post by celticbear on Mar 11, 2012 20:41:49 GMT -5
Worth the wait! Well it looks like we now have not one but two new romances blooming! Love the name you gave Keith's love intrest! And something tells me it was Ryan who shouted in the hallway!
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Post by lylychan1029 on Mar 11, 2012 23:03:27 GMT -5
yay thank you for continuing to read and have faith in me!! I am just so busy. But today I saw Celtic Woman and got SO inspired!! more to come!
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Post by pattydear on Mar 16, 2012 17:41:53 GMT -5
I thank, thank, *thank* you for adding more to the story, Lylychan!!!! There are barely any stories which capture my attention like this one does, and it really made my day go up on the happiness scale!
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Post by lylychan1029 on Jun 4, 2012 16:17:32 GMT -5
Chapter 15: Lauren's POV A new day had begun since I had seen Damian last night. He had...he had kissed me. It wasn't passionate but boy was it amazing and very spontaneous. I love when guys are spontaneous, I had knowing when something is going to happen before it does. I'm afraid in a way...I let people get too close too fast. Anyways I have plans to meet up with Cameron and some girl named Lindsay Pierce. She seemed...very nice. I couldn't place my finger on it but something about her was off. I put on a dark green tee shirt that hugged my body and complimented my special green eyes, and a pair of jean shorts. Cameron said we were going to have a jam session in the park. I grabbed my music book filled with my songs and threw it into my Louis Vuitton bag...I know what you're thinking, "REALLY?" but I am a girl and I do love Louis Vuitton. I descended down the stairs and saw my mom was already out. 'She must of gone back to work finally...' I thought to myself. There wasn't any note left so I shrugged it off and went out the door into my black mercedes benz. I was blasting some Celtic Woman and drove by town with a lot of weird looks casted in my direction. It was then I noticed how dark it was outside, very dark. That meant a storm was coming. I heard my iphone go off with the "bing" meaning I had a text. I parked my car by a local cafe and decided to read the text. "Hey do you mind if we meet somewhere else? I don't care where, but it looks like a storm is coming" -Cameron. "Hey I'm at Kookie's Cafe on Main and 4th, come meet here? " -Lauren I got out of my car just as it began to down pour. I ran to the front door and saw some customers sitting down eating their lunches. I was suddenly greeted by the hostess who sat me at a booth with two menus. I began to look at the menu, deciding what I would like to eat. "Hnm, do I want the soup and salad, or a cheeseburger with fries?" I said out loud. "I'd personally go with the cheeseburger, but then again I'm a huge carnivore, not herbivore!" Cameron said while standing up. I gasped in shock at his sudden appearance. I got up and hugged him, it was then that I realized how...tall he was. And how...gorgeous this blonde male was. I shook my head and sat down in the booth. He smiled his pearly whites at me and put on his glasses that were in his bag. 'Uh-oh...he is gorgeous...but I think I have feelings for Damian...think being the key word...relax Lauren...relax...nothing bad could happen right?' I thought to myself. I then felt a hand on mine and looked up to see Cameron's gorgeous eyes. "You okay Laure?" He asked concerned. I blushed like a maniac. 'Danger, Danger, Danger!' my mind shouted. "Hey Lauren, mind if I join you? I got caught in the rain." A familiar voice said right by the booth.
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Post by meagab15 on Jun 4, 2012 19:45:25 GMT -5
great story i love vampires twilight is my favorite movie and i always thought damian would be a good edward cullen
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