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Post by phillyctgirl on Mar 30, 2011 21:01:37 GMT -5
Some of you may know by now, but for those who don't:
I am currently writing a book of original poems, and I will be sending it to Ryan this summer, hopefully towards the middle-end of May. A few of the members from the Thunderpub said they wanted to read some of them, so, I will be putting various rhymes, and any note of inspiration if they need it. I will only be posting some of them, as some that are in the book are specifically geared towards Ryan alone. Happy reading!
Each poem will be it's own reply; critiques, and comments are welcome.
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Post by phillyctgirl on Mar 30, 2011 21:04:49 GMT -5
I won't do it again. Love you with open arms Without Fear. Like a baby's first steps, Tumbling, falling. I fell once. We learn from our failures. I won't do it again.
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Post by phillyctgirl on Mar 30, 2011 21:06:27 GMT -5
My black cup of coffee has now gotten cold It tastes like my feelings-dirty and old To pour in new liquid, to start fresh-renew Can't chase away memories and pictures of you This cup like my soul-half empty and dark Leaves room for beginnings, a trip to embark I still stare blankly into that cup My heart lacks the strength to lift itself up Now smooth and cold, fingers like ice Scratch marks in "Forever" without thinking twice My mind has blankly let out a cry To scream through the darkness-"Without you I'll die!" Dependent, yes, but alone it is true I very much miss your eyes so blue Your world has moved on so very well without me So weakly I sit here With a black cup of coffee
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Post by phillyctgirl on Mar 31, 2011 0:18:49 GMT -5
He is as beautiful as a rose in full bloom His intelligence stimulates me like hot popping corn His body is like a fine Italian sculpture He has charisma smooth as butter Funny as the riddler tickling my funnybone His personality has me glowing like a nightlight Living his life for the omnipotent one Could you be that special one? If so, refresh me daily like a citrus breeze in a soft wind Engulf me in your presence like a Venus fly trap Treat me like your most delicate flower Attending to my finest hour Make me so incredible Have me like herb tea in hot water Now if you can do that Then I declare You are The right one for me.
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Post by celticbear on Mar 31, 2011 0:29:17 GMT -5
Philly Your Poems are Wonderful! And You Realy Have It Bad For Ryan! Like I Do For Keith! Keep these poems coming!
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Post by phillyctgirl on Mar 31, 2011 21:49:14 GMT -5
;D so glad you like them!
A delectable rose stares at creation You are its mentor Its petals yearning to sing jubilation Your spirit its captor What life has this rose, this beginning, this seed To grow and develop while you fill its needs
And I like this rose, search from inside To breathe and to live with you by my side My darling, my angel, I know now my dreams To have and to hold you- forever it seems So again like this rose, we are stronger each day Becoming one together, what else can I say I thank God for you, you have opened my soul Like a new budding rose, with stories to be told.
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Post by phillyctgirl on Apr 1, 2011 23:16:56 GMT -5
Sometimes I am blessed With a moment of untainted beauty Where my soul is completely engulfed Within something so incredibly fulfilling Where my heart feels as though It would combust From such high levels of pure happiness But in a moment it is gone And I miss it like an old dear friend And I would give anything To sustain it for a moment longer So I could refresh the memory of the moment Its smell, its color, its emotion The utpoia of human satisfaction Oh how I wish it could embrace me forever.
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Post by phillyctgirl on Apr 1, 2011 23:48:02 GMT -5
Lovely laughter fills the air Wake up slowly if you dare Sun-streams gleam on glass panes bright And rainbow prisms bounce to sight Dreams tread slowly overhead One by one roll from your bed Warm air blows your curtains away Bid you join a brand new day
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Post by phillyctgirl on Apr 3, 2011 23:06:15 GMT -5
I see you From across the room Heart pounds Breath comes short As you draw near Hands sweat I tremble Voice squeaks Words fail Absorbed in you But you would never know I am falling apart inside From looking at me On the outside
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Post by phillyctgirl on Apr 4, 2011 0:29:01 GMT -5
Outlined with secure doors, Filled with colorful walls And polished floors. Textured with emotions so strong, Perfect and smooth with no edges, It sings so sweetly a wondrous song. His heart is so pure, So sweet, So loving, His heart is my every cure.
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Post by phillyctgirl on Apr 4, 2011 0:34:21 GMT -5
Just tell me...
When I cry, you'll be my shoulder When I fall, you'll pick me up When I laugh, you'll laugh When I hurt, you'll soothe it away When I talk, you'll be all ears When I need a friend, you'll be at my side
Just tell me You're everything.
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Post by phillyctgirl on Apr 4, 2011 0:49:27 GMT -5
If I have to wait, will you return for me? If I have to wait, will love come to be? If I have to wait, will the change be good for you and me? If I have to wait, I hope we'll be together eventually. We belong together, I tell you this now We belong together, for I will take care of us somehow We belong together, just you and me Can we belong together? Guess we'll wait and see If we have to wait, we'll change for our own good If we have to wait, we'll be there for each other like we should If we have to wait, it is for the best To wait ever so patiently is the ultimate test.
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Post by orinocoflow on Apr 4, 2011 1:08:04 GMT -5
I just started reading them, and I never really liked poetry, but I definitely love these! "Black Cup of Coffee" for some reason strikes me as my fav. Keep them coming! I'm sure Ryan will love reading these.
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Post by phillyctgirl on Apr 8, 2011 23:14:20 GMT -5
I remember Bees buzzing Breeze blowing I remember Leaves rustling Birds singing I remember Holding hands Walking down the narrow path I remember
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Post by phillyctgirl on Apr 12, 2011 13:46:57 GMT -5
With you I have no camouflage With you I have no guise You know me so very well you cut me down to size
With you I have no dominance With you I have no rule You know me so very well you keep me acting cool
With you I have no treachery With you I have no line You know me so very well you let me merely shine
With you I have no arrogance With you I have no pride You know me so very well you lay me modest wide
With you I have no substitute With you I have no choice You know me so very well you give me direct voice
With you I have no counterfeit With you I have no sham You know me so very well you make me what I am
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