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Post by laurenne on Mar 31, 2011 23:19:51 GMT -5
I absolutely loved the last few lines, so funny. Update soon, please.
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Post by CelticPrincess24 on Apr 1, 2011 13:19:15 GMT -5
oh boy Keith!!!!!!!! hahaha I can't wait for the next update! I hope it's soon!
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Apr 1, 2011 14:05:07 GMT -5
hahahaha that was soooo funny!!!!!! now UPDATE SOON!!!!!
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Post by oceangirl1 on Apr 1, 2011 16:13:37 GMT -5
Ohhhh What is Keith doing now?!!!!! LOL Please update soon
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Post by laurenne on Apr 5, 2011 19:00:35 GMT -5
Please update soon, I love this story.
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Post by CelticPrincess24 on Apr 10, 2011 16:00:39 GMT -5
update, update, update, update, update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Apr 10, 2011 16:22:32 GMT -5
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by celticgirl91 on Apr 13, 2011 14:53:00 GMT -5
“Come on, Keith”, Ryan tried to reason with him. “Emmet’s just slaggin ya, let it go” “He challenged me!”, Keith pointed at Emmet. “I’ll show him…”, he mumbled to himself and took a deep drink from his glass. “Here we go again…”, Damian shook his head. Keith stood up and climbed onto the bar. “Excuse me everybody!”, he called. “This young lad here doesn’t think that I can carry a tune and I’m going to prove him wrong” The pub was silent. Damian looked at Emmet who had his head down, looking as though he was trying to be as invisible as possible. Keith turned to the band. “Do you lads know the song ‘The Looking Glass’?” “No, I don’t think I do”, one of them answered. “Keith, that’s your song”, Ryan whispered to him. Keith, obviously drunk, laughed, “Oh right. You wouldn’t know it, I wrote that one” The pub was still quiet, silently watching the drunken Irishman. “Wait! I forgot I have me guitar”, Keith announced. He jumped down from the bar and grabbed the instrument. He started strumming and belted out the tune. It actually sounded alright, until he started dancing and lost his balance, stumbling forward to catch himself. Ryan stood and helped Keith straighten up. “Alright mate, time to go” “But I wasn’t finished yet!” Ryan shook his head. “You are now” Ryan escorted Keith out of the bar. Emmet, Damian and Lacey all looked at each other. “Sorry about that”, Damian said to Lacey. “Keith gets a little… crazy when he’s been drinking.” Lacey shrugged. “Oh I’ve seen worse. Don’t worry about it” “We should probably be going soon anyway”, Emmet said. “Isn’t the bus leaving soon?” Damian checked his phone. “Aye, it is. Come on, we better go”, he said reluctantly. He didn’t want to leave yet. The exact thing that he had been worried about had happened; he liked Lacey. The walk back was quiet, Emmet tactfully going straight onto the bus. “How are you getting home?”, Damian turned to Lacey outside the bus door. The streets were empty now, all the fans had gone home. “I have a car over there”, Lacey nodded with her head. Damian noticed that her arms were crossed over her chest as if she were cold. “Come on, I’ll walk with you”, Damian put a hand to her back, guiding her in that direction. He wanted to keep his hand there, but thought that she wouldn’t want him to, so he stuffed his hands in his pockets instead. “Where are you going now?”, Lacey asked. Damian chuckled. “Honestly, I have no clue. We have a sheet on the bus that tells us, but I haven’t looked at it.” “Is that hard?” “You get used to it. What are you doing tomorrow?”, he quickly changed the subject. Lacey shrugged. “Work, school, family… you know. Life.” Damian nodded thoughtfully. Their lives were so different. She had her family here, a job, a home. And Damian didn’t even know which state he’d be in tomorrow. “This is it”, Lacey said, suddenly stopping. Damian shook his head. “What?” She giggled. “This is my car” “Oh”, he looked at the blue kia in front of him. Both were quiet for a minute, neither knowing quite how to say goodbye. “Well, thanks for everything”, Lacey smiled. “This was the best night I’ve had in a long time” Damian smiled back. “It was fun. Thanks for coming along, I know Keith sounded like a creeper back in the toy store.” “Just a little”, she laughed. “But I’m glad he did” “So am I” Silence. “Well, I better go” “Yea, same here” More silence. “Well, bye”, Damian reached down and hugged her. “Bye Damian, thanks again” Damian started backing away. He didn’t want to of course, but what else was he supposed to do? Then something Keith had said earlier came to his mind. “Lacey, wait”, he called. Lacey turned around. “Yea?” Damian walked back toward her. “Can I get your number? You know, in case we’re ever back in the area, maybe we can hang again.” Lacey grinned. “Yea, sure” A couple minutes later, Damian left again, feeling happier than he had in months.
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Post by CelticPrincess24 on Apr 13, 2011 15:04:18 GMT -5
I loved it!!!!!!! This was amazing!haha Update soon!
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Apr 13, 2011 15:09:55 GMT -5
this was amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Post by GalwayGirl on Apr 13, 2011 15:15:25 GMT -5
I loved it!!!!! Update soon!!!!!
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Post by orinocoflow on Apr 13, 2011 18:06:14 GMT -5
great update! the scene with Keith at the bar...LOL
please update soon!!!
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Post by celticbear on Apr 13, 2011 21:18:47 GMT -5
Great UPDATE! LOVE THE WHOLE BAR SCENE! BUT THE BEST PART WAS THAT DAMO WALKED LACEY BACK TO HER CAR AND AT THE LAST MOMENT REMEMBERED TO GET HER NUMBER! UPDATE SOON! PLEASE!
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Post by oceangirl1 on Apr 13, 2011 22:01:13 GMT -5
Awww Such a cute but awkward goodbye!! And he actually remembered to get her number!! LOL ;D Please update reallly really soon!!! I love this story
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Post by celticthunder1510 on Apr 23, 2011 17:15:19 GMT -5
This story rocks! Can you update it again soon?
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