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Post by mistyconstellation on May 1, 2011 18:57:32 GMT -5
They are fun! :]
MORE STORY!!!!
This is probably the most boring part of the story but whatever.
Damian grabbed his pan just in case he needed it to defeat Chiptas. “So, how did you get here?” He asked. “Oh, I’m the queen of Ember, I have magical powers.” She replied. “Your magical powers brought you here?” “Yes, my magical powers can bring us to Ember too.” She took his hand, and grinned. “Are you ready?” He looked back, “Y..Yes” The wind howled which made Damian terrified. “Don’t worry, Damo. Everything will be alright.” Lina said assuring him. He turned to the clock, and saw the change time. “The clock is changing because we are going to other world.” She said. Suddenly, his clock exploded. “Okay…” he said a little upset. It became very light outside and Damian screamed, “I’M GONNA GO BLIND!” “Just CLOSE your eyes, Damian.” “Can I cover-” “NO!” “Okay.” He said shutting his eyes, “Please be over soon, please be over soon.” Lina giggled at how scared he was.
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Post by DaughterofOphelia on May 1, 2011 18:58:47 GMT -5
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!! Update soon please!
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Post by CelticPrincess24 on May 1, 2011 19:09:14 GMT -5
Love it! update soon, please!!!
oh and just a suggestion to make it easier to read; start a new paragragh when there's a new speaker... but you don't have to if you don't want to.
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Post by mistyconstellation on May 1, 2011 20:24:31 GMT -5
Ok, I will do that next time. :] I might have a new update tonight.
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Post by celticbear on May 1, 2011 20:28:08 GMT -5
Misty! this short update was so funny! Poor Damo watching his alarm clock explode,then getting scared he was going blind because of the bright lights! PRICELESS! UPDATE SOON! PLEASE!
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Post by celticthunder1510 on May 1, 2011 20:48:27 GMT -5
Come on, update and make it substantial! You are doing great just your updates are so short, if you made them longer you could make them wickedly wonderful and not liose your edge!
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Post by mistyconstellation on May 2, 2011 22:51:33 GMT -5
I'll make it longer next time. :P Sorry, it's so short. >,<
“I’m gonna die…” he said shaking.
“Oh, Damian, relax.” The girl said rolling her eyes.
What have I gotten into, he thought, if THIS is bad, Ember must be ten times worse.
“Open your eyes.” Lina said letting go of his hand. Damian opened his eyes slowly and looked around. Many people were walking by; some waved at him, and some smiled. The town was lit up with ember lights that dimmed every four minutes. He could hardly see the sky, if there was any sky. “This..this….” he couldn’t finish what he was going to say. He was so amazed at how beautiful the city was. Maybe I did make the right decision he thought.
“Lina! This is…” he turned to her… “Lina?” She was gone.
“Lina?!?” he screamed, “No, no, no!!! Come back!”
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Post by celticbear on May 4, 2011 21:27:15 GMT -5
Misty! you had to leave us with a cliffy! Shame on you! I wonder where Lina went? I hope she does not leave Damo alone for to long! UPDATE SOON! PLEASE!
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Post by mistyconstellation on Jun 2, 2011 14:55:59 GMT -5
I'm back with more story! ****************************************** Damian looked around wondering where and why she went. “Why would she abandon me like this? That’s just rude. She knows I have no idea what’s going on, and.. and.. LINA, WHERE ARE YOU?!” Many people stared at him, giving him disgusted looks and walking away quickly. He looked at the people puzzled, “Sorry for shouting. It’s my first time here, and I don’t know what to do.” “Leave while you still can. Go! Go in that closet and you’ll be home. Home, safe and sound.” An old man said. “Do it! It’s for your own good.” Another man said. Damian stared at them all, “What do you mean?” Lina ran to Damian. “Damian, what you are doing?” “You left me!” Damian said raising his eyebrow. “Come on.” She said taking his hand, “Come with me.” “Be careful, Damo! She will….” “Shut up.” Lina hissed. Damian nodded to the men, then Lina pulled him. “Don’t talk to those men. They’re full of lies and made-up stories.” Damian nodded again, “Sorry, I shouldn’t have said anything, but what do they mean by…” “I told you, Damian, they are FULL OF LIES and MADE-UP STORIES.” She screamed glaring at him. He said nothing, but stared into Lina’s eyes. They began to turn light red, but faded away once she looked away. Damian blinked twice, and prayed that this was a dream. Ember was so lovely at first, but now he hated it. He wanted to go home; he wanted to be with his family. The men watched Lina, and Damian talk. They could see the anger in Lina’s face, and the shock in Damian’s. Damian shifted his eyes towards the men. “Run away.” They whispered quietly. He scratched his arm, “I don’t know if I should do that.” He whispered back at them. He wanted to do it because of how Lina was acting, but he also thought he should stay with her because she was the one who brought him in Ember in the first place. Damian took one step back, but Lina grabbed his shirt. “And where do you think you’re going?” She said as her eyes turned dark red. “No…where…” he said stilling looking at men. Lina slowly let go of his shirt, but her eyes were still red. Damian ran for it. “DAMIAN!” Lina yelled, and turned to the men, “…..You.” “We were only trying to help him.” The first man said meanly. “Don’t you dare talk to your Queen like that!” She snapped. “You are not our Queen.” The second man said, “and you know, the more you talk to us, the more time he has to run away from “the Queen.” “You all will get it later.” She said walking up to the men, “but I will let you know that…. Damo will not get away.”
