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Post by meg_cahill21 on Oct 3, 2010 11:21:58 GMT -5
dude u have to write more!!!!! this is soooooooooo good
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glamgirlsg
Fantastic Fan
I am an author, annoy me and you die in my novel!
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Post by glamgirlsg on Oct 23, 2010 1:14:29 GMT -5
Yes please do! Write more.
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Post by damians1stluver on Nov 14, 2010 12:17:39 GMT -5
ok so i swear on my life im writing right now and that i WILL update tonight! im sorry life has been really busy and a lot of drama but ummmm ya i promise update tonight and if i forget message me a ton!!!! haha im so sorry! But trust me your wait gets you a ton of story tonight!
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Post by damians1stluver on Nov 16, 2010 0:12:25 GMT -5
sorry this took FOREVER im really sorry like i said life has been insane and ask anyone theyll tell you but anywho here is the ending for this story ill have a sequal soon hope you like it Cindy’s POV I slipped back into the darkness. It was just me and Damian in a room. I didn’t want him to look at me. I looked worse in this dream. I kept running away from him. Why was I running from him in this dream. I love him love means even in the worse conditions they still love you doesn’t it? I knew now that Damian must love me. The sun slowly rose and through my eyelids I could see the red glare. I opened my eyes to find Damian coloring in my coloring book. I giggled and he looked up at me. “Don’t judge.” We must have sat there laughing for a while. It was finally a ray of hope that things were going to be ok. ONE WEEK LATER Finally I was allowed to go home, on my Birthday. It was the biggest relief I had in the last week besides being alive. Our trip to Ireland was being postponed for another week but Damian agreed and made arrangements to stay with me till I was better and we could go together. I was still in a lot of pain but it seemed every time Damian was with me there was littler or close to no pain. We walked in the door and my parents were cooking ALL my favorite foods. There were some gifts on the mantle. I was assuming they were mine considering it was my birthday. I thought your 18th birthday was supposed to be the day of freedom, the day every young child looked forward to. Mine wasn’t like that. We ended up walking in the door at 5 pm. From the minute I walked in it was obvious they were babying me. Registering to my every need. We ate some food and then my mom brought some presents in. I opened them all in the order my mom gave the packages to me. A sweater from my aunt, clothes, shoes, makeup, the usual from my parents and gift cards from other various family members. We ate cake and talked for a little while before I decided I was tired and ready to go to bed. Damian so kindly carried me up the stairs and set me in my bed. He got me some PJ’s and slowly started walking out so I could get changed. Before he did he turned and took something out of his jacket pocket. He told me to close my eyes. I did and he reached around my neck. He snapped a chain together and told me to look. I looked down and hanging gently on my neck was a shiny silver necklace that had I’ll never forget engraved in it along with the date we met. I started crying and kissed him gently. He said goodnight and hugged me and walked out shutting the door behind him. Damians POV I was so happy. She seemed to love the necklace. It was a hard choice to make. I was hoping that this was a new start for us. I wanted her to be with me forever and always. She was truly my one and only girl. I had thought about a proposal but thinking about it seemed like I was moving the relationship to fast and wanted more from her. I walked downstairs and thanked her parents and said good night. I grabbed my suitcase and walked up to the guest room and started putting my stuff into the closet and drawers. Ten minutes later I found myself laying in the bed deep in the darkness of sleep. The next few days flew we found ourselves at the doctor’s office often till they finally gave us the all clear to fly. The morning of we were running around packing the rest of our stuff and getting it in the car. Her parents said goodbye and I helped her in the car. We drove the long drive to the airport. “ You excited to finally be going home?” She asked me “ Of course but, you were worth staying for longer” “ Damian I have a question to ask you... could you answer truthfully?” I hesitated wondering what question this could be. I was assuming the worst. “ Of course love anything” “ Do you really LOVE me or are you just experimenting to see if it’s meant to be from when we were little?” I couldn’t believe she was really asking this question from me. “ I really truthfully love you and think we were meant to be.” I answered as truthfully and honestly as I could. “ Why?” “ I’ve just been hurt a lot and want to make sure that this isn’t another one of those.” “Cindy, I know you’ve been through those kinds of relationships trust me I know. I’m famous girls follow me around and stalk me! I’ve been through those relationships too but this isn’t like any of them. This is going to be different and will work I just know it.” The rest if the ride was fairly quiet only saying a few things every now and again. We finally got to the airport and I took out the luggage I parked her car and let her stay in the car while I checked in and got the luggage in. I came back and helped get the carryons out. We walked into the line for security and got out our passports and boarding tickets. We were ready for the new adventures. The adventures that would show the world is small after all.
