kristine
Fantastic Fan
Rycerz of Noxville
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Post by kristine on Jun 2, 2011 11:31:20 GMT -5
This story was inspired by the song Hard to say I'm sorry.
You see what you were afraid you would see. It's Keith, kissing another woman. With tears streaming down your face, you leave. Keith, after finally pulling away from the woman, turns and catches sight of you as you turn the corner. Now how am I going to get her back, he wonders. This woman that had kissed him, had only done so, because she knew it would bother you to see him with another woman. Keith backs away from this woman, turns and takes of running, looking for you. He finds you sitting on a bench trying to catch your breath, and clear your head. He calls to you. You look up at him, get up, and start walking away. He reaches for your arm, but you pull it away. Pain and confussion are written all over his face, but you too are hurt and confussed. Again he reaches for your arm, trying, wanting to explain, but you don't want to feel this pain in your heart anymore. Tears are still rolling down your face, while you look in to his blue/grey eyes. I've had to many heartaches in the past, you tell him. I can't... your voice crackes. You turn and walk away. You don't look back. Keith has tears rolling down his cheecks, as his true love walks away.
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Post by celticthunder1510 on Jun 2, 2011 11:34:15 GMT -5
That is a sad one shot! Wish it was a touch longer! Very good but short!!!!
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Post by laurenne on Jun 2, 2011 18:27:13 GMT -5
This is good. Will there be more?
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Post by celticbear on Jun 2, 2011 20:39:02 GMT -5
I hope it's not a one Shot! I would love to see Keith win his true love back! But if it is a one-shot then Kristine you have just earned the reward for the shortest,saddest one-shot in Nox history!
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kristine
Fantastic Fan
Rycerz of Noxville
Posts: 241
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Post by kristine on Jun 4, 2011 0:51:50 GMT -5
this is not a one shot story. I will update when I can. this month will be a little tough do to work, and everyone taking vactions this month, but I will be updating. as soon as I get updates in my head I will try to get them on here. oh, and I always have short posts. Sorry. I hope you guys will stick around to read the story, because I hope that this one will be one of my better ones. Maybe even the best one. Think of it as kind of like with the guys, how we have to wait for a period of time before we get wonderful updates.
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kristine
Fantastic Fan
Rycerz of Noxville
Posts: 241
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Post by kristine on Jun 8, 2011 22:59:52 GMT -5
It was your first time in Lincoln, Nebraska, and you knew that it was Celtic Thunder's first time there as well. You couldn't wait to meet up with your friends. It was early morning and you and your friends were meeting in 5 minutes. You rush out of your hotel room. And you run right into Keith Harkin. You and Keith, look at each other and get this Oh my word, he's cute thought in your head. I'm so sorry, Keith says. He can't take his eyes off of you. Your watch beeps at you all of a sudden.You realize that your running late. You turn and run down the hall, not giving the man that you just ran into, another thought. Not until you step into the elevator to head down to the lobby. Then all of a sudden it hits. The thought of how gorgeous he was. His shoulder length blond hair, his blueish grey eyes. His slight smile. The elevator doors open and there are your friends. But your still thinking about the man, from upstairs, that you don't even their standing there, waiting for you.
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Post by celticbear on Jun 8, 2011 23:15:15 GMT -5
Kristine! Cute but Short! And yep you described the effect Keith has on the female race perfectly! Glad you are continuing the story! UPDATE WHEN YOU CAN!
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kristine
Fantastic Fan
Rycerz of Noxville
Posts: 241
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Post by kristine on Jun 8, 2011 23:32:28 GMT -5
Glad I got that right. That is what I was going for. Not hard when you have a calender with his picture in it,hanging right in front of you. And I will.
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Post by celticthunder1510 on Jun 8, 2011 23:35:48 GMT -5
Oh come on you gotta do better than that!! Please UPDATE SOON!!!!!!
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Post by laurenne on Jun 9, 2011 18:24:02 GMT -5
More soon, please.
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kristine
Fantastic Fan
Rycerz of Noxville
Posts: 241
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Post by kristine on Jun 15, 2011 23:29:29 GMT -5
Soon you realize that your friends are standing outside the elevator waiting on you to get off. We've been holding the door open for the past 5 minutes, what were you thinking about for so long? We thought about leaving you in the elevator, they joke with you. Haha, you laugh. I ran into this really cute guy upstairs on my way to meet you all. ohhhhhh....they all say. you look at all of them and then stick out your tounge. Let's go, you say. You and your friends head out the door of the hotel, and start wandering around the nearby shopping center. As you are roaming around in one of the neighboring stores, you spot something blond moving. You look up and see the same man that you ran into back in the hotel. you quickly look around to make sure your friends aren't around, and you walk over to see what this cute guy is doing. You walk over to him, and tell him, you do know it's called stalking right?! Keith laughs, and says Yea, I know. you both laugh, and start talking about random things. After awhile you both realize that your hungry. Can I take you to lunch, Keith asks. Sure, you say. and you both walk off to find some lunch. So, what brings you to Nebraska, Keith asks you? I'm here to hang out with some friends and go to a concert. That sounds like fun. Soon, Keith's cell rings. It's Sharon calling to remind him that he has to be back in 15 minutes for the soundcheck. I have to go he says. Ok, well I should probably go find my friends. I'll walk you back he says. You walk back to the store that you had left and go to the front of the store. You and Keith say your goodbyes, and then he heads off to the soundcheck. There you are, is the next thing you hear. You look to see your friends standing within 5 feet of you. So what did you do? Not much. Just had lunch with that guy I ran into earlier. Awesome, one of your friends says. Wait, you don't know his name? another asks. You come to realize that you don't. Nope. If I see him again I'll ask him, what his name is.
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Post by DaughterofOphelia on Jun 15, 2011 23:35:32 GMT -5
I love it!!!!!!! Update soon PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by celticthunder1510 on Jun 16, 2011 8:57:44 GMT -5
Holy cow that is a good story! UPDATE!!!
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Post by celticbear on Jun 16, 2011 21:40:58 GMT -5
Just wait till she finds out her new friend is none other than the Famous Oh so Hot Keith Harkin! UPDATE SOON! PLEASE!
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kristine
Fantastic Fan
Rycerz of Noxville
Posts: 241
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Post by kristine on Jun 16, 2011 22:45:36 GMT -5
At the sound check Keith is having a hard time with his songs, because he is still thinking about the wonderful young lady that he has run in to twice now. Soon the soundcheck is over, and Keith heads back outside. His mind is whirling. Wow, he thinks to himself. I think I may be in love with this girl. Meanwhile, back at the hotel you can't help but thinking about Keith. You found out that he's a surfer. You and your friends are all getting ready for the concert that is in 2 hours. You bought this stunning, backless, red dress. You put it on, and then put on the diamond necklace that you recieved as a presant for your birthday. You head into the bathroom and put on some makeup, some perfume, and then curl your hair. You finish curling your hair, and then head out of your room and meet up with your friends. You all head downstairs. As the elevator doors open, you see Keith. Keith looks up in time to see you and all your friends step off the elevator. His jaw drops. He walks over and says, Hi,I'm Keith. Hi, Keith, you respond. You smile at him.
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