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Post by Deleted on Feb 5, 2011 21:56:25 GMT -5
I was starting to pick up writing again, but right now guys...I don't know, I'm just so down right now, I can't even write at the moment. It was all going so well, but now...I don't even know. Sorry guys. Ta for now And YES, that does mean this story gets an ending.
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Post by CelticPrincess24 on Feb 5, 2011 22:28:38 GMT -5
How come your down? Is there anyting I can do?
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Post by Deleted on Feb 5, 2011 22:31:35 GMT -5
How come your down? Is there anyting I can do? Thanks for the concern. but no, it's just some crap that I will not burden ye good folk of Noxville with. but thank you. The concern really means a lot.
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Post by CelticPrincess24 on Feb 5, 2011 22:39:20 GMT -5
Ok! I hope it passes soon!
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Post by Deleted on Feb 8, 2011 13:16:48 GMT -5
ONE YEAR LATER
Ryan stiffened as the Wedding March began to blare from the organ. The congregation stood and turned to the back of the church as he stepped forward, as to not have his view hindered; he wanted to see everything today.
A murmur rippled through the crowd as she stepped out, and Ryan didn’t bother to stifle his gasp.
Her dress made her look like the angel ha had dreamt of for years now, though at his request, no veil hid her gorgeous face. Instead, her brown hair was curled and piled atop her head. No glasses donned her face, so he could see even from his place at the front, her huge and soft brown eyes, so deep with care and compassion, and now, leaking tears down her cheeks.
When she finally reached him, he reached out and stroked her gloved arm and pulled her up onto the pedestal next to him. “You look…you look amazing.” He whispered.
“Ah, and here I was sure I had found a guy who wasn’t so shallow.” Annette tried to smirk, but the sheer happiness of the day didn’t allow it. She couldn’t contain her beaming smile.
“Oh trust me,” Ryan laughed. “I’m not. After all, what other girl would be so sarcastic at the alter?”
Annette clasped his hands tight. “You know me so well.”
Their exchange was interrupted by the priest, though neither listened as they stared at each other, a silent conversation taking place. Finally, the priest asked Annette to say the vows she had been working since the day Ryan proposed.
“Ryan…it’s amazing that for years, we were so close, yet so far away. It’s even more amazing that we finally got together when I had finally given up hope to ever have someone love my ridiculous ways. But now I know…” Annette tugged off her glove and reached up to touch his face. “Now I know…I just hadn’t met you yet.”
THE END
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Feb 8, 2011 15:00:06 GMT -5
awwww that was beautiful!!!! i absolutely LOVED it!!!! now u HAVE to do an epilogue or a sequel!!!! this was amazing!!!!
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Post by peri38 on Feb 8, 2011 17:25:30 GMT -5
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Post by CelticPrincess24 on Feb 8, 2011 19:19:25 GMT -5
AWWWWWW THAT WAS AMAZINGLY AWESOME, IT WAS SWEET, SAD(only a little) AND EVERYTHING!!!!! GREAT JOB!
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Post by Deleted on Feb 8, 2011 21:05:10 GMT -5
Thanks everyone!!! And sad? In this post? How so? LOL
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Post by CelticPrincess24 on Feb 8, 2011 21:23:42 GMT -5
Well, when annette was crying and being in love with him, and he not really knowing it til the end! yeah I guess it wasn't too sad, I was just being weird!LOL sorry about that.
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Post by laurenne on Feb 8, 2011 21:34:42 GMT -5
Awww, I loved the ending.
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Post by celticbear on Feb 8, 2011 22:12:13 GMT -5
FURB! I LOVE HOW YOU ENDED THIS STORY! YOU MUST EITHER DO A SEQUEL OR AT LEAST GIVE US AN EPILOUGE! LOVE YOUR STORIES! YOU ARE A GREAT WRITTER! KEEP THESE STOIRES AND YOUR FUNNY ONE-SHOTS COMING!
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Post by Deleted on Feb 8, 2011 22:36:04 GMT -5
Thanks again every one! As for the sequel...it took me months to write all thirteen pages of this! LOL! But I'm open to suggestions. Care to tell?
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Post by Deleted on Feb 9, 2011 12:29:24 GMT -5
Seriously y'all, I'm open to a sequel, but you gotta toss a dog a bone here. What would you like to see?
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Post by CelticLass91 on Feb 9, 2011 13:02:57 GMT -5
I loved, Loved, LOVEEED it! You did great with the ending my Furb friend!
Lets see...You can do a sequal perhaps where she is pregnant and the story goes around the months where she carries... Or you could do one on another lad and bring the characters from this one into it... just suggestions. You did great on this one!!!
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