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Post by Deleted on Mar 19, 2011 23:08:38 GMT -5
Keith smiled at Treena and kissed her of course i forgive you. Treena beamed Keith took her hands in his Treena i love you and i love laurellie and i really want this relationship to work out as much as you do Keith then reached into his back pocket and pulled out a little box and knelt down on one knee a small engagement ring was inside
will you marry me? and let me become the father of that special little baby girl?
Treena looked down at him with tears in her eyes and was about to get down on one knee with him when suddenly
BANG BANG BANG!
TREENA? Keith gasped TREENA? the doctors came rushing into the room and tried to resusitate her... but it was too late! Keith looked out the window and saw stephen run away but the cops caught him and he was by far under arrest.
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Post by celticbear on Mar 20, 2011 19:50:30 GMT -5
Not So Fast HC! I'm not Dead yet!
Just when the Doctors where about to give up on me, I responded to their life saving efforts! Keith was relieved! They took me to surgery to remove the Bullets. The surgery was successful! While I was in Surgery everybody was pacing the waiting room and trying to figure out how my Brother Steven found out about me,Keith and the Baby!
Hours latter I woke up in my private room! The first person I saw was Keith holding our precious little girl! I asked Keith what happened to me!
Sorry for the Cliff Hanger everybody! HC NICE TRY OF KILLING ME OFF! NO WAY WAS I GOING TO LET YOU NOT HAVE ME AND KEITH GET MARRIED AND RAISE LAURA!
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Post by celticbear on Mar 21, 2011 0:03:32 GMT -5
HC! I'll Make A Deal With You! You Let Me Live in Thunder Baby! And I Promise to Stick To Guys Only In Baby Love! What Do You Say, Do We Have A Deal?
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Post by Deleted on Mar 23, 2011 22:55:59 GMT -5
Treena stared at Keith and Laurelie and smiled, "I came back for the two of you." Keith smiled, "I knew you would. It was touch and go for a while there, but then it was like you started to fight and there was no stopping you from coming back to us." He looked at Treena and then Laurelie and knew that he was looking at his future, his loves, and the reason for his life's work. A new song started to form in his mind. George and the guys walked into the room very quietly as they were afraid of waking Treena, not realizing she was already awake. They all started cheering at once when they saw that she was awake. "Gentlemen!" said a nurse running into the room, "Need I remind you that this is a hospital? Please keep your voices down." "Yes ma'am," said the guys sheepishly. "So what's the plan?" asked George. He and the guys had been talking about what would happen if Treena pulled through. They were all wondering if Keith would stay in the group now that he had a family. "Treena and I have been talking," said Keith. "With all that has happened in such a short amount of time, we're going to put off the wedding a bit." There was a collective groan from all of the guys. "Why?" asked Damien. "It seems to me that all three of you have been shown how short life is. Why put the wedding off? Why not get married right now?" asked Damien excitedly. Keith and Treena looked at each other. Laurelie looked at both of them and seemed to understand that this was a very important moment. She reached up and touched Keith's face with one hand and Treena's face with another. They both looked down at her and smiled. "I love you Keith," said Treena. "I love Laurelie. I want to spend the rest of my life with you raising her as our daughter." Keith looked at both of them and a beautiful smile appeared and his eyes seemed to glow with an unfathomable expression, "You are such a part of me, Treena, and it seems like Laurelie is already my daughter in so many ways. I don't want to put off the wedding any longer. It seems like all the reasons we discussed earlier just aren't as important as being a family. "Oh yes," exclaimed Treena. They leaned towards each other and shared a gentle kiss. Right then, Laurelie let out a happy giggle and reached up and touched both of them again. They both laughed and each bent down and kissed her cheeks. The guys let out quiet whoops of laughter and cheer. "Someone go find the hospital priest. We're going to have a wedding!" said George. Damien ran out of the room and came back a while later with a priest in tow. The nurses all wanted to be a part of the ceremony and brought flowers and mylar balloons into the room. "Dearly beloved," began the priest. The ceremony took very little time. The only change to the vows was that both Treena and Keith held Laurelie between them and intoned, "Our angel, we promised to be the best parents that we can to you and to always love you as we love each other - without end and forever." The priest cleared his voice and said, "I now pronounce you husband and wife!" Everyone - including the nurses - cheered for the new couple and their very special daughter.
