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Post by orinocoflow on Aug 12, 2010 18:11:30 GMT -5
and comments...
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shaybo
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Post by shaybo on Aug 12, 2010 22:01:41 GMT -5
Me likee.
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Post by orinocoflow on Aug 12, 2010 22:57:17 GMT -5
ok, got one...
if you think this story is a no-go, just say so, cuz i am definitely not clocking in the reads.
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Post by orinocoflow on Aug 13, 2010 19:19:00 GMT -5
Paul was dreading the coming of the night.
What would happen to him? Would he really turn into something? How painful was it going to be? These questions raced through his mind while he paced the room.
Unable to stand it any longer, he grabbed the clothes and left the house, pausing only to put them into a bag and tell Dominique that he was going out for the night and was not sure when he was going to be back. She gave him a long, concerned look, but just wished him good luck and to be safe.
Outside, he got on the bike, gunned the motor, and flew into the street. Once there, however, he realized that he still did not have a helmet, and one had not come with the clothes. Forcing himself to slow down, he glided down the road, itching to be out of town so that he could see just how fast the bike could go.
Just as he was about to leave the town, however, he stopped and changed into the clothes. Inhaling the smell of clean leather, he got back on and stashed the bag in the bushes, making a note to come back for it.
I’m going to need some saddle bags on this bike, he thought, driving away.
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Post by orinocoflow on Aug 13, 2010 19:20:22 GMT -5
ok, if i dont get enough reads in, im just going to drop this story.
so if you think this story is boring, just say so, true?
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Post by orinocoflow on Aug 13, 2010 19:45:36 GMT -5
grrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
i guess that i will summarize the rest and post summary tmrw.
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Post by CelticLass91 on Aug 13, 2010 21:19:04 GMT -5
yeah! I want more!!!
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Post by CelticLass91 on Aug 13, 2010 21:21:04 GMT -5
yeah! I want more!!!
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Post by Deleted on Aug 14, 2010 9:55:11 GMT -5
i want more to
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Post by orinocoflow on Aug 16, 2010 12:10:34 GMT -5
ok, when i get over writers block ill update.
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Post by CelticLass91 on Aug 16, 2010 12:49:08 GMT -5
sweeeeet!
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Post by celticbear on Aug 17, 2010 22:16:48 GMT -5
Ira, don't give up, this story is good! Keep writing it.
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shaybo
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Post by shaybo on Aug 19, 2010 20:08:02 GMT -5
I like it. It's very good. Ghost Riders in the Sky.
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Post by orinocoflow on Aug 19, 2010 23:55:39 GMT -5
Ghost Riders in the Sky?
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Post by orinocoflow on Sept 1, 2010 22:04:53 GMT -5
readers,
if you have seen the movie, you will know the basic plotline. i have written it out, but i dont think i want to post it for a few reasons. basically, it is sort of similar to the movie, with a different cast and different reasons for the Rider, but otherwise similar. the ending is different, and i am still working on that, but i'm still not sure if i want the rest posted.
I'll keep you in the loop, orinocoflow
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