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Post by CelticLass91 on Nov 16, 2010 0:28:49 GMT -5
**Sniffles and cries** Oh it was so beautiful.... *wipes tears away* Thanks so much for the story!! It was great! lol
I so can't wait for the sequal! ;D
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Nov 16, 2010 17:39:28 GMT -5
amazing!!!!!!!! i need u to write a sequel!!!! please!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by celticbear on Nov 16, 2010 21:56:52 GMT -5
I love how this ended! YOU HAVE TO WRITE THE SEQUEL! PLEASE WITH A CHERRY AND SUGAR ON TOP!
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Post by Myna Chan on Nov 17, 2010 15:43:25 GMT -5
Awww...how cute!! THANKS! I loved it and can't wait for more!
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Post by damians1stluver on Nov 22, 2010 23:30:09 GMT -5
So since you guys waited so long heres an update.... yes this is the "sequal" but im just going to put it up with this one cause its easy and it fits right in ENJOY and i will try to start updating often like i used to! COMMENT!!! love you Cindy’s POV I opened my eyes to an amazing sight. I had fallen asleep on the plane. I had never done that. I must have been exhausted. The plane was slowly descending and I could see all the beautiful green land. The plane landed and we taxied in. I turned towards Damian. “ Did I really sleep that long?” “ Yes dear, you did.” We waited till we had the all clear and got off the plane. Damian was a gentleman and helped me around. We walked down to get our bags. Damian’s parents were picking us up so we stood and looked for them. They came around the bend not 5 minutes after we got out. Damian’s parents got out of the car and hugged him. “ Oh Cindy, you’ve grown up so much” His mom said as she gave me a tight hug. Damian’s dad gave me a hug too “Welcome back.” “Thank you Mr. McGinty” Damian and his dad put the luggage in the back. Damian opened the door for me and I slid in the car. We began the way back to his house for dinner. About 3 hours later we finally arrived at Damian’s house. It was beautiful. Just the way I remembered it. I walked in the door way and suddenly memories flew back too fast. I quickly remembered our childhood. I remembered walking into his house almost everyday. Those were the old days. Damian helped me in the rest of the house. His dad and mom followed behind with the luggage. Mrs. McGinty headed into the kitchen to start making dinner. She had so considerately invited my grandma to come over for dinner. I walked into the kitchen. “ Mrs. McGinty do you want some help?” “ No thank you sweetie… but I’d love a talking partner” I laughed a little at her. I sat in the kitchen table chair. Damian’s POV We were finally home. Cindy went to the kitchen with my mom while I sat down and watched a game of footy with my dad. “ So she as sweet as she was when we first met her?” he asked. I stared at him for a few seconds in shock over the fact he just had asked me that question. “ Of course she is dad, I’m really starting to fall for her. Hard.” He laughed and turned back to the game. I thought about his question in my head till I heard the doorbell ring. “ I’ll get it” I stood up and walked to the door.” Cindy’s POV “ How’s America been for you?” she asked “ It’s beautiful. So many places to go but it hasn’t ever been the same as here” “ How’s your family? I heard there’s been a new addition since we saw you.” “ Yes there has. He’s a wonderful, smart, little boy.” She looked at me proudly. “ I heard you and Damian have a thing too, you didn’t just come as friends” She was the cool mom you always wanted to have. I told her how wonderful Damian was and all he had done for me. She just smiled and cooked while I ranted. I heard the doorbell and stood to go get it. Damian came running and totally hit me. We sat on the floor and laughed. He opened the door while I was still on the floor laughing.