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Post by celticbear on Mar 23, 2011 23:24:48 GMT -5
HC! I absolutley LOVE you for this Update! I have tears of Joy in my eyes as I type this comment! I don't know how I'm going to top this Update! But I'll Try!
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Post by Deleted on Mar 26, 2011 15:15:30 GMT -5
Ready to head home? Keith asked Treena and Laurelie Treena nodded and smiled but laurelie didn't respond then all of a sudden she just started coughing and wheezing and she started turning blue! the lads' eyebrows shot up at this LAURELIE?!?! LAURELIE? ?? OH GOD NO!!!!! SOMEBODY CALL THE NURSE!!!!! BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!! LAURELIE!!!!!!!!!! OH MY GOD NO NO NURSE HELLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLPPPPPPPPPP!!! Keith quickly scooped laurelie up in his arms and ran as fast as he could to the nurses station! BUT NO ONE WAS THERE!!!!!!!!!! OK ok just keep checking pulse keith told himself trying not to panic george then came running with a thermometer in hand and started taking her temp with all the other lads crowded around laurelie keith then seeing that the temprature was dropped down to 54.8 immediately started CPR on her! cliffys god love'm!
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Post by celticbear on Mar 29, 2011 22:04:55 GMT -5
I know HC! But I'm got Writers Block right now! I'll try to shake it before the weekend!
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Post by Deleted on Apr 2, 2011 18:41:44 GMT -5
CB dudette over your writer's block yet? i'm getting impatient here!
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Post by celticbear on Apr 2, 2011 20:56:08 GMT -5
While Keith was doing CPR on Laurellie I ran out of the room looking for a doctor and run smack dab into one very Angry Sharon! I look at Sharon and just continue on my way! I find Dr. Lawerence and tell him what has happened and what Keith is doing! Dr. Lawerence tells me Keith is doing the right thing!
I run back to my room right past a confused Sharon! Dr. Lawrence and a medical team are right behind me!
Me: Keith! Any Change! Dr. Lawrence and the medical team are on their way and Sharon is here and she does not look very happy!
Keith: No Change! Darn! WE ARE IN SO MUCH TROUBLE WITH SHARON! REMEMBER WE DID THE SHOW HERE IN HOUSTON BUT SHARON HAD TO REARRANGE THE ENTIRE REST OF THE TOUR BECAUSE OF LAURELLIE!
Me: Keith you mean Sharon has no Idea what has happened since Saturday November 13th!
Keith: No!
Just then the Dr.Lawrence and his team arrive and shoo me and Keith out the door to face one VERY ANGRY,CONFUSED SHARON!
Okay everybody don't shoot me! It seems that leaving you guys with a cliffy is really starting to grow on Me!
HC your turn!
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Post by Deleted on Apr 4, 2011 14:26:16 GMT -5
GOOD WORK THERE MATEY NOW YOU HAVE TO UPDATE BABY LOVE!
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Post by celticbear on Apr 4, 2011 21:36:28 GMT -5
Will Do! Hc! Your Turn To Update Thunder Baby! When you are ready!
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Post by Deleted on May 7, 2011 18:25:13 GMT -5
Dr. Lawrence came out to talk with Keith and Treena, who were pacing in the waiting room. "I don't know why Laurelie keeps having these drastic and sudden drops in temperature. We're going to have to keep her admitted until we can figure it out. We have her stabilized for now." said Dr. Lawrence. "I just feel so helpless," said Treena. "It's like every time we take a step towards the door, another road comes up." Treena began to cry softly and turned into Keith's arms.
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Post by Deleted on May 7, 2011 18:27:50 GMT -5
this is turning out to be an episode of "mystery diagnosis"
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Post by celticthunder1510 on May 7, 2011 18:54:25 GMT -5
Well at least its not a Diagnosis Murder episode! Holy cricket! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by celticbear on May 7, 2011 21:17:35 GMT -5
HC! you would have to leave it up to me to write the scene where everything is revealed to Sharon!
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