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Post by celticbear on Nov 29, 2011 23:52:04 GMT -5
Thanks for link Lopp! But I'll pass! I'll wait with baited breath for each of your updates here on nox! WOW! What a way to bring George and Neil into the story! Love the scary warning Keith gave them about knowing Neil's name! Shame on Ryan for scaring poor Daniel! Hey Lopp! I do believe Emmet has yet to make an apperance!
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Post by Loppiainen on Nov 29, 2011 23:54:50 GMT -5
Much thanks for reading. : )
And don't worry about Emmet, I'm making plans for his appearance! : D
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Post by GalwayGirl on Nov 30, 2011 1:00:30 GMT -5
Hmmmm may or may not check it out, think I'll wait for now! Can't wait to see what you come up with for Emmet!! Update when you can of course!
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Post by CelticPrincess24 on Nov 30, 2011 13:24:39 GMT -5
hehe I looked! I couldn't help myself.. I just had to!! You shouldn't have tempted me! lol Ooh yeah, I can't wait to see what you come up for Emmet either!
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Post by Loppiainen on Dec 1, 2011 0:41:14 GMT -5
So basically, I'm sitting here with OpenOffice up, just staring at my computer screen, because I can't decide what I want to do with the next chapter. I was thinking of switching the point-of-view to Ryan's for part of it, because there's something that I want to bring up, but in the scene, Damian wouldn't be present. But it's "The Diary of Damian McGinty", so... I don't know if it would work.
What do you all think? Would one chapter (maybe less) in Ryan's POV be all right?
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Post by DaughterofOphelia on Dec 1, 2011 1:31:27 GMT -5
I think it would be cool
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Post by CelticPrincess24 on Dec 1, 2011 19:41:01 GMT -5
I think it would be good. You know, I nice change in the story. ;D
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Post by celticbear on Dec 1, 2011 21:57:52 GMT -5
Go for it Lopp! Every good story needs a wee break from the main characters point of view!
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Post by orinocoflow on Dec 1, 2011 22:04:20 GMT -5
paul has a headache? wonder if that's step one of hte curse...update soon plesae!
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Post by Loppiainen on Dec 2, 2011 23:08:18 GMT -5
Currently working on this!! It'll be a oneshot, and kind of short, but I had sudden inspiration after watching The Eleventh Hour for about the fifth time.
Only problem is, I can't decide who should take the role of the Doctor, and who should be the companion. In my head I've got Ryan as the Doctor, and Paul as the companion. But I also really like Paul as the Doctor, and Damian as the companion. But because you're the readers, not me, I want to know which pair you all like better. : )
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Post by HburgEagle44 on Dec 2, 2011 23:13:52 GMT -5
haha that someone else wouldn't happen to be me, would it? haha um..... I think... I don't know who I would like to be Doctor/companion!! By the way: favorite YouTube video EVER: www.youtube.com/watch?v=RrfZNjxjkjo you'll understand if you've seen Doctor Who just a random side note. Now, UPDATE.
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Post by CelticPrincess24 on Dec 4, 2011 18:30:27 GMT -5
Hmm... I like the idea of Paul and Damian... Paul seems more like Doctor material to me.
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Post by Loppiainen on Dec 4, 2011 20:18:53 GMT -5
"A'right. Deal."
Ha. Biggest lie Ryan had ever told. There was no way he was just going to give up. Curse or no curse, he was determined to learn that man's name.
"I've got an idea!" Ryan shouted, bounding into his and Paul's room before slamming the door shut.
"Oh, really?" Paul, who was sitting cross-legged in his bunk, said indifferently.
Ryan stopped.
"You don't seem very excited," He frowned. "I thought you wanted to know that guy's name, too."
"I did," Paul shrugged. "But I'm pretty useless right now. All I can do is read minds, and that hasn't really worked out. So, I'm gonna leave it to you. Now, what's your idea?"
"Right, well. I figured this guy has to have some dead relatives. I was thinkin' I could find them somehow, and ask them what his name is."
Paul laughed.
"Aye, right. 'Cos if I can't get into his head, you're definitely gonna be able to have a little chat with Mister and Missus Byrne, and just ask them wha--"
"Hold on!" Ryan interrupted him. "You just said-- Paul, did you hear what you just said?"
Paul thought for a moment. Then it hit him.
"Woah," He breathed.
"I thought you were locked out of his mind, or somethin'!" Ryan said.
"So did I! Unless--"
"Unless what?" Ryan asked.
"Unless," Paul continued. "He's sleeping!"
"What do you mean?" Ryan's eyes narrowed.
"I mean that earlier, he was probably keeping me out intentionally. He knew I was trying to get in, but he wouldn't let me. But if he lets his guard down, like if he's sleeping--"
"...Then you can get in!" Ryan finished.
"Precisely."
"Oh, you're a genius!" Ryan shouted, fighting the urge to hug the other man.
"I know," Paul smirked. "All in a day's work, really."
To them, it had all seemed like a big achievement.
But they had no idea what they'd set into motion.
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That awkward author moment when you want to yell at the characters you're writing, because they just did the stupidest thing they could have possibly done...
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Post by celticbear on Dec 4, 2011 21:36:23 GMT -5
Lopp! I agree with you! What just happen in that room is the stupidest thing those two have done so far! This Idea of getting into Neil's head while he's sleeping is going to backfire big time!
And I also Agree for your CT/Doctor Who one shot it needs to be Paul and Damo!
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Post by orinocoflow on Dec 4, 2011 23:09:40 GMT -5
lol, i have had that a few times and it's rather funny yelling at your characters, "No, DONT DO IT!" and then realizing that their fate is in your hands...anywho
update soon please!
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