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Post by CelticLass91 on Nov 22, 2010 23:37:40 GMT -5
;D Yeeeeeoooow! You updated, finely!!! Thanks! It. was. great! Now! Who could be at the door?
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Post by celticbear on Nov 22, 2010 23:37:41 GMT -5
D1L! This was a wonderful update! I love how Damo's parents welcomed Cindy back into the fold like no time at all had passed! I also love how the Parents questioned them about thier relationship. I also love how Cindy and Damo knocked each other down trying to answer the door!LOL! I wonder who is at the door? PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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Post by Myna Chan on Nov 23, 2010 0:56:07 GMT -5
Gee, who could be at the door! LOVE it! Can't wait for more!
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Post by danigirl21 on Nov 27, 2010 15:00:58 GMT -5
First of all- I love the part about Damo coloring. Hmm. . . I bet HE can say crayon also. . . you need to update, love *pokes* you say I'M bad at updating!!
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Post by meg_cahill21 on Nov 27, 2010 18:41:27 GMT -5
amazing, now UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by damians1stluver on Dec 1, 2010 18:32:38 GMT -5
so heres an update. if theres comments tonight then i might update later too... ya i was bored at school and wrote SO COMMENT AWAY! Cindy POV I looked up to see it was just my grandma. Damian and I started laughing all over again over the fact we ran to the door for my grandma. Damian invited her inside and she went to the kitchen with Damian’s mom. Damian took my hand and we ran up to his room. We sat on the bed trying not to crack up from the door incident again. “So my mom questioned you?” Damian asked me. “A little. I’ve really missed her. I forgot how sweet and homely she was.” “Ya she’s awesome” “Pretty much.” “CINDY. DAMIAN. DINNER” Damian’s mom yelled up. We both laughed and raced down the stairs. I biffed it but Damian was there to catch me. We started laughing again and walked hand in hand to the dinner table. I let go of his hand and went to hug my grandma. I returned to the other side of the table and Damian had pulled the chair out for me. I sat and he pushed it in and then he sat next to me. He took my hand under the table and I couldn’t help not to let out a little giggle. Mrs. McGinty made a lovely dinner. Hunter’s pie. Since I had moved back my mom tried also to stop making Irish meals, her attempt to “Americanize” us. Mr. McGinty started the whole conversation, after dinner we had some delicious Irish glazed tea cake. We talked and then ended up going into the family room to watch a movie. We watched a movie. I snuggled up with Damian on the little chair while the others sat on the long couch. Jet lag finally set in and I found my eyes suddenly closing. The last thing I felt was Damian’s arm wrapping around me. Damian’s POV I was really into this movie, it had always been one of my favorites. Cindy laid her head on my shoulder. I could tell she had a cold case of jet lag. I wrapped my arm around her and she crashed. My mom whispered “Time change disease.” I laughed “It’s called jet lag mum.” By the end of the movie I was also asleep. I drifted off to the end of one of the best days of my life. Cindy’s POV I woke up to find we had slept on the couch all night. I moved my head off Damian’s shoulder and he freaked out and woke up. After some laughter he asked if I wanted some breakfast. I said yes and we walked to the kitchen, in there we found his mom already working on making breakfast. She was making everything she could think of. Or as it’s called the “Irish breakfast”. I was realizing on this trip how much I really missed Ireland and everything with it. “Did you guys sleep well?” Mrs. McGinty asked. We both replied yes at the same time. And continued our laughing streak. “Your grandmother went home last night. I told her you were welcome to stay however long you wanted to and that she was just a phone call away when you need her.” I turned to Damian and he winked. I thought to myself that I’d never overcome his charm. “Thank you Mrs. McGinty you’ve been amazing through this all.” I said. “Oh honey no need to thank me, your practically family to us.” Right then, my phone rang. “Excuse me.”
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