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Post by pfieffer on Jan 18, 2010 20:43:15 GMT -5
"Twilight." "Shush." Damian hit Paul on the arm. The movie was going for a while, "I would make a better Edward than him." Paul commented. "Paul, shut it." Damian said, "And would you really want to play a guy who is three hundred years old." "Right." Paul answered and was quiet until, "No one has muscles like those! Did he have to take his shirt off?!?!" "Paul. SHUT YOUR MOUTH!" Damian yelled. Paul remained quiet. Then the Italy scene, "I AM BLIND!!! HE HAS BLINDED ME!" Paul yelled. This time Damian agreed, because he laughed. Finally the move ended, "That was torture, never again am I going to a movie with you."
DUN DUN DUN who said it LOL
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Post by pfieffer on Mar 19, 2010 0:50:17 GMT -5
i know it has been a while... cakey i make a little sort of mention of you LOL
Paul said, he thought Damian was a horrible person to go see a movie with. "What?!? You were the one moanin' and groanin' the entire time. It is no wonder it took Dominique so long to say yes to being your girl freind, she did not want to listen to you complain about everything in the movie." Damian argued. "Oh don't get me started. What about you only taking your girlfriend to little kids movies." "It ain't my fault they enjoy them. I mean Chronicals of Narnia was great, they just need to make a movie about narwalls now, and have them in sweaters like the chipmunks." Paul did not understand a word Damian had just said. Paul was certain Damian had spoken English, maybe it was his accent or maybe it was the fact that the Damian McGinty language had not yet been deciphered, "Um What?" Paul asked. Damian stuck his tounge out, as the got to the appartment. Their was a note on the door. "Uh, Paul read this." Damian said quickly reading it and handing it to Paul.
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Post by celticbear on Jul 21, 2010 21:28:31 GMT -5
Pfieffer! I'm hooked! I can't wait till the next update to see what the note says. So update soon!
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Post by lantisf on Jul 23, 2010 9:27:12 GMT -5
More please! Me likey!
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Post by orinocoflow on Dec 11, 2010 2:40:16 GMT -5
is this done?
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Post by orinocoflow on Dec 11, 2010 2:40:40 GMT -5
no, its not!!! please finish this! what does the note say?
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Post by pfieffer on Dec 22, 2010 1:24:17 GMT -5
(sorry i have held out on y'all long enough however this post will be short since my writers block is not completely cured)
Paul read the note. Shock came to his mind. "Me and my stupid decisions. I just had to take that walk." "I'm sorry Paul." Damian said putting a hand on his shoulder. The eviction notice was as clear as day. Paul had no idea why he was being evicted. It had to be a joke, a prank. But the note looked so official. "You've always said you're up for adventure." Damian tried to encourage. Paul crumpled the note. "I'm just gonna have to go down their and give them a peice of my mind. Their supposed to warn me or something aren't they? Plus I know I have payed my rent, I haven't been noisy, even with you here. I've done everything right." he wanted to cry, but he couldn't do that infront of Damian. He began to walk to the office of the owner of the appartment complex, and like a puppy Damian followed. "Ya know what Damo," He said. "This is one walk I never wanted to take." "I don't think anyone wants to take it." Damian told him. They walked outside, their hands clasping the wrought iron banister to the concrete steps. They made their way across the sidewalk, still in their pyjamma's and came to the brown oak door of the owner of the complex. Paul wrapped the door hard, three times, and stood back waiting for it to open. When it did open, Paul wanted to scream.
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Post by orinocoflow on Dec 22, 2010 20:01:41 GMT -5
YES! finally! ...and you just had to give us a cliffhanger, eh? UPDATE!!!
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Post by celticbear on Dec 22, 2010 23:54:23 GMT -5
I agree with Ori! you finally Update! I don't mind that it is short Pfieffer! But did you have to leave us with a CLIFFHANGER! PLEASE GET OVER YOUR WRITERS BLOCK AND GIVE US A LONGER UPDATE!
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