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Post by GalwayGirl on Jun 2, 2011 15:13:45 GMT -5
I wonder what Damian has gotten himself into!! I hope he didn't make the wrong decision trying to run away!! I can't wait to see what happens next!! Update soon please!!!
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Post by CelticPrincess24 on Jun 2, 2011 15:19:18 GMT -5
oh wow! Maybe she's evil!!! Update soon!
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Post by celticbear on Jun 2, 2011 20:46:48 GMT -5
I'm begining to think that she is not the real Lina! That she's an imposter! And that it will up to Damo to figure out how to rescue the real Lina and save Ember! Misty,UPDATE SOON! PLEASE!
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Post by mistyconstellation on Jun 27, 2011 10:38:45 GMT -5
I forgot all about my story. -___- ***********************************************
Damian ran through the streets of Ember. He constantly was looking back to see if Lina was behind him.
"What have I done?!" he said quietly to himself.
Suddenly, all the lights went off. He froze, and stared in the darkness. He heard screams from a distance, and crying from children. All he did was stand there in the middle of the street. He remembered what happened in the book, the lights were dying from Ember, and soon they would be completely gone. He recalled what Lina said to him, about Chiptas, maybe he stole the lights? No, that couldn't be it, the book never said anything about that, but Chiptas wasn't in the book anyway so anything could happen.
"Maybe he's stealing the light, and music is his weakness?" Damian said slowly, "but that doesn't make much sense."
He continued standing there listening to all the noises. He took one step forward, but was scared to continue on. He heard a noise from behind him.
"Who's there?" Damian asked looking behind him.
"Boy, what are you doing out here? ...in the darkness?" the stranger questioned him, lighting a candle. The stranger looked like one of the men who helped him escape from Lina.
"I was running away from Lina... and.."
"Oh, you're the boy. The obviously very confused boy."
"I am confused.... why is everything so strange here?"
"'Cause you're in Ember, boy, everything is strange. The lights go out at unusual times, many people here are evil, but others are very nice..."
"Are you the kind ones?"
"If I helped you escape from Lina, then I'm a good one."
The man started to walk away, but Damian followed the him.
"What's so bad about Lina?" Damian asked trying to keep up with the man.
"She's trying to rule Ember, and take every person who lives on planet Earth, and bring them to Ember, where she will kill their souls."
Damian's eyes widen, "But she was so nice, she said I needed to..."
"Boy, I'm not gonna explain everything that she's done, or.. uh, never mind. It's a lot to explain, and at your age, it's way too much."
Damian nodded his head, "What is your name, sir?"
"Adam Kit."
"Nice to meet you, Mr. Kit. I'm Damian... McGinty!"
The man just nodded and smiled at the boy. Damian stared at the ground, and kicked the rocks from the street.
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Post by celticthunder1510 on Jun 27, 2011 10:42:45 GMT -5
How does he know he is a good guy or a bad guy!?
Update sooner this time through!
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Post by CelticPrincess24 on Jun 27, 2011 10:44:09 GMT -5
THat evil Lina!!! Poor Damian! I hope he finds a way to Save Ember soon
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