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Post by Deleted on Feb 21, 2012 19:17:52 GMT -5
Love it
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Post by celticbear on Feb 21, 2012 21:32:26 GMT -5
Lopp! Another great Update! Poor Neil! I hope he opens up more with Damo as time goes by!
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Post by onyxfyrefly on Feb 21, 2012 21:37:53 GMT -5
Poor Neil! I can't wait to see what happens!
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Post by HburgEagle44 on Feb 21, 2012 22:38:03 GMT -5
Oh Neil has communication issues.. interesting. Update soon, I want to know what's going on... lol : )
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Post by orinocoflow on Feb 22, 2012 14:25:23 GMT -5
you! update! fast! btw, when in the beginning ryan said "what no one else gets sick with" or something along those lines, i was under the impression that paul was the one exception, that everyone got this and died but paul was immune to it when he should have had it, and that is why he is in the hospital. anywho, update soon PLEASE!
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Loppiainen
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Post by Loppiainen on Feb 22, 2012 17:09:08 GMT -5
Oh, dear. That wasn't the intent, but I certainly see where the confusion came from. "Killing everyone else" was meant in a more metaphorical way, in the sense that Paul's illness is affecting everyone else emotionally.
I hope that clears things up! And of course, thanks for reading. : )
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Loppiainen
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Post by Loppiainen on Feb 22, 2012 23:36:20 GMT -5
Last update! I'm actually sad that this one's done. I think I'm going to miss it a bit. XD ------------------------------ There went a long period of time during which Damian could not see Paul. The nurses kept asking him to leave. ***** After finally having been able to visit Paul again, Damian could see that he was getting better. He was speaking more, and he could keep his eyes open for longer. It was at that point that Damian could finally be assured that Paul was going to live. ***** Two and a half weeks after Damian's sixteenth birthday, Paul was discharged from the hospital. There'd been a party to celebrate. Dominique was there, as was Neil. Even Ryan- as bitter as he had previously been- had come. It was wonderful, really. And it was the happiest anyone had been in months. The first words uttered at the party had, much to everyone's surprise (and joy, for that matter), belonged to Neil: "Missed you, Paul" Needless to say, everyone else felt the same. fin. ------------------------------ I think it's safe to say that I'm the king of bad endings. I'm terrible at closing stories. It just never works out for me, haha. But hopefully, this is to your liking. Thanks everyone for reading! Hopefully I can write a oneshot soon- just to keep the stories coming for you all. : )
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Post by HburgEagle44 on Feb 23, 2012 1:27:18 GMT -5
:') so sweet and sad... Neil was the one to talk. HOW CUTE. :') I wanna say update, but I can't. : ( so... update Absent Colours? xD Nice job on this one. : )
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Post by onyxfyrefly on Feb 23, 2012 8:56:46 GMT -5
This was great and I'm sad to see it end! I loved that Neil was the first one to speak!
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Post by CelticPrincess24 on Feb 23, 2012 14:16:54 GMT -5
Aww! Such a sweet ending! <3 I liked it a lot! Good job on the story. Heh, don't worry. I'm really bad at ending stories too, but I like the way you ended yours.
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Post by celticbear on Feb 23, 2012 21:50:31 GMT -5
Lopp! Sometimes it is hard to end a story on a high note! But you did a great job with ending this one! LOVE THAT IT WAS NEIL WHO HAD THE LAST WORD! Now be a good Nox Boy and update your other stories